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Rain stumbled towards the house, slowing down as she saw it was too late. "Mr. Breezy!" she screamed again, coughing as smoke rose from the home. "Oh, Mr...Breezy..." She collapsed, crying, trying to drag herself towards the ruins.


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....

(I'm so fucking lost)

 

(hence, why my guy crept out of the group and into exile ;) )

I HAD TO FALL TO LOSE IT ALL BUT IN THE END IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER /WRISTS

On 4/28/2013 at 8:13 PM, gooM said:
Djenty...man you are crazy, but an awesome sort of crazy
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Rain ignored everyone. Blood was pounding in her ears and she felt herself getting weak with tears as she tried desperately to crawl forwards. All there was was the roaring of the fire and her own terrified screams.


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Rain ignored everyone. Blood was pounding in her ears and she felt herself getting weak with tears as she tried desperately to crawl forwards. All there was was the roaring of the fire and her own terrified screams.

 

Colt picked up rain and flew her back to the house she ran from, he flew inside and placed her on the floor

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Rain struggled and trashed on the floor. "Let me go!" she screamed, but she couldn't hear herself through the pounding in her head. She felt like she was going to explode. "Let me GO!!!"

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As he was laid down into the house, Cricket lost his focus on the magic surrounding his legs and let out a deep sigh of relief. "Thank you man. I owe you." he turned to Rain, who looked distraught and furious at the same time, and gulped.


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All Maynard remember was waking up. Waking up to a pegasus flying away from him, presumably to go help someone else. As his memory came back, Maynard pieced the story back together: He entered Ponyville at what seemed the worst time possible, to see everypony in panic. Then, that pegasus.

Did he just fly me here? That must of made me black out... WAIT. My sling.

Maynard reached his hoof down to his flank.

No sling.

In shock, Maynard stood up, the world spinning around him. He could barely support himself because of the dizziness, but he had to find his sling.

"Where is it?!" he yelled, sloppily running and stumbling.


I HAD TO FALL TO LOSE IT ALL BUT IN THE END IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER /WRISTS

On 4/28/2013 at 8:13 PM, gooM said:
Djenty...man you are crazy, but an awesome sort of crazy
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As he was laid down into the house, Cricket lost his focus on the magic surrounding his legs and let out a deep sigh of relief. "Thank you man. I owe you." he turned to Rain, who looked distraught and furious at the same time, and gulped.

 

Colt walked over and shut door "im Colt Revo by the way, it seems like we are all having a bad day"

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Rain glared at Flynn and Colt. The throbbing was clearing up and now all she felt was rage.

"What is WRONG with you people?! My foster dad is in there! Let me help him!" She tried to stand up and leave again, but couldn't even rise.

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"The fact that you can't even stand up is proof that we can't let you go out and do that." Flynn said, attempting to sound reassuring. "If anything, only Revo here would be able to go save him..."


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Rain glared at Flynn and Colt. The throbbing was clearing up and now all she felt was rage.

"What is WRONG with you people?! My foster dad is in there! Let me help him!" She tried to stand up and leave again, but couldn't even rise.

 

"listen, your in no condition to help anyone at the moment, if we all got out, im sure he got out too"


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Alexandrite Pierce walked back to the house and improved his supports.

"I guess nopony was in that house." He thought to himself.


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"The fact that you can't even stand up is proof that we can't let you go out and do that." Flynn said, attempting to sound reassuring. "If anything, only Revo here would be able to go save him..."

 

"ill go search that house then"

 

Colt flew out the door the house he picked up rain from


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"listen, your in no condition to help anyone at the moment, if we all got out, im sure he got out too"

 

"Well find him!" she yelled again, not caring if she was disturbing anyone else. "He's old, he won't be able to get very far...just please, he needs my help!"

She glanced at Flynn as Colt left. "Thanks," she said, feeling a bit sheepish.

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Cloud gave a smile, "That's a nice name" he told her. When he heard about Rains foster father, he shot up, ignoring his wing, "Stay here" he told Rain and Rose before running for the wrekage where he began digging through it, looking for the pony.


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She glanced at Flynn as Colt left. "Thanks," she said, feeling a bit sheepish.

 

"Hey, I did nothing. Yet at least..." Flynn shrugged, keeping his eye on the door Colt left through before turning back to Rain. "...so, you don't mind if I ask your name? I'm Cricket."


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(Mr. Breezy died, for the record. #like a troll)

 

Rain watched as everyone left, wishing she could go too. "Thank you all, so much..." she whispered.

"Hey, I did nothing. Yet at least..." Flynn shrugged, keeping his eye on the door Colt left through before turning back to Rain. "...so, you don't mind if I ask your name? I'm Cricket."

 

"I'm Raindancer. Nice to meet you. Sorry for raging at you earlier," she said sadly. Edited by PinkieDaShy

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Alexandrite heard some ponies yelling in the house across the street, he looked out the window and saw some ponies running across the road.

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Colt helped out the other pony who came to dig through the wreakage

Cloud gave a smile, "That's a nice name" he told her. When he heard about Rains foster father, he shot up, ignoring his wing, "Stay here" he told Rain and Rose before running for the wrekage where he began digging through it, looking for the pony.

 


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