Finesthour 7,287 July 9, 2012 Share July 9, 2012 Hello, many of you may know me as that guy who writes poems a lot. But if you do not know me, here is a little information about me before I get into what the thread is about- I have been writing for about... 8 years or so. I absolutely love to write stories, fan fictions, short stories, poems, anything having to do with literature. I absolutely love to have my opinions be heard, and be taken in a serious light. I aspire to be some sort of critic as a side job at some time in the future. I am an avid roleplayer as well, which adds to my literary side. Now what this thread is about- I have self proclaimed myself a critic on these here forums. Not for power, or fame, or any of that junk. I want to be a critic so I can help people with their works, get my opinion heard, and polish up my critic skills! I want to critic any kind of work that you want to have feedback one! Be it Visual, Audible, or any other senses! Plushies, drawings, fics, anything you want to be critqued. I will be taking any requests for feedback as of now, so post a link to the thread where your work can be found, and I will get right to it! (Please no links to fimfiction. If you have a fic, please post it to the correct section of the forum so I can give it a proper criqtique to the forums. My work here is for my family here *being the forums* and not for any other site as of now. My purpose is to polish my skills with the ponies on the forum, thank you for your consideration.) I hope I get to crtique your works soon ponies! Rules: Post your works in the correct section of the forums, then post the link in this thread, if you will. I will reply to that thread, and this one to tell you the work has been critiqued. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samurshy 708 July 9, 2012 Share July 9, 2012 (edited) Non Pony, Writing. Thanks INB4 you told me this though. Here is a link http://mlpforums.com...narrative-poem/ Poem number 2 http://mlpforums.com...-needless-poem/ Thank you and sorry for all the trouble I have caused your thread. I am a bad person T_T sadface Edited July 9, 2012 by Bronynonymous [CLICK THE SIG FOR OC] (Signature created by Azura) Shinobu is best girl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 10, 2012 Author Share July 10, 2012 (edited) Thanks INB4 you told me this though. Here is a link http://mlpforums.com...narrative-poem/ Poem number 2 http://mlpforums.com...-needless-poem/ Thank you and sorry for all the trouble I have caused your thread. I am a bad person T_T sadface Replied to both. Thanks your your poems. Bumped. Edited July 10, 2012 by Crona Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zhooves 843 July 10, 2012 Share July 10, 2012 There ya go~ (Both of them, if you can!) So I took this personality-test... And apparently, I'm most like Fluttershy~2015- edit - not too much has changed, but now I'm a wee bit more like Twilight~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 10, 2012 Author Share July 10, 2012 There ya go~ (Both of them, if you can!) Responded to both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KakeiTheWolf 652 July 10, 2012 Share July 10, 2012 Oh, I've got quite a bit... Here you go: http://mlpforums.com/topic/16622-a-small-collection-of-poems/ My Music: http://kakeithewolf.bandcamp.com/. Now on tumblr at kakeithewolf.tumblr.com Youtube: youtube.com/user/KakeiTheWoIf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 10, 2012 Author Share July 10, 2012 Oh, I've got quite a bit... Here you go: http://mlpforums.com...ction-of-poems/ Oh Jesus... please, shorten this to a number that is possible to critique xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KakeiTheWolf 652 July 10, 2012 Share July 10, 2012 Well, uploading them individually may be a problem, because it's 20,000 words of poetry. 1 My Music: http://kakeithewolf.bandcamp.com/. Now on tumblr at kakeithewolf.tumblr.com Youtube: youtube.com/user/KakeiTheWoIf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 10, 2012 Author Share July 10, 2012 Well, uploading them individually may be a problem, because it's 20,000 words of poetry. You have to understand, critiquing that much is... not really wanted xD 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KakeiTheWolf 652 July 10, 2012 Share July 10, 2012 You have to understand, critiquing that much is... not really wanted xD Meh, I tried uploading separately, but MLPForums decides to curl up into a ball and cry whenever I copy paste more than like... 20 words. My Music: http://kakeithewolf.bandcamp.com/. Now on tumblr at kakeithewolf.tumblr.com Youtube: youtube.com/user/KakeiTheWoIf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 11, 2012 Author Share July 11, 2012 Meh, I tried uploading separately, but MLPForums decides to curl up into a ball and cry whenever I copy paste more than like... 20 words. Well... try to upload one at a time xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KakeiTheWolf 652 July 11, 2012 Share July 11, 2012 Well... try to upload one at a time xD 20000/20 = 1000 copy pastes. No thanks. My Music: http://kakeithewolf.bandcamp.com/. Now on tumblr at kakeithewolf.tumblr.com Youtube: youtube.com/user/KakeiTheWoIf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 14, 2012 Author Share July 14, 2012 Bumped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glaceon 793 July 14, 2012 Share July 14, 2012 I would just like to thank you for critiquing on my drawings it helped me improve. 1 Previously: Mal (Starbolt) Eeveelutions: @Eevee: Eevee @Vaporeon: N-Harmonia : Ampharos @Flareon: Descant/Bard @Espeon: Locked @Umbreon: Lhee @Leafeon: Firebolt @Glaceon: Mal @Sylveon: DontDropThatDedenne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Page Turner 607 July 14, 2012 Share July 14, 2012 Critique my Fic! FimFiction link here:http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13935/R3B0UNd I know that the capitalization and punctuation suck, I already have people looking at that, I wanna know how the story itself is. Do you want an awesome thread to visit? Visit this thread! http://mlpforums.com/topic/39132-ask-any-pony-on-a-date/ My Little Pony is a sparkly, happy diamond among things that are not diamonds. -Apple Cider FimFiction|DeviantArt|Steam|Google+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PonyEcho 1,610 July 14, 2012 Share July 14, 2012 here is the link http://mlpforums.com/topic/24287-ponythor-and-spidermare-criticism-wanted/ Have Fun my DA http://heavyecho.deviantart.com/ check my stuff out the Anime Club http://mlpforums.com/topic/48196-the-anime-club/ plz join us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slipstream 84 July 14, 2012 Share July 14, 2012 http://mlpforums.com/topic/24417-i-hope-the-worst-isnt-over/ I, um... I made a fic. :x The biggest thing I worry about is verb/tense agreement, and I haven't ficced in ages, so I know it's flawed, but constructive criticism is nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mayuen 77 July 14, 2012 Share July 14, 2012 Maybe you can give some critique to some of my pony OCs? I'm looking for critique both design and style wise Here is the topic link http://mlpforums.com/topic/24438-pony-ocs-critique-please/ Signature made by me, screenshot as base Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 14, 2012 Author Share July 14, 2012 Geeze, lots of updates overnight. I'll get right to these. Critique my Fic! FimFiction link here:http://www.fimfictio...y/13935/R3B0UNd I know that the capitalization and punctuation suck, I already have people looking at that, I wanna know how the story itself is. Read the rules, I said no off site links. here is the link http://mlpforums.com...iticism-wanted/ Have Fun http://mlpforums.com...orst-isnt-over/ I, um... I made a fic. :x The biggest thing I worry about is verb/tense agreement, and I haven't ficced in ages, so I know it's flawed, but constructive criticism is nice. Maybe you can give some critique to some of my pony OCs? I'm looking for critique both design and style wise Here is the topic link http://mlpforums.com...ritique-please/ Critiqued. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mayuen 77 July 14, 2012 Share July 14, 2012 Thank you for the critique Signature made by me, screenshot as base Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starstream 182 July 15, 2012 Share July 15, 2012 Well, seeing as I'm here already, I might as well rip of the band-aid of critique. If you're not busy, could you take a look at my story and my drawing please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Page Turner 607 July 15, 2012 Share July 15, 2012 Oops, well, I have an site thread here:http://mlpforums.com/topic/14552-r3b0und/#entry319723, but it just sends you to Fimfiction again... Do you want an awesome thread to visit? Visit this thread! http://mlpforums.com/topic/39132-ask-any-pony-on-a-date/ My Little Pony is a sparkly, happy diamond among things that are not diamonds. -Apple Cider FimFiction|DeviantArt|Steam|Google+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firestorm 8 July 17, 2012 Share July 17, 2012 Here's my fic, Crona. Thanks for your time. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fIOlRyriqWjw0PqlUXvIcpo4O_l0m9RzJZRS8JpG8A0/edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 17, 2012 Author Share July 17, 2012 Here's my fic, Crona. Thanks for your time. https://docs.google....ZRS8JpG8A0/edit Make it a thread on the forum, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firestorm 8 July 17, 2012 Share July 17, 2012 My bad. Here, it's at the last post. http://mlpforums.com/topic/24695-looking-for-fanfic-critics/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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