ooc Shifted: The Three Essences of Heart (OOC)

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

@@Wolfe,

Of course! Wow, you really got me by surprise. I thought you were dead or something.

 

You're reserved. We're starting tommorow. Try to get your form in by then. :3 

[Wolfe 71]

After the edits, here's Brave Heart! He's had a drastic change within the last year or so. Pallette swaps, differing backstory, and the cutie mark appears! Here you go!

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/brave-heart-r46

[Rascal~ 657]

Yay, I can't wait for the rp!
And I love your commissioned pics @@Wolfe, I love JitterJives artwork and style

[valete 195]

@@Wolfe,

 

For some reason, your OC reminds me a lot of my OC! 

 

This is going to be interesting.   

[Wolfe 71]

Just a quick note. I modified the Shifted backstory, as I realized I might as well update that and that it still had details of Brave Heart's old palette colors. Aside from that, everything should be in working order.

Edited December 31, 2013 by Wolfe

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

After the edits, here's Brave Heart! He's had a drastic change within the last year or so. Pallette swaps, differing backstory, and the cutie mark appears! Here you go!

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/brave-heart-r46

Accepted, of course! :3 Would be pretty silly if you somehow didn't make it into this one whilst being in the first.

 

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ATTENTION! The RP has now started. Here's the thread. Have fun, everything, and let's make this awesome! (Note: You don't have to be as long as my intro post. It's just long like that because I needed to establish a lot to start off with)

[Moonbacon 384]

the rp link in your signiture says open though its closed might wanna change that

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

@,

It was just recently closed, so that's why I haven't changed it yet. I only just accepted the last person who had reserved and wasn't officially accepted, so now it's officially closed.

 

Now it's changed.

[Moonbacon 384]

i was gonna join with my pegasus oc but meh that's ok il so go melt my brain on gimp.

[Rascal~ 657]

I'll be making the waking up/reveal post tomorrow, just wanted to extend on how she would get there and then make the next post all about that. 

[AfTeRwArDs 509]

Oh yay, the RP's started!  What's up with all the colored dialogue though? 'Cause if we're doing that I call dibs on green. :U

 

Anyhoof, I shall be making my post momentarily.

[Contrast 292]

Back, and time to do some reading.

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

Back, and time to do some reading.

Sure as hell do. There's a LOT going on. @_@

 

Like Ampharos and his silly character who has me giggling. I LOVE him. :3

[Wolfe 71]

Sure as hell do. There's a LOT going on. @_@

 

Like Ampharos and his silly character who has me giggling. I LOVE him. :3

It's really interesting that this character is from another time period on Earth! I like that! Adds variety to this aside from regular character personalities and progression.

[Ampharos 1,009]

Yea I feel like it's gonna be a bit hard to right for him, just cause I'm gonna have to have him be confused about literally everything the others talk about

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

@,

I've observed your latest two posts, and I'll have to say, I'm not really impressed with the quality of them. There's a lot of typoes in the first, more so than the acceptable level for this RP. The second has your character appearing out of nowhere with little detail or description of their shock and reaction to being in a new world. They just walk towards the others casually, not wondering what types of creatures they are or who they are. There's really no sort of depth to it.

 

So I'll have to say this: I'll give you a chance to improve, and I'll give you advice to do so. But if you continue to perform like this, I'll be forced to remove you. My apologies for being this blunt, but there's no other way I can say it to make it sound nice.

 

Now, I'll give you some advice here: Try giving your character some more depth to their emotions, actual reactions and contemplation of what is happening rather than having him appear out of nowhere and kind of just walk up to the other ponies. And make sure to keep your spelling and grammar in check. 

 

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All right, so the first post exploded. But worry not! I rewrote it entirely from scratch because I'm pretty aware it'll take them a while to reverse the weirdness and I don't have the patience to wait.

 

Tell me if I missed anything. Any rules or such. :3

Edited January 6, 2014 by Arylett Dawnsborough

[Rascal~ 657]

@,
I have a question Arylett, would it be possible if we can use that cool rp code that's going around for our rp. The one where our avatars and that become our characters, it may enhance the experience and make it easier? 
I'm just thinking that it would be cool. 

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

@,I have a question Arylett, would it be possible if we can use that cool rp code that's going around for our rp. The one where our avatars and that become our characters, it may enhance the experience and make it easier? I'm just thinking that it would be cool.

 

If it's possible, I don't see why not. Didn't know there was one.

[Rascal~ 657]

@,
I've been in a couple rps where they used it. Though one of those there was over 12 people so it was needed to get through all the confusion, and it also places the links to the character page and occ in the bottom of each post to make things easier  

[Senor Citizen 516]

I'm pitching a tent outside the door, because when someone drops out, and they will, I want to be here.

[Ampharos 1,009]

No now I'm gonna be forced to make a visual design for Forgefire! D: (jk)

[IridscentNionios 1,420]

Everytime i see an interesting roleplay like this it just is full or something. I mean i am all in for being active and stuff and i am lucky enough to have found a roleplay that hasn't just been sleeping for freaking eternity but other than that roleplays kinda tend to just die off before the story actually completes itself... *sigh* Sorry for my rant... i just thought this was a great RP and i am kinda sad i lost the chance to join it.

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

All righty, if people keep expressing interest about getting into this thing, I might just have to open up two more slots.

 

We'll wait and see. 

[IridscentNionios 1,420]

@, Alright i'll be here.

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

Hey people, I've just made this plot-moving post and suddenly you all stop posting? ;~; It's been one day, so the two post rule isn't relevant anymore. So c'mon, let's keep it up!