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I can't really give you advice what to post as it's not my character but I can give you some ideas with what to work with.

 

You can either ignore the cowerdness completely like Ice did, say a little about it wondering where I was but not knowing I was doing or if you choose to know what I did then you need to think how your character would react to that.

 

You also have to reply to what I said and did to you and if you go with getting angry and reacting with me for hiding that kinda stuffs this part up. If you really want to go with getting angry the best way to do that is to know what happened but don't show it much and just reply to me rudely and leave it at that for at least the time being.

 

I am sorry for putting you on the spot because I have kinda restricted for you how to write your post, you just need to be creative about what to write. Don't feel pressured to post though, your post probably won't end up that good if you do that. You'll think of something soon enough.

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Well, long as we're on the subject of shipping...

 

Aurora Flare started out as a template, using a reversed me as a guideline, but eventually evolved her own personality (don't you just hate it when that happens?). Which means, basically, that I have no bloody clue as to what she would want in a relationship. If my subconscious knows, it's definitely not sharing with my conscious state of mind. ._. Which means I guess I'll just have to go with the flow and see where my writer's inspiration takes me. :blink:

 

 

 

 

I ran out of ice cream cones.

 

It's more fun that way... :) Also, somepony hasn't commented on the "shipping" matter yet... Why so quiet, Ice Storm? :ph34r:

 

Anyways, love is in bloom apparently and I just found out that Twili and Rarity's horn are ice cream cones... :blink:

 

 

I am going to try and make a reply now. Although I am still kind of not caught up and don't know what to do exactly.

 

Don't worry too much over it. In summation, the timberwolves attacked the group stuck in the forest and Numbers got seriously injured until Aurora healed him, but knocked her out in the process. The other ponies are alright with a few scrapes and bruises. Two new mysterious ponies have arrived: a gray winged pony who speaks so strangely and a light-blue winged pony that just sort of dropped in from the sky. Ummmm... I think that's everything in a half-shell.

 

 

@@Dave247,

 

I actually don't know what to post, but I think I have some ideas:

 

A: Starry gets pissed at Daylight for not helping them fight the wolves.

 

Or

 

B: Starry experiences another flashback about what her cutie mark means.

 

I don't want to mess the story up, so which is best?

 

Dave is right, just take your time. The best story comes with patience. However, if all else fails, go with your gut.

 

I can't wait to see what happens next. It feels like so much has been done and yet, we have only just begun.

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My post is bad, and I should feel bad. :(

 

Sorry, just couldn't think of a way to advance the plot, so I opted to fill my post with a flashback instead.

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My post is bad, and I should feel bad. :(

 

Sorry, just couldn't think of a way to advance the plot, so I opted to fill my post with a flashback instead.

 

Oh come on… I was going to do the same exact thing. :lol:

 

If your post was bad, then that means that the post that I haven't even written yet is going to be bad as well. I reject your conclusion and substitute it with one of my own. Your post was awesome and I enjoyed reading it and you should feel good.

 

(Besides, how could Aurora have advanced the plot much while being carried while unconscious?)

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Finally posted,

 

Summary:

 

Starry stops crying after Daylight consoles her, then Ice declared that they should get going now, but Starry thought that Daylight's too tired to trot his way out of the forest, so she offers to lift him on the way out

 

......CRAP....DID I START A SHIPPING PLOT?

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Finally posted,

 

Summery

 

Starry stops crying after Daylight consoles her, then Ice declared that they should get going now, but Starry thought that Daylight's too tired to trot his way out the of forest, so she offers to lift him on the way out

 

......CRAP....DID I START A SHIPPING PLOT?

 

Too late. Once it gets going, it doesn't stop until the end... Anyways, now things are starting to roll. I'll be uploading mine soon today.

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Since the only real interaction I've had is with Numbers', am I a part of his imagination or am I doing it wrong?

 

I don't know... I mean, that is I don't really how that is happening. Unless you're saying that the others can not see Tich's pony?!


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@, Well, so far, all my sensible interaction has only been with numbers, I don't think I've been mentioned or talked to, and in one conversation I got ignored already, it may truly be the case
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@, Well, so far, all my sensible interaction has only been with numbers, I don't think I've been mentioned or talked to, and in one conversation I got ignored already, it may truly be the case

 

:o Now way... PONYCEPTION!!! :blink: I have heard of such things, but I never thought that it ever existed... I hope Alex is real now! *Pokes Alex Night* Alex: What are you doing?! Me: Yes, he is real!... Unless my mind is making me believe that you are real... :o Could we be in the Equestrix?!...

 

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@, Well, so far, all my sensible interaction has only been with numbers, I don't think I've been mentioned or talked to, and in one conversation I got ignored already, it may truly be the case

 

Ahem... Gentlemen? Sorry to interrupt this interesting discussion, but I figured I'd want to clear something up for you. Ah, Tich, was it? As the quote above says, you think Numbers was the only one who happened to notice your existance, correct? Well, allow me to shed some light on the subject, that it wasn't only Numbers who noticed you, but another individual. You want proof? Well, as a certain Mr. Phoenix Wright would say... TAKE THAT!!!

 

As he simply sat there and gazed at the forest, Electrobolt had seen yet another pony start heading that way: a purple pony with wings and some rather curious goggles. *Wait... Why is that pony going into the forest alone??? Unless...* His eyes looked back to the forest, then the pony, and then the forest again. *What if the other ponies went into the forest too???* He shook his head as he slowly got to his hooves, before he started to trot towards the forest to see if it was possible that he could find them and get them all back to the group. It was just then that he heard a thudding sound when he stopped and began to look around.

 

Yes, it was I who made that post. Electrobolt noticed you walking into the forest, before Magenta had called for help. Of course, much like with Tich Pony, Electrobolt wound up being seemingly ignored, until Silver and Alex came into the scene.

 

... Ok, I admit... That whole display I made? Yeah, I had that in my head for a little xD I was feeling rather silly and wanted to do a little something like this x3

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"You look very cute in that hat, but the color doesn't suit you too well. I think it looks much better on my head, don't you think? Maybe I should take it back."

Oh man... Klopp, you should've let her keep the hat. I knew you wouldn't though, the hat and Klopp pony are truly inseparable.

 

Well, you know what this means...

 

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=4fk2prKnYnI

 

 

j/k :lol:

 

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Ahem... Gentlemen? Sorry to interrupt this interesting discussion, but I figured I'd want to clear something up for you. Ah, Tich, was it? As the quote above says, you think Numbers was the only one who happened to notice your existance, correct? Well, allow me to shed some light on the subject, that it wasn't only Numbers who noticed you, but another individual. You want proof? Well, as a certain Mr. Phoenix Wright would say... TAKE THAT!!!

 

 

 

Yes, it was I who made that post. Electrobolt noticed you walking into the forest, before Magenta had called for help. Of course, much like with Tich Pony, Electrobolt wound up being seemingly ignored, until Silver and Alex came into the scene.

 

... Ok, I admit... That whole display I made? Yeah, I had that in my head for a little xD I was feeling rather silly and wanted to do a little something like this x3

 

Well played, sir! Good to see that nopony is being ignored. Which will go double for Silver, who is acting very suspicious-like... :ph34r: Anyways, I'm back from my little excursion from the market and will proceed to write my next bit. I will try to make it longer or as long as my last.

 

 

Oh man... Klopp, you should've let her keep the hat. I knew you wouldn't though, the hat and Klopp pony are truly inseparable.

 

Well, you know what this means...

 

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=4fk2prKnYnI

 

 

j/k :lol:

 

 

Also, WUUUUUUUUUT?! :blink:

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Kind of confused about your last post.

 

Tich shook her head. She focused herself and barreled down towards the far end of the now dimming fires. The trail led them near outside of the forest once more, but on another side. She flew towards the end, where in a small clearing she saw a bunch of ponies hunched together. She lost control of her flying at the last few meters and crashed into a nearby tree.

 

Near outside of the forest, but on another side? Which group of ponies did she find hunched over? I'd guess you meant the ponies in the Everfree Forest, but your character then tried to talk to Serah in your next paragraph. In my last post, Serah had already taken Numbers and headed off towards the group of ponies outside of the forest, and would be there or near there by now.

 

I'd like to write another post so I can set Numbers down, allowing Scoots to post again, but I can't do that until my confusion is cleared up first.

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......CRAP....DID I START A SHIPPING PLOT?

Too late. Once it gets going, it doesn't stop until the end...

Well, this would be the second for me but you can't really compare the two as they were at different stages.

Going to have to give this a lot of thought with my next post. I don't want to stuff this one up and either ruin it or lock my self into it either.

Normally when i start though the rest just follows.

 

Also,

@ I could also reply to you Tich as well but only if your post happened before Serah walked off with numbers. You were very vague with a lot of things though so it doesn't give others much to work off of.


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Yeah, I'll admit. It seems a little confusing about whether or not that the fighting group has all made it back to the other group.

 

Also, Artsy... You have been quiet lately... :ph34r:

 

Heheh, I hope for at least one-two others to post in the IC, then I'd be able to reply again to your character, Alex :P At least some actual interaction had taken place between me and another :P

 

Well, hopefully some otherponies from the lovey-dovey group might start posting again soon or the fighting group gets back soon, so Alex and electrobolt don't have to go into the forest at all. "Go into the forest, they said. It will be alright, they said." http://mlpforums.com/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.png

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@@Legendary Emerald, Actually, I can't quite figure the exact nature of the post either.

 

@, if Tichpony ran into Numbers, then that would mean that you followed the trail out of the forest and basically back where you began. You could probably modify that section of your post to be more clear on which way was traveled. I think that you could do this by deleting the “, but on another side” as well as flying towards a clearing.

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It's soo... quiet around here... Anything interesting going on? :) I guess writer's block is affecting everyone here... Which is a shame because I really want to focus on something else besides on my very slow progress on getting ONE MORE party member for the 7th element of Harmony story. :blush: Anyways...


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It's soo... quiet around here... Anything interesting going on? :) I guess writer's block is affecting everyone here... Which is a shame because I really want to focus on something else besides on my very slow progress on getting ONE MORE party member for the 7th element of Harmony story. :blush: Anyways...

 

Naw, I always have a pretty good idea of what I want to post next, I just like to wait for others to interact with my character so I can make things more interesting by working off of that. I was going to wait for again, but I realized that wasn't quite necessary and moved things along a bit more. Now I'm stuck until he posts again for sure though :P

 

Also, I'm really looking forward to that Seventh Element RP. :3

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Naw, I always have a pretty good idea of what I want to post next, I just like to wait for others to interact with my character so I can make things more interesting by working off of that. I was going to wait for again, but I realized that wasn't quite necessary and moved things along a bit more. Now I'm stuck until he posts again for sure though :P

 

Also, I'm really looking forward to that Seventh Element RP. :3

 

Me too... It is just a little slow right now, which was surprising given how fast I got requests to join. Oh well. I suppose that it gives me more time to refine the story before it truly kicks off.

 

Also, yes. It seems like everypony is just waiting for a response from somepony else. http://mlpforums.com/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.png

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