writing Someone I'd love to meet

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

Ok, I wrote this song in a bathroom, in a Wendy's in Montana... My band is going to play this sometime, but I feel like I should put it on here in words first...

 

Sitting on a lonely walk

On the corner of line and hawk

I ask myself where has the time gone.

I used to be top of the class, now my

only friend is the bottom of a glass,

I find myself on the last step...

 

Wait!

I'm not there yet, I just

Try a little harder

be a little stronger

I know, I'm not, there yet

I need hold onto

Someone I'd love to meet...

 

Laying on my bed

about to blow a bullet into my head

I ask myself why would I do that?

Am I really done living this life

Is there a reason not to fight

I just need someone to say there might...

 

 

Wait!

I'm not there yet, I just

Try a little harder

be a little stronger

I know, I'm not, there yet

I need hold onto

Someone I'd love to meet...

 

Your life is growing thin

Your life is ready to begin

Your life, oh Lord...

 

 

Wait!

I'm not there yet, I just

Try a little harder

be a little stronger

I know, I'm not, there yet

I need hold onto

Someone I'd love to meet...

x2

[Spectre2343 78]

Oh gosh, my curse to attempt to sing every song I read, it didn't go to well lol

Good song, just wondering how the beat will go, something cheery? Maybe sad feeling?

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

Oh gosh, my curse to attempt to sing every song I read, it didn't go to well lol

Good song, just wondering how the beat will go, something cheery? Maybe sad feeling?

 

I sorta silently sang it as I was writing, It sounds like something "The Fray" would sing... Like really low and sort of sad. Thank You!

[XUNUSEDXXX 3,459]

Ok, I wrote this song in a bathroom, in a Wendy's in Montana...

 

LOL. I SERIOUSLY ROFL'D WHEN I SAW THIS

 

on a serious note about the poem, good job! You wrote it good enough to make me feel the emotions of the person in topic.

Edited September 7, 2012 by Scootabloom

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

LOL. I SERIOUSLY ROFL'D WHEN I SAW THIS

 

on a serious note about the poem, good job! You wrote it good enough to make me feel the emotions of the person in topic.

 

Yeah... my creative juices start flowing in the weirdest of places...

Thank you! I was thinking about a person that was contemplating suicide at my school, and I was wrote this around that time... I'm just glad everything turned out ok!

[Lost 1,410]

Nice work! I've tried to write a few songs myself but they never end up going well

 

Yeah... my creative juices start flowing in the weirdest of places...

 

I've had some of my best ideas sat on a toilet or stood in the shower, the lack of anything to do just seems to spark imagination for some reason

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

Nice work! I've tried to write a few songs myself but they never end up going well

 

 

I've had some of my best ideas sat on a toilet or stood in the shower, the lack of anything to do just seems to spark imagination for some reason

 

Thank you!

It seems some of the best thinkers get their ideas in the bathroom... There must be some kind of interesting thing in bathrooms that make you think... haha

[morethanicecream 116]

Thank you!

It seems some of the best thinkers get their ideas in the bathroom... There must be some kind of interesting thing in bathrooms that make you think... haha

 

I think it is the smell of the what they have in the cleaners in the bathroom. lol. It is a great song and since I was bullied long ago and have felt this way, it brought tears to my life, you have done the best idea on the song cause it is true, how we feel to this day, upset

[Modphase 1,271]

Wait, you have a band?

 

That's fucking awesome.

 

But I really like it! Very poetic to say the least, you have some great song writing skills.

 

I like this song because it reminds me of one of my favorite Frank Sinatra songs. The same kind of never give up feeling.

 

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

Wait, you have a band?

 

That's fucking awesome.

 

But I really like it! Very poetic to say the least, you have some great song writing skills.

 

I like this song because it reminds me of one of my favorite Frank Sinatra songs. The same kind of never give up feeling.

 

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=KIiUqfxFttM

 

Thank you! Yup, my band is named Uneek Kase. We're playing our first gig tomorrow, at my cities art festival. I honestly am really excited.

I think it is the smell of the what they have in the cleaners in the bathroom. lol. It is a great song and since I was bullied long ago and have felt this way, it brought tears to my life, you have done the best idea on the song cause it is true, how we feel to this day, upset

 

Thank you!