critique wanted (Critique Wanted) First Comic Style Drawing

[ChikaChan 7,320]

Is my first time drawing something like thiscause I been looking at star wars space battle images and wanted to try it myself,so what do you guys think about it??? 

 

oops.....how do I put tags? ^^;;;

[Brony Number 42 9,928]

Interesting. That bottom ship overlaps with the top and it looks like they are connected. Maybe don't have stars, since they add clutter.

How long does it take to draw that? Could you do a full comic?

[SharpWit 2,472]

Took a moment to figure out exactly what was going on in this picture. @Merry Brony 2A is right about it feeling a bit cluttered. Only other thing I think that should be noted is the angle and straightness of some lines, makes some parts seem bent or warped. It definately captures that old star wars/star trek look.

[Shadow Beam 1,179]

The critique wanted tag has been switched over to Visual Fan art. Let me fix it for ya. ^^