open Last Christmas (Christmas Romance RP)

[)O( Scarlet )O( 1,259]

Dust Storm hobbles out of the elevator and makes his way to the bar. He sits down on a stool and says, "Bar Keep, your strongest beer please! I did and said something I need to forget." He slumps on his stool and rests his head on the counter, "For Celestia's sake, I am so bucking pathetic!"

[Mr. Critical 434]

"Okay, okay. I'll get back in the tub." I hop back in the tub, trying not to make a mess. Whatever has her upset, must be big. But, I'll let her tell me of her own will. Don't want to push it.

"See I'm back in the tub." A gestured and tryed to splash a bit to show of my location. What ever that was outside really shook her.

[LunaKitty R5 88]

(Ok how about we put that he saw me naked and said he liked me at the end of my paragraph?)

 

She climbed into the tub and closed her eyes and leaned agesnt him. She Waited for him to do something. Anything just to make her forget what happened back their... She wasent ready to drink YET

[)O( Scarlet )O( 1,259]

Dust Storm downs his beer in one gulp, orders another one and downs that in one gulp too. He starts thinking about going to bed, "But I'm not ready to go to bed! ANOTHER BEER!" His mind screams at him, "Barkeep! Another beer, and make it a double!" He somehow manages to say in his state of mind.

[Mr. Critical 434]

She got back into the tub. And upon doing so. She leaned against me. Upon contact, I could sense her trouble. I may not know what they are, but I know distress when I see it, or sense it. I put my hooves around her to comfort her. What ever happened happened. All that mattered is here and now.

 

(Sure, why not. I'm almost done with the antagonists, though they will have a connection with my character.)

Edited November 25, 2013 by Mr. Critical

[LunaKitty R5 88]

(Let's g down to the bar and you can defend me their..but she's going to drown herself in beer to XD and prepare for a load of tomboyish drunk ness!)

 

She climbed out and shook herself. She was dry and her hair was normal. He said " I'm ion to the bar..you can come.. Meet you down their!"

 

(She's going to get attacked by h bad guys and you come in NAND save her than you go to the bar)

[)O( Scarlet )O( 1,259]

(did you forget about the note I left under your door, Lunar?)

 

After downing his double beer, Dust Storm starts feeling drunk and stupid, so he gets up on stage and starts singing karaoke.

"Way to go you foal! What if Lunar sees you like this?" He thinks to himself.

So he gets off stage, goes to a table and starts banging his head against it. "STUPID! STUPID! STUPID!" he repeats while doing so

Edited November 25, 2013 by Dust Storm

[Demonic Soulz 483]

((I'm pretty sure i can't do anything anymore))

 

Flare woke up still feeling down, sad, and dead inside. He decided to leave his room and headed down to the bar. "Not like i got anything else to do" He said to him self as he arrived at the bar and saw Dust Storm drunk. He decided sit next to him. "Hey man you okay' He asked

[)O( Scarlet )O( 1,259]

"No, I made Lunar upset!" Dust replies, he rests his head, which showed signs of his hitting it with his hoof, against the wall and the table, on the table and sighs. "I can never do anything right. I'm pathetic, and after...after what i did to Lunar, I wouldn't be surprised if she hates me now."

[Mr. Critical 434]

I dried myself and made my way out. Then I saw something. A note at the foot at the door. It was adressed to Lunar.

-im not one to pry. So I'll give it to her in the lobby.-

I put it away and made my way to the bar. I'll give her the note when I get to her. 'Til then, gotta get to the bar first.

[LunaKitty R5 88]

( my female friend might join soon)

(And she won't read the letter yet. She's still realing form what he said)

 

She got off the elevator and started to walk to the bar. When 2 stallions stepped infront of her. She said "Um hi.. Bar is that was and elevator is that way.." The stallions said "And the hot mare is here!" Lunar panicked. She looked up but their was a oegasus above her. We said scared "What do you want?" The stallion replied "1. Your a star athlete and 2. Your sexy and I want you to be mine.." He smirked and Lunar opened her mouth but nothing came out.

[Demonic Soulz 483]

"I'm about to give up myself since i love her...though no matter what I won't win since she seems to like Critical more' He said as he messed with the ember that no pony hasn't seemed to notice yet. "Maybe I should give up on sear-" Flame was looking around and saw two stallions just standing in front of the elevator. He walked up to them. "Hey you waiting for the elevator or something because it might take a while" He said

[Mr. Critical 434]

I exited the room and made my way to the elevator. Pondering the contents of the note. But, immediately banish those thoughts. Maybe I could get to know who she is a bit more. Her hobbies, and maybe someother things. I exited the elevator and saw Lunar being harased by a couple of colts, I was about to go help out. But, I immediately recognized their faces.

 

(How about their names re Cloud Smasher and Sky Torent.)

[LunaKitty R5 88]

Lunar was full on in tears. She looked at them and said "LUNA!" A large white beam shot from her head and the whole building and some area surrounding it went white. Well the whole world around it. Lunar was sent flying back. Years still falling down her face. She's aw the dark blue alicorn stadia over her body. The room had taken no damage. No pony did either. She said softly "Luna.."

 

(We dig deeper! We now find out she's Luna's sister but Lunar isn't an alicorn but the young version of the dark princess. Cause she was a Pegasus and Celestia was a unicorn)

Edited November 25, 2013 by LunaKitty

[)O( Scarlet )O( 1,259]

Dust Storm remembers the gift he got for Flame, and is about to go to get it when he sees the two mean stallions ganging up on Lunar.

 

"YOU THERE! STOP WHAT YOU ARE DOING!" He shouts to them, forgetting all about his drunkenness and nervousness when he's around Lunar, seeing her in trouble, made him courageous!

 

"STOP IT OR I WILL MAKE YOU!!"

[Demonic Soulz 483]

Flame put his hoof on one of the stallions. "You know you are bothering my friend so I suggest you leave now" He said as his hoof started heating up. "Unless you want to get burned right now" He threatened as a falme appeared in is hoof. "Because my friends being hurt burns me up"

[LunaKitty R5 88]

Lunar said "Sister! You came here.. But how?"

 

Luna said "You teleported me here.. You have your great sisters and I's magic.. But you do not have a horn.."

 

Lunar said "What.. That's cool and all but WHAT?!?! Ok ok i will calm down.." She nuzzled Luna and so did her sister. She smiled as the wrold seemed nicer with her older sister around.

 

(Guys then a giant white explosion happened Luna poped up and here we are)

Edited November 25, 2013 by LunaKitty

[)O( Scarlet )O( 1,259]

Dust Storm sidles up to Flame, "Same goes for me, and I can make dust, and flame and dust don't mix well. So leave our friend alone or face the consequences of being burnt alive!" He glares at them with absolute pure hatred and disgust! "Just because she is beautiful, it doesn't mean that you can gang up on her! LEAVE HER ALONE NOW! Oh, and before I forget, I used to be a Royal Guard! So I know how to fight!"

[Mr. Critical 434]

The two stallions ,dust and flame, were confronting Cloud smasher and Sky torent. They had a dnken glint in there eyes. And now Princess luna, who is related to lunar. Somehow I should have seen that coming. Things can't get any worse.

'Hey buddy, what's goin on.'

-oh, you know. Met a cute mare, comforted her, and going drinking with her. Oh, and those two are here.

'Oh hey Cloud Smasher and Sky torent. I remember them from talent school. Remeber when they broke our legs and fed us that suspicious dirt. Ah, good times.'

-hopefully they don't see us.-

Sky Torent: hey dude, look who it is.

'-Oh, Celestia dammit!-

[Demonic Soulz 483]

((Flame doesn't care at the moment))

 

Flame sent one into the air with a punch before jumping up and slamming one into the floor. "Apparently the princess is here...bad examples right now but still I never will forgive anyone who hurts my friends" He said as his wings went into flames. He grabbed the stallion and flew out before slamming him into the snowy ground. 

 

((He REALLY doesn't care))

Edited November 25, 2013 by Motorloo

[LunaKitty R5 88]

Luna walked up the the fighting stallions. She said "Stop! You are acting foolish! You don't need to shed blood for them up trying to hurt her! You of all ponies should know!" She looked at dust with disappointment. Lunar dance walked up to her sister. Luna said " you 3 you will come back to the castle with me.. You are arrested for assaulting my little sister!" Luna growled.

[)O( Scarlet )O( 1,259]

Dust Storm hangs his head, "y..yes ma'am, I'm sorry, but Lunar was the first pony to comfort me and help me when I was depressed last night and.... I...I upset her before. I'm an idiot." He runs away crying, "YOU IDIOT DUST!!" He yells to himself, as he runs to the bar, and orders another beer.

[Mr. Critical 434]

(I'm going to say she means Critic, Dust, and Flame)

 

I heard luna's order. And I obeyed her order. Hopefully she doesn't recognize me.

'Well, that sorted itself out. Maybe we can get out of this without a vicious maiming.

-lunas here remember what happened the last rime we saw her.-

'You mean her flank or the art gallery's destruction.'

-Both.-

Edited November 25, 2013 by Mr. Critical

[Demonic Soulz 483]

Flame stopped as he heard Luna. "Yes princess" He stepped back from the pony. "You better be glad I didn't burn you" His flaming wings died down and closed. He went back inside and sat at the bar. "Completely lost my anger...that is not good...especially in front of Princess and Lunar"

 

(she meant two I asked her)

[LunaKitty R5 88]

Luna levitated the bp2 bad ponies and put them into a cage and they teleported away. She turned to the stallion and grunted. "Your the one who said my butt looked big!" Lunar ran infront of her sister "WHAT?!?" She turned and growled at critic "I see were you got it from.." She was so close to punching his face. "HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT TO THE PRINCESS AND MY SISTER! YOU DOG DOGDOG DOG DOOOOGGG!" She whipped critic (Zero no Tsukaima reference!) She finished and she was panting. She dropped the whip and snorted. She said "I am sorry sister that he said that to you! He would often stare at my rump to.. He's a pervert and I'm sorry!" She bowed. Luna nodded and said "I must be going now.. Good day." And she teleported away