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Meet the king of saps.

 

From the second I met you, my heart began to beat quickly.

Scared of the reactions my stupidity would bring on to you.

Instead, you continued to speak to me,

furthering my confusion.

I don't know what you could see in me, I am an awfully boring person.

Yet you continue to speak with me.

A few days passed since our first aquiantance, and many things within me have changed.

You went from a random stranger who wanted to know the problems of their ex,

to a woman I don't think I can live without.

Every second of my day I want to give to you, even though it is not possible.

Every fiber of my being I want to give to you, even though it is not possible.

Within my waking moments, the only thoughts that pass through my mind are "Talk to her."

The second I hear my phone go off, I hope with all of my heart that it is your text.

We have known each other for such a short time...

Yet I feel as if it has been a life time.

Your every waking breath I want to be filled with happiness.

Your every emotion I want to be of happiness.

I want the lock of your heart to be unlocked to let yourself free.

You think you are chubby and unnatractive, and that you are not amazing.

That could not be farther from the truth.

I do not normal judge from appearances, but yours is a beauty I can't stop mentioning.

You are unimaginobly cute, from your feet to your toes, with eyes that seem to capture mine in their gaze.

Your hair is such a shade of brown that causes the fanboy in me to Squee.

Not only are you gorgeous on the outside, but you have a soul to match.

You are not only compassionate about anyone you come into contact with, you worry over every mistake you make.

Every decision that has passed through your mind you take straight to heart, which can only show that you have a heart made of pure gold.

You may say that I am the sweet one, but that is far from the truth.

Yours is the one that has sugarcoated mine.

I know it seems weird, but the thought of "like" has far from escaped my mind.

I know for a fact what feeling goes through my mind now.

It is the feeling of love, one I have not felt in the longest time.

I don't even care if I end up hurt in the process, the ride was fun enough.

For I got to meet the greatest person in the world with the greatest heart.

I love you, with all of my heart, this much you know.

As I said when we met, you own my heart entirely.

I never go back on my words.

I will never hurt you for as long as I live.

I only want to see you happy.

For the rest of your life.


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Not bad, I suppose...although I have to say that this particular line pulled me out of it right quick:

 

You are unimaginobly cute, from your feet to your toes

I'm afraid I laughed a little at it, because I believe that wasn't quite what you meant to write.

 

Still, as I said, it's not that bad, for a love note.


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Not bad, I suppose...although I have to say that this particular line pulled me out of it right quick:

 

 

 

I'm afraid I laughed a little at it, because I believe that wasn't quite what you meant to write.

 

Still, as I said, it's not that bad, for a love note.

 

Lolwoops.

 

That was a mistake.

 

That's crazy, how long did that take you to write?

 

2 minutes.


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I know I shouldn't remind you, but are you going to be cautious with this girl? Considering your...last encounter with love?

 

That's what my first thought was.

 

I am being as cautious as possible...


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