Derpy Hooves be derpin'!

[Kitty Cat Moonshire 629]

So I've never drawn a full pony before, much less a background. I've drawn the head of luna and like 3 others on my phone, but this is the first time I've actually tried to draw anything. I drew it on a laptop (with touchscreen) using PaintTool SAI.

What do you all think? And constructive criticism? Also, I will take drawing ideas as I need to improve A lot  

I should have put dents in the cloud where her hoofs are, but hey, it's my first drawing

Edited February 27, 2013 by Luna Moonshire

[Gone Airbourne 21,977]

Aww that is really cute well I mean how can Derpy not be considered cute?! I mean you did a really great job and there really isn't much I can say about criticism. I also like how rainbow dash is soaring in the background.

[ApexHunter 166]

Daaawww so cute! :3
This is really awesome. Both Derpy and Rainbow are awesome. There is one thing that bothers me a bit though... I mean, I could be wrong, but to me, Derpy's front legs look a bit skinny. Oh and if you check the left eye, you missed a little spot. But hey, not everything can be perfect, right?
But still, it's an AWESOME drawing. Really great job you did there!

[Malakili 165]

That looks amazing! The only minor "flaws" I found were her color, which could have been a couple of shades lighter and the little bits of blue that appear in her mane and tail... Great job anyway 

[Kitty Cat Moonshire 629]

Daaawww so cute! :3

This is really awesome. Both Derpy and Rainbow are awesome. There is one thing that bothers me a bit though... I mean, I could be wrong, but to me, Derpy's front legs look a bit skinny. Oh and if you check the left eye, you missed a little spot. But hey, not everything can be perfect, right?

But still, it's an AWESOME drawing. Really great job you did there!

Thanks It means a lot, really

the spot on the eye... Oh I see! It must have been the background color, and I bumped the touchscreen

And yeah, either that or the leg is too far forward  

Thanks for the input

[nevermore40853 5]

it's amazingly cute^^ it's got a few quirks here and there but it's your first one. other than that it is a very amazing picture keep it up^^

[Kitty Cat Moonshire 629]

Daaawww so cute! :3

This is really awesome. Both Derpy and Rainbow are awesome. There is one thing that bothers me a bit though... I mean, I could be wrong, but to me, Derpy's front legs look a bit skinny. Oh and if you check the left eye, you missed a little spot. But hey, not everything can be perfect, right?

But still, it's an AWESOME drawing. Really great job you did there!

By the way, I swear to god that your profile picture is one of the cutest things I have ever seen in my entire life. ever :3

I WANTS IT! <3

[ApexHunter 166]

By the way, I swear to god that your profile picture is one of the cutest things I have ever seen in my entire life. ever :3

I WANTS IT! <3

Thanks! :3

I got it from a youtube video and I'm guessing you're a fan of Princess Luna so I could get you Luna in a box if you want to. :3

[Kitty Cat Moonshire 629]

Thanks! :3

I got it from a youtube video and I'm guessing you're a fan of Princess Luna so I could get you Luna in a box if you want to. :3

Luna... in... a... box? :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD My heart is going to explode haha

I would love it!

And I wouldn't say fan, I would say obsessed beyond curing

[Gone for good 1,593]

This is cute looking. But you wanna know something? It needs more Derp. Also as for some actual croticism, it looks like there is a blue Mark on her hair which I think you should go back and fix that up reaaallly quickly.

 

Of course it might just also be my phone being stupefied or something dumb.

[Flutterdash. 52]

Awww so cute! This is WAY better than I could do!

I also love how you put Rainbow Dash in the background.

But there's something missing here.......oh yes MUFFINS!!! XD

Herpderp.

[Kitty Cat Moonshire 629]

This is cute looking. But you wanna know something? It needs more Derp. Also as for some actual croticism, it looks like there is a blue Mark on her hair which I think you should go back and fix that up reaaallly quickly.

 

Of course it might just also be my phone being stupefied or something dumb.

Yeah the layers overlapped slightly and I didn't catch it... :/ oh well It's my first drawing can only get better form here Thanks for the input

[hawkflame 3,310]

Hey, that's pretty good!  Much better than I could do, no question.  Needs more derpin', though.  You said she be derpin, and she ain't derpin'....

[Kitty Cat Moonshire 629]

Hey, that's pretty good!  Much better than I could do, no question.  Needs more derpin', though.  You said she be derpin, and she ain't derpin'....

I know I was going to fix that, but by the time I'd noticed I had already merged the layers ((

Maybe later I'll remake it, with more detail, and more derping!