Critique my Comic?

[SilverSprinkles 44]

Hey guys, I wanted a critique on a comic I did based off of

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xfHyQ4m3BxU

This ^ And I'll give you the link

here > http://kibastar521.deviantart.com/art/Aj-393532666

To look at it on my deviantart so you can favorite/comment/etc..

But here it is, I'll put it here. (:

~Silver

[SkyBound 829]

Bonus points for referencing Toy Story!  I think it is quite nice and AJ's facial expressions are spot on.  Plus, I could definitely see Rainbow Dash doing something like this just to tease Applejack.  The only critique I can give is that AJ's freckles seem a little too far forward in the first panel, the hat seems to shrink in the third panel and RD's eyes seem a little off in the last panel (other than the eye color, but that is just nitpicking).  Anyway, very nice job!

[Spartan 433]

Seen this before.. better done..

 

i have a feeling you stole this from someone else. Now if you can prove this is not a copy, than ill believe you.. otherwise, you will be labeled as a thief

[SilverSprinkles 44]

Seen this before.. better done..

 

i have a feeling you stole this from someone else. Now if you can prove this is not a copy, than ill believe you.. otherwise, you will be labeled as a thief

 

Hey,

Thanks for the comment.

Now, I have seen people do this multiple times.

Ive seen it all over deviantart, by multiple different artists.

I suppose I'm not the only one who has done this idea.

And I should have stated this.

But I'll say I did do this myself. And I did draw it myself.

So I wouldn't label myself as a thief, because otherwise,

wouldn't everyone who did this idea be stealing from someone?

Don't be so quick to accuse people of stealing.

 

 

Bonus points for referencing Toy Story!  I think it is quite nice and AJ's facial expressions are spot on.  Plus, I could definitely see Rainbow Dash doing something like this just to tease Applejack.  The only critique I can give is that AJ's freckles seem a little too far forward in the first panel, the hat seems to shrink in the third panel and RD's eyes seem a little off in the last panel (other than the eye color, but that is just nitpicking).  Anyway, very nice job!

 

Hiya~

I didn't notice any of those things until you pointed them out! Haha.

Mainly, the freckles in the first panel, and the hat in the third,

both will be picking at me until I fix them now. Thanks for the comment!

(:

[FruitRiver 355]

I love AJ's expressions. I don't have any critiques that haven't been said already aside from the fact that its been done, but I like it. Nice comic!

[Jamesblorg39welsh 125]

Perfectly shows both characters emotions especially rainbow dash I love it and I think everyone on this forum does too, Nuff said

[Dsanders 5,748]

Well despite the fact that it's been done before apparently, I really like the way your drew it out, it looks nice.

 

Didn't even know it was done before. This is the first time I've seen something like that.

 

Nonetheless, it really gave me a good laugh!

Edited August 19, 2013 by Sanderspie