New Drawing Style. Critique?

[Slice0Pie 815]

As you can tell, This is a new style.

This took 20-30 minutes to draw

As you can tell, the eyes and ears are different

This OC is my friends, Tangerine Mare

Critique?

Also, I know the feet cut off DX

Edited September 14, 2013 by CadenceDerp

[dedacct6 2,591]

I see I see... But there are noticeable flaws Lets begin... So I Se what you're trying to do with the ears but their Way too high, and the neck is too long in the back of the head which is causing that to happen. Also, the body...seems a bit awkward, and the face, the name is tangerine mare, so I assumed its a female, and thus the snout is wrong, that's a stallion snout, you should start using a pony anatomy chart to help out on making your drawings look much more proportionate and accurate to the show along with the art style. Hope this was useful to you

[Slice0Pie 815]

I see I see... But there are noticeable flaws Lets begin... So I Se what you're trying to do with the ears but their Way too high, and the neck is too long in the back of the head which is causing that to happen. Also, the body...seems a bit awkward, and the face, the name is tangerine mare, so I assumed its a female, and thus the snout is wrong, that's a stallion snout, you should start using a pony anatomy chart to help out on making your drawings look much more proportionate and accurate to the show along with the art style. Hope this was useful to you

Haha thanks

But, like I said, I draw way better on paper, here is an old example: http://mlpforums.com/topic/71777-improved-mlp-drawings/

I meant to make the ears long, but I will think of changing that

And the muzzle

I knew it was wrong, but in a way, I meant for it to be like that, I have no idea why though x'D

And like I said, I was aiming for my own style, not so similar to the show style

Thanks!

[Frith is Magick 1,471]

Not for me, maybe for others. I don't know exactly what you were aiming for, so I can't say how close you are to your goal. Either way, It's 10 times better than anything I could draw.