Opinions on my OC?

[AppleBloomAmber 7]

I am not a talented artist. But I was just wondering if anyone could give me any pointers on my drawing of my OC Gothixia Cloud.

 

Thanks

 

Amber x

[Okie Dokie Lokie 24]

It's good for a beginner (making that assumption). The good thing about is that it isn't simply a recolour of an existing pony and that it has some originality to it. Nice job! The Cutie mark looks funny lol

[AppleBloomAmber 7]

Thanks yeah first attempt

 

The cutie mark was meant to be some sort of butterfly/skull and bones thing. It didnt really work lmao. :') hehe

 

Amber x

[Moonlight 7,288]

I think it's rather good, especially for a beginning.

I definitely like the eyes and mane designs. 

Plus, you did a good job of shading on the character, I'm awful at that. 

[Scootalove 10,689]

It looks pretty good for a first attempt. Even though, I'm good at art I don't think I would be able to transfer it into pony art.

 

So your OC deserves positive feedback.

[Batbrony 16,056]

Not a bad sketch for a beginner (far better than anything I'm confident I could draw  ), and I really like the mane; that's a pretty unique and unusual style of mane that I honestly can't say I've ever seen before, so props on originality. 

[Leafeon 2,702]

For a first attempt, very excellent. The biggest issue is the back legs. Try curving them more, as well as lowering the point on them. The front legs could also be a bit skinnier at the top. Other then that; great!

[Sky Warden 2,243]

The name. Why do you use 'Gothixia'? What does 'Gothixia' means? Just want to say that a good name isn't simply there because... "I want it."

Edited June 1, 2013 by Sky Warden

[Imagine 284]

Thats pretty good, way better than I draw, she is adorable, I ADORE her mane, her cutie mark looks a tad strange, so is her name.

 

Overall, I give this OC a 9/10

[AppleBloomAmber 7]

Thanks for the awesome feedback folks I'm probably gonna write up a better character profile to go with her that explains her name and cutie mark.

Gothixia was a name I kinda made up from gothic and trixie and just general randomness. It's because she is a dark pony really and she loves heavy metal and brutal music. Therefore I felt that name was appropriate and also kinda cute thanks again

 

Amber x

[Bookworm Brony 2]

I am not a talented artist.

 

Seriously, stop joking. This is great! I especially like the shading. That and the eyes are the two things I can can never seem to get right when drawing ponies!   

Edited June 4, 2013 by Bookworm Brony