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earl i changed my oc back story a bit so that it isnt a gary stus story. if the backstory is not up to par then please let me know or if you do not have any more space that is understandable. thanks derpy_emoticon1.png

 

He looks much better! I'm already looking forward to having Cliff push his buttons. ^^ RedStorm is Accepted! He's in Dorm #5, and his roommate is Darkshift.

 

Once we get a profile from Psych Ward, we'll be all set and ready to rumble! xD


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I would like to revise my application I edited the background story and had  a little more explanation tho I'm not sure how a total outcast would be anywhere close to Mary Sue ish but anyways I understand how it will be before the Luna's apprentice stuff and even the night guards If you still think shes a mary sue please tell me what makes you think so?

 

 my oc page (revised) http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/sparkshower-meddlemane-r3588

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Between Gardenia's haphephobia, Zatiko's trust issues, Minty's shyness and Cinders social awkwardness we're shaping up to be a right bunch of party animals!

 

This should be pretty interesting seeing how they get along. :P


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ohmy.png I'm seeing all of these lovely character banners and now I want one! D: How did you guys make yours?

Well, I drew mine digitally, then did some fancy wizardry in GIMP. I'd be willing to do the same for you, if you'd like.

 

hey, my wifi is up andi can join back in. sorry about that, the house we were staying at had no wifi.

Hey, welcome back, brah.

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biggrin.png Would you? That would be awesome! Although I'd like to try it out my self first, to see if I can do it. But if I can't will the offer still stand? biggrin.png

wink.png Uh-huh. Though, it might take me a while to get around to it. I have like, 8 requests pending... I really ought to just get through all those... instead I just keep drawing my own OCs...blush.png

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Huzzah, I exist! And my 'z' key is broken on my laptop, so I'm copying and pasting it. X_X Posting for zatiko will be really fun.

 

I'm going to go work on a post.

 

@Sparkshower, I'm happy you made the revisions; past guilt is often great for developing characters. Unfortunately, you still haven't explained the number one thing that makes her most Sueish (besides being Luna's apprentice): Why does everypony hate her? I can understand people not liking her when she was a foal, if she lashed out at others because she couldn't deal with her own guilt. That would be great. Or you could have her try to dominate other ponies because she still feels inferior and weak due to her guilt, so she's constantly power playing other ponies. It would tie in very nicely with her loyalty aspect as well; she can make friends if pressed, but usually they're a means to an end. However, when she does truly make friends, people find out how cruel she can be and ditch her.

 

I hope those suggestions help develop your character. ^^ Unfortunately, we're still closed. I'll let you know if we get an opening. smile.png

 

Also, our very own won the Ponyverse design logo contest! :D Congrats, fellow RP'er!

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Huzzah, I exist! And my 'z' key is broken on my laptop, so I'm copying and pasting it. X_X Posting for zatiko will be really fun.

 

I'm going to go work on a post.

 

@Sparkshower, I'm happy you made the revisions; past guilt is often great for developing characters. Unfortunately, you still haven't explained the number one thing that makes her most Sueish (besides being Luna's apprentice): Why does everypony hate her? I can understand people not liking her when she was a foal, if she lashed out at others because she couldn't deal with her own guilt. That would be great. Or you could have her try to dominate other ponies because she still feels inferior and weak due to her guilt, so she's constantly power playing other ponies. It would tie in very nicely with her loyalty aspect as well; she can make friends if pressed, but usually they're a means to an end. However, when she does truly make friends, people find out how cruel she can be and ditch her.

 

I hope those suggestions help develop your character. ^^ Unfortunately, we're still closed. I'll let you know if we get an opening. img-1569858-1-smile.png

 

Also, our very own won the Ponyverse design logo contest! biggrin.png Congrats, fellow RP'er!

Well... 2nd :P But it still had prize value to it :3

 

Glad to see you are still living and breathing Earl Grey, I feel like my character is a 3rd wheel at the moment xD


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, you are absolutely disallowed to be the slightest bit modest. Get up on that catwalk and strut that swag! :D

 

*pushes away the chocolates and the Dr. Pepper.* I've eaten too many of these.

 

Also, wow, look at that post! It also exists! :D

 

Next post, I think I'll close the meeting and send everyone to the canteen so interactions can be shaken up. ^^

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Huzzah, I exist! And my 'z' key is broken on my laptop, so I'm copying and pasting it. X_X Posting for zatiko will be really fun.

 

I'm going to go work on a post.

 

@Sparkshower, I'm happy you made the revisions; past guilt is often great for developing characters. Unfortunately, you still haven't explained the number one thing that makes her most Sueish (besides being Luna's apprentice): Why does everypony hate her? I can understand people not liking her when she was a foal, if she lashed out at others because she couldn't deal with her own guilt. That would be great. Or you could have her try to dominate other ponies because she still feels inferior and weak due to her guilt, so she's constantly power playing other ponies. It would tie in very nicely with her loyalty aspect as well; she can make friends if pressed, but usually they're a means to an end. However, when she does truly make friends, people find out how cruel she can be and ditch her.

 

I hope those suggestions help develop your character. ^^ Unfortunately, we're still closed. I'll let you know if we get an opening. img-1569858-1-smile.png

 

Also, our very own won the Ponyverse design logo contest! img-1572958-2-biggrin.png Congrats, fellow RP'er!

They don't like her because she has no social skills like AT ALL in the story line she develops them in college and Night Guard Academy but before then everyone just thinks she's annoying and she does lash out a lot she's too intense in everything she does they feel like they are being overpowered because she puts all her energy (and she has a lot) into everything. Sometimes it's hard to for me to explain everything about her because she's supposed to be MY ponysona so things I don't understand myself it is hard to understand about her but at least I figured that part out (I changed the thing she felt guilty about for privacy reasons) She's not cruel (she ates cruel people) She's just so intense that people may think she is power playing when she's just giving it her all ( oh you're closed XD I forgot)

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*flops*

 

I hate summer courses. They ought to go stuff themselves like a turkey on the wall of Norman Bates.

 

Has anyone seen any posts from Darkshift? I'll admit I'm being a very poor DM at the moment, as I get the feeling I haven't seen him post at all. Therefore, I'm probably missing something.

 

@RedStorm and @Darkshift, if I don't receive a response from either of you, in the OOC or the IC, within the next 24 hours, I'm unfortunately going to have to clear Dorm #5.

 

@minty, do you exist, sweetie? smile.png

 

And now I seriously need to go post. Poor Pelate, he's gotten saddled with the most antisocial, untrusting zebra ever.

 

(and huzzah for fixing Z keys!! biggrin.png)

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@Earl Gray

 

Poor me, I keep getting shit! XD

 

And @Psych Ward

Why is your character mean to me already? :( jk.

And ha you fell over your own sleeves XD if Pelate was there he'd laugh his flankin flank off!

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