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Commander Indigo?

 

Anyways, I read through what I've missed and I see I've missed a LOT. Making this RP a fanfic will be quite the challenge. If we can pull this off right, it might be one of the most popular fics on FIMfiction!


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How do we say indigo's title?

 

I have no idea. I invisioned Indigo as being Sule's right hand, but I don't know of any corresponding real-world titles that reflect that. (I referred to him as Sule's "ancient" in reference to Shakespeare's Othello).

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I have no idea. I invisioned Indigo as being Sule's right hand, but I don't know of any corresponding real-world titles that reflect that. (I referred to him as Sule's "ancient" in reference to Shakespeare's Othello).

 

Judging from the RP, you're an adviser who is also the Malumai military commander.

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I have no idea. I invisioned Indigo as being Sule's right hand, but I don't know of any corresponding real-world titles that reflect that. (I referred to him as Sule's "ancient" in reference to Shakespeare's Othello).

 

So that's where you got the term from. I didn't get that reference. We can worry about that later when we do the Fic. We can just refer to him as his Ancient for now

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So, how much time till you mount the invasion on Chiro-what's it's name?

 

36 hours in their world

 

I have no idea for ours. Most likely we will start the invasion tonight (American time) but that depends on what everypony decides to post. I think Jade wants to work on Indigo and Shiri's relationship a bit first, Midnight needs to do some stuff in the castle, and Sule... I need to think of something for him to do...

 

Do a post with night flash or something if you can. Have him bring the recon info to Sule's tent. He should be there


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36 hours in their world

 

I have no idea for ours. Most likely we will start the invasion tonight (American time) but that depends on what everypony decides to post. I think Jade wants to work on Indigo and Shiri's relationship a bit first, Midnight needs to do some stuff in the castle, and Sule... I need to think of something for him to do...

 

Do a post with night flash or something if you can. Have him bring the recon info to Sule's tent. He should be there

 

An **earlier** post you mean? Alrighty then. I can do it like this, Night Flash brings it to Sule but you get to make up what's inside it since I have only 30 minutes of battery left and the power doesn't come back for another 5 hours.


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An **earlier** post you mean? Alrighty then. I can do it like this, Night Flash brings it to Sule but you get to make up what's inside it since I have only 30 minutes of battery left and the power doesn't come back for another 5 hours.

 

No, dont worry about that, I will just have Sule find it on his own, makes more sense that way

 

 

''I'll do that in a minute. So tell me, how has it been working with the Malumai?'' said Hurricane.

 

how has it been?


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No, dont worry about that, I will just have Sule find it on his own, makes more sense that way

 

 

''I'll do that in a minute. So tell me, how has it been working with the Malumai?'' said Hurricane.

 

how has it been?

 

Not enough time to post, only three minutes of battery left http://mlpforums.com/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.png

 

Well, see you in about 8 hours!


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Attention

 

For tonight (real world) do we want them to start the attack? Or do you want to work on Jade and Shiris' relationship more (i think you should do the second one)

 

 

I going to be trying to do a Sule post about the Super soldiers, but it shouldn't interfere with anything, unless you and shiri are going to talk about them...


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No, let's wait a little bit first.

For tonight (real world) do we want them to start the attack? Or do you want to work on Jade and Shiris' relationship more

 

The second. At least for now.

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No, let's wait a little bit first.

 

 

The second. At least for now.

 

ok then

 

so is indigo going to have (fun) small talk with Shiri in her cage? Isn't she going to take notice that it is in his tent (I cant get over that...)


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ok then

 

so is indigo going to have (fun) small talk with Shiri in her cage? Isn't she going to take notice that it is in his tent (I cant get over that...)

 

Have patience. I'll get to it some day. For now, I just have to deal with writers' block. =P

 

Also, they're not going to sexytimes until much later, so get that thought out of your mind. x3

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Have patience. I'll get to it some day. For now, I just have to deal with writers' block. =P

 

Writers block is for wimps :lol: Just continue their conversation and have shiri explain what she meant when she said she wanted peace

 

Also, they're not going to sexytimes until much later, so get that thought out of your mind. x3

 

 

Thankfully, I wasn't thinking of that. I meant that the interrogation would turn into more of a casual conversation.

 

I got bored and started to read our old OOC and RP posts. It feels strangely nostalgic, and it is cool to see how complex the characters and plot have gotten throughout the RP.

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Thankfully, I wasn't thinking of that. I meant that the interrogation would turn into more of a casual conversation.

 

I got bored and started to read our old OOC and RP posts. It feels strangely nostalgic, and it is cool to see how complex the characters and plot have gotten throughout the RP.

 

The way you said "(fun)" made my mind immediately hit the gutter.

 

I've also noticed something. When we started this RP, many of our characters were nothing like how we initially visualized them. Then with the scolding Shiri gave Sule, Indigo's pessimistic mentality I briefly displayed, where he doesn't actually believe that his cause will actually succeed or his race will be redeemed but he trudges on anyway, actually brings him more in line with how I originally visualized his character.

 

Just something interesting I noticed I did on accident. x3

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My reflections after reading your last post

 

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:lol: :lol: :lol:

 

Anyway, that was really good.

 

 

EDIT: I'm, of course, referring to the RP post, but this works for the OOC one as well

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Edit I was refering to the RP post, but it works well for your OOC post too

 

The way you said "(fun)" made my mind immediately hit the gutter.

 

I've also noticed something. When we started this RP, many of our characters were nothing like how we initially visualized them. Then with the scolding Shiri gave Sule, Indigo's pessimistic mentality I briefly displayed, where he doesn't actually believe that his cause will actually succeed or his race will be redeemed but he trudges on anyway, actually brings him more in line with how I originally visualized his character.

 

Just something interesting I noticed I did on accident. x3

 

Yeah, I noticed that, too.

 

I also like how we proved every english teacher wrong in that we didn't fully plan out a plot line and still made a cool story

 

 

Sule went from being a stoic and intelligent Ruler (as I enviosioned) to a rather insecure, cautious, stressed character.

 

I actually like this, it has given a real representation of what would happen if someone like him was given the huge responsibility of Archon

 

Too much? x3

 

Naw, it was good, but we need to factor out the whole 'dark-side' of going to Equestria with Sule's plans (the good parts of it)

 

meh, trains

 

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ART THOU GOING TO POST-ETH IN THE RP-ETH? (meh, Why not)

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If you've just been ousted from power, are you not going to feel stressed and insecure?

 

I'm seeing a Pansy X Night Flash for some reason.

 

Just as a thought, is private pansy a mare? it might be obvious, but I thought since it wasn't completely clear if Commander Hurricane was a male or female (played by rainbow dash, but was called sir), it wasn't made clear for her.

 

More like he's bitter over the plight of his people, though his sister's death did deeply affect him. Expect a flashback later.

 

 

I'm evil.

 

 

She'll make the comment when they start flirting, which won't start until some time after her mind-control is broken.

 

meh, trains

 

I dunno about that but, I think I might have to kill Night Flash off from this RP if my computer doesn't get fixed. Until I post, can you all go along with the gag 'Night Flash is too busy being drunk to care about the problem at hand'?

 

I think I can make one post right now though.

 

 

Ok, just a thought, is anypony here a good artist and could make some concept art for the RP/fanfic?

 

Attention

 

Look at above words....

 

What do you think of Midnight and Storm getting together?

 

Attention!

 

Attention!

 

Attention!

 

Ok, I just wanted to point out that we need to be careful in killing characters from hearts warming eve, especially because of old age.

 

Let me explain. It is probably true that the characters the Mane 6 played are of very different ages, but we need to actually think that over before we kill them off. We know Clover is around Sule's age, and he isn't that old. Commander hurricane was probably very old, But I think we pointed out that he the trained with Night Flash and Pansy, so shouldn't they be around the same age? We need to work those details out in the fanfic.

 

Killing Pudding Head actually worked well, dont ask me why, it just did.

 

Princess platinum is probably Clover's age, so she needs to not die from old age.

 

Smart Cookie is also probably around Clover/Sule's age and is probably facing a lot of the same problems Sule is facing (not as drastic as civil war, but you get the picture)

 

Private Pansy was probably supposed to be Clover's age OR younger, since she is still a private in the army.

 

 

 

Anyway those are my guesses, share your thoughts?

 

Attention

 

 

I think we should just do fast forward for them. My reason being that they are all just preparing for the invasion. I'm not sure what posts we could make would be interesting enough for that. ig would just be simple micrmanaging that wouldn't be important much to the story.

 

My recommendation is you (jadefiziod) fast forward to when you are done with your part in the preparation for the Invasion, And you are back in your tent and shiri wants to talk with you. I would imagine she is curious about you think of Sule (be honest). Plus, she is probably hungry and you guys could talk over a 'dinner'.

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Attention.

 

Private Pansy is supposed to be about a year younger than Night Flash. Night Flash went up the ranks like crazy but Pansy stayed where she was even though they both joined the army at about the same time.

 

Hurricane? Well at the time of this RP, he's supposed to be an old veteran living in his retirement home. I'm going with him being a stallion. Even though girls can be called 'sir' in the army, I think Commander Hurricane was probably a stallion.

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