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Same city? Wow, we have always had to be cross country every time...

 

Hey, since your online, why not post (I'm having some trouble with thinking of sule's invention...)?

 

Just see if you can go more in depth with the characters... Especially storm, we know NOTHING of her!

 

*hint* how she became abassador, family stuff...

 

Thinking of how a post will go now ^_^

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*sigh of relief*   ok, we will go with that   Ok, everypony. I know Sule's plan was kinda complicated, so in my boredom I made some pretty pictures explaining it while I watched MLP.       Fir

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you know, when i reread midnights past (may expand on it as a kinda filler) this song fits perfectly XD

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midnights not out of the trance, it may have shook him and shiri up a bit, but hes....how to put this, in her full control, he wont be released unless shiri is killed

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Thinking of how a post will go now ^_^

 

good liuck, but your on your own. I got nothing....

 

 

I still am stuck on sule's invention...

 

Ok, I got something...

 

but you may not like it...

 

Thinking of how a post will go now ^_^

 

Your the pony online from the group right now

 

Can you help me out with thinking of Sule's invention?

 

I will help out with Storms past and character if you want me to

 

Attention

 

 

How do you think you would react if The Archon was wearing a bucket?

 

Anyway we (In the OOC) need to come up with a strategy for them taking back the city (something more complicated than storm the the walls...)

 

We should try and think of a plan as original as possible. it would be go when we make the fanfic

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pakistani huh? cool ^^ first pakistani i know that dosent hate me for living in the United States x3 UKRAINE <.< >.>

 

That's a stereotype my dear Midnight Moon, we don't blow ourselves up as a hobby. :P

 

Okay, during the RP, you might have seen that I ruin the entire office and take every single piece of paper took some valuable information from the office. Thing is, I didn't say what it contained. That means I get to make up everything in it don't I?

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I suppose.

 

Anyway, I'm gonna start writing up a largish post, so I'll hopefully have it up within a few hours.

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That's a stereotype my dear Midnight Moon, we don't blow ourselves up as a hobby. :P

 

Okay, during the RP, you might have seen that I ruin the entire office and take every single piece of paper took some valuable information from the office. Thing is, I didn't say what it contained. That means I get to make up everything in it don't I?

 

Eeyup, stuff that might help them. Maybe they find something funny, too (idk)

 

And don't worry about mIdight moon, we are all

Bronies here. Lots of American get everything they know about the Middl east and Muslims from news networks (and stupid comidians) and I have to deal with those stereotypes all the time, and I'm in an Air force family, which makes their argument invalid.

 

And besides, Fox News tends to say a lot of Steryotypes about Muslims and people from middle east and Pakistan. How can they get any credibility? Did you hear what they said about us Bronies (they diagnosed us ALL with baby man disease)?

 

I'm not sure exactly why I posted this, but oh well...

 

Day trip tomorrow to the place where Feld0 lives. GASP. So I won't be online for too much of tomorrow, maybe in the evening though ^_^

 

Wait, what? You meeting him? He lives in California, right?

 

Tell him I said hello, and ask if he ever decided to use CentOS (he'll know what I mean... I think)

 

Any way, have fun, and think about Storms past!

 

It would be nice to have a post like that when you can

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I suppose.

 

Anyway, I'm gonna start writing up a largish post, so I'll hopefully have it up within a few hours.

 

 

REMEMBER THE ORB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Tyranwhat'shisname's personal porn collection. 'Nuff said.

 

no comment...

 

(i wont stop you if you dont focus too much on it...)

 

Lol, it usually takes me ten minutes at max. :P

 

 

Go ahead and post if you have one planned. Jade will take a while and you guys dont need to alternate since you aren't in the same area...

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I have long since forgotten what was going on regarding that orb.

 

yeah, it slipped my mind too

 

long story short, clover had it when sule left, and now tyrannus has it. we will probably bring it to the meeting it think.

 

Feel free to do Tyran's lines and make them as Rude and Crass as you want (it just suits him so well!)

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I had Tyrannus destroy the orb offscreen. This might screw with what we had planned, but I think it was the most logical thing for Tyrannus to do.

 

I don't think I got Tyrannus's personality down very well, apart from mocking Nova at the end and casually mention that he plans to rape Shiri, but I think I got the point across well enough.

 

I was originally going to post a second half where Indigo gets to the dungeon and runs into Shiri, who broke out of the cell (but kicked Clover and Storm back into the cell and re-locked the door), but it's pushing midnight right now and I'm running out of energy.

 

I'd like to have Indigo be the one to first run into Shiri and capture her, it'll help start off his story with her.

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Help me get a clear view on this, I'm getting the intel, you're mounting a rescue attempt?

 

Seriously just for the heck of it, when Night Flash reads the stuff in the office, he's gonna find some awkward stuff in there. :3

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Help me get a clear view on this, I'm getting the intel, you're mounting a rescue attempt?

 

Indigo's going to head to see if he can, but he'll be too late to rescue them. He will, however, run into Shiri, who's in the middle of her escape attempt. And it's shortly after this that he'll catch up with your group.

 

At least, that's what I have planned.

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I had Tyrannus destroy the orb offscreen. This might screw with what we had planned, but I think it was the most logical thing for Tyrannus to do.

 

I don't think I got Tyrannus's personality down very well, apart from mocking Nova at the end and casually mention that he plans to rape Shiri, but I think I got the point across well enough.

 

I was originally going to post a second half where Indigo gets to the dungeon and runs into Shiri, who broke out of the cell (but kicked Clover and Storm back into the cell and re-locked the door), but it's pushing midnight right now and I'm running out of energy.

 

I'd like to have Indigo be the one to first run into Shiri and capture her, it'll help start off his story with her.

 

I liked that post, you did a good job with Tyrannus! I would have imagined that that Indigo remembered Shiri, but she's probably not wearing her robe or somthing

 

If your wondering, I personally pictured Shiri looking like Trixie as an earth pony, but I think your vision of her is what you should go with. (or midnight's, since he made her up

 

 

BTW when you get the chance, you accidentally wrote "Sule said" instead of "Tyrannus said". fix it when you get the chance

 

 

 

As for the Orb, that complicated things...

 

Indigo's going to head to see if he can, but he'll be too late to rescue them. He will, however, run into Shiri, who's in the middle of her escape attempt. And it's shortly after this that he'll catch up with your group.

 

At least, that's what I have planned.

 

Keep in mind that Shiri is still under mindcontrol and still has allegiance to Tyrannus and unwilling to cooperate... I don't know why she would escape, but you can work that out

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cut for brevity

 

I'll keep that in mind.

 

attention

 

Part of the plan was to recon the dungeon and see what kind of security the prisoners were under, so Indigo heading down there shouldn't be too suspicious to the other agents.

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I'll take care of the knocking out in my post.

 

...in the morning. I'm off for the night, for now.

 

 

g-nite

 

 

I should too, I've been posting ponies too much and I've gotten as much sleep as sule

 

I've sent another soldier. Indigo and him should be able to knock her out, drag her back to base, and see if her mind-control can be reversed.

 

Sorry, dude, but it seem the time your best time for posting is around the time we sleep (sorry for that)

 

Anyway, feel free to do another post, as long as it doesn't interfere with Jade's plan too much. You could probably get away talking about with Night flash and his crew. Backstories, what they think of the Malumai, looking over 'recon stuff', etc

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g-nite

 

 

I should too, I've been posting ponies too much and I've gotten as much sleep as sule

 

 

 

Sorry, dude, but it seem the time your best time for posting is around the time we sleep (sorry for that)

 

Anyway, feel free to do another post, as long as it doesn't interfere with Jade's plan too much. You could probably get away talking about with Night flash and his crew. Backstories, what they think of the Malumai, looking over 'recon stuff', etc

 

I think I'll do that in the next post, when the soldier and Indigo are coming back (with the hostages?) and Night Flash is waiting for them. Maybe do a flashback to when Night Flash was just a private and the same with the other team members. For example, how did Pansy get in the army.

 

EDIT: As soon as the power comes back and I have battery left. Expect to see that backstory in about 4 hours or earlier.

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I think I'll do that in the next post, when the soldier and Indigo are coming back (with the hostages?) and Night Flash is waiting for them. Maybe do a flashback to when Night Flash was just a private and the same with the other team members. For example, how did Pansy get in the army.

 

EDIT: As soon as the power comes back and I have battery left. Expect to see that backstory in about 4 hours or earlier.

 

Ok, then. I recommend you leave out the the Maluma and just focus on back stories. I

Think that would be a great post and it wouldn't change the hostage situation for jade, since you guys will have only enough time to 'save' Shiri.

 

Night flash is the equivalent to sal, he feels to much like a secondary character. Back stories an insights into the charchters mind make them more realistic, even if they are ponies.

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You know, talking ponies aren't realistic to begin with but, okay. I just need someone to do a filler post or just a post and there'll be that flashback scene like you see in the movies.

 

I slept... I was going to post, but I think we're better off waiting for jade...

 

I wanted Sule to do a big inspirational speech before the attack, im working on it.

 

 

My inspiration for it

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xzTA6tN5Jkg

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