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Ideas for my Canterlot Wedding Alternate Ending fanfic


Wardaddy

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Hi there everypony (and faithful fanfic readers).

 

I apologize for the delay in updating my fanfic, but I'm either cursed with writer's block, or I'm suddenly stuck for ideas. Seeing as I'm basing this thread on the latter, I came here to ask for ideas. What I need is a name for the sixth and next chapter of my fanfic, plus an opening to said chapter. Here is the story so far. (Don't worry, it's quite brief)

 

Canterlot has fallen to Chrysalis and her Changeling Army. Despite a firm, steadfast defense, Shining Armor and his Royal Guards have failed to defend the castle and are now being led away to the throne room, which will soon contain the entire populace of Canterlot. At present, Princess Celestia and Luna have been imprisoned in the wedding hall, trapped in two cocoons, which are slowly but surely feeding on their love, and turning them into Changelings. Having just witnessed her sister experience a bout of regret from a flashback of what she said to Twilight at the rehearsal, Luna has become suspicious, and also a little bitter towards Celestia, which will lead to a demand for answers. Meanwhile, the Mane 5 and Spike are infiltrating the city and are making their way to the castle, intent on stopping Chrysalis once and for all. And lastly, Twilight will soon receive a visual from Princess Celestia showing Canterlot under attack, which will prompt her to take action.

 

Having read all of that, I'd very much like if you guys could give me ideas. Once I have received a good number of valid titles, I will put it to a vote, which you guys can decide on. So please, ladies and gents, I need some bones to chew on.

Edited by ~Psychotic Blitz~

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"Ideals are peaceful.........history is violent"

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My OC - https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tough-nut-r8817

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With her friends in tow, twilight makes a charge for the castle, challenging crysalis to single armed combat. Blades and magic clash, as the elements of harmony fight to retake the castle, winning only once they use the dragon amulet. 

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Mine's going to be a stretch but I think this is good for you to start,

 

"The situation right now is looking extremely dire for all of Equestria, especially Canterlot. Chrysalis and her forces have triumphed over the Royal Guard and the Princesses and have infiltrated the throne and once again, leaving Equestria's capital city in a state that's worse for wear as the Mane 5 and Spike made their way through the city, hoping to stop the Changeling Queen for good and mend the bond with Twilight that they destroyed. Along the way, they try to figure out a plan over how to save Princess Cadence after the invasion and what they could try to do to earn Twilight's forgiveness. Back in the Canterlot Castle throne room, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna were imprisoned in the same transmutation cocoons that are used to trap Celestia and the other captured ponies in Canterlot during the first invasion. Chrysalis and her army were bringing in any ponies in the city that were captured during their latest attack, left only to wonder what could possibly happen to them now that the Changelings have infiltrated Canterlot once again. Princess Celestia and her sister looked down from their prisons at the grief-stricken ponies that were taken into the throne room as Chrysalis' prisoners and the Princess of the Sun wondered what they're going to do now and hope that Twilight received her vision spell in time. As the imprisoned ponies were lead into the room, Princess Luna secretly made a telepathic link between her and her elder sister to try and get some answers out of her, suspicious of what happened that could've transpired what she missed during her duties many nights ago and her slumber on the day of the fake wedding."

 

For the Title, I'm think of something along the lines of: What to do Now?

 

That's all I can come up for you there, hope it helps

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Mine's going to be a stretch but I think this is good for you to start,

 

"The situation right now is looking extremely dire for all of Equestria, especially Canterlot. Chrysalis and her forces have triumphed over the Royal Guard and the Princesses and have infiltrated the throne and once again, leaving Equestria's capital city in a state that's worse for wear as the Mane 5 and Spike made their way through the city, hoping to stop the Changeling Queen for good and mend the bond with Twilight that they destroyed. Along the way, they try to figure out a plan over how to save Princess Cadence after the invasion and what they could try to do to earn Twilight's forgiveness. Back in the Canterlot Castle throne room, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna were imprisoned in the same transmutation cocoons that are used to trap Celestia and the other captured ponies in Canterlot during the first invasion. Chrysalis and her army were bringing in any ponies in the city that were captured during their latest attack, left only to wonder what could possibly happen to them now that the Changelings have infiltrated Canterlot once again. Princess Celestia and her sister looked down from their prisons at the grief-stricken ponies that were taken into the throne room as Chrysalis' prisoners and the Princess of the Sun wondered what they're going to do now and hope that Twilight received her vision spell in time. As the imprisoned ponies were lead into the room, Princess Luna secretly made a telepathic link between her and her elder sister to try and get some answers out of her, suspicious of what happened that could've transpired what she missed during her duties many nights ago and her slumber on the day of the fake wedding."

 

For the Title, I'm think of something along the lines of: What to do Now?

 

That's all I can come up for you there, hope it helps

Wow, that's good. Once more, my lad, you have helped me out of a ditch. Now to rewrite this in my own words, and as for the title, I have one thought of: Who Dares, Wins

 

Ok everypony, please do not reply to this topic. As of now, it is closed.

Edited by ~Psychotic Blitz~

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"Ideals are peaceful.........history is violent"

Sgt. Don "Wardaddy" Collier

My OC - https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tough-nut-r8817

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