RedStorm

@@Gloomfury, @@Dovashy, ((Quest time?)) Red shrugged. "Suit yourself." He carelessly said and threw the bag into a corner. What he was expecting was a thump, but instead, it sounded like someone caught it. "Well, well, well... what do we have here?" A voice said. Red turned his head to see the figure better. It was a silver colored stallion, who wore sunglasses and a fancy suit. Much like all the richer ponies. "Oh, I'm sorry, but I couldn't help but to overhear your conversation." The stallion said with a smirk. "It seems like my... friend has caused you a bit of trouble, yes?" "You mean, the pony who..." "Forced you to give him 50 bits in two days, yes. Mind you, he isn't corrupt at all. He just want's his share so he could feed his family." "His share?" Red asked, puzzled. "Look, I'm running... or ran a gang in this city. Guards, who were forced into working for me. Regular ponies were pretty much mugged in the alleys... I was one of the richest ponies in town. I had everything. Bodyguards, money, money, and money. After an incident, I was left with only one of the poor sods. No more guards... no more money... and that all was because someone poked his head in when he didn't need to. He calls himself Stained Steel, and by the looks of your wounds..." He motions over to Red's wing. "You've already met him and his friends... he's the one collecting up all the bits from the street's. Clean work, if I say so myself. But it has gone too far." Taking a few steps towards Red, the pony threw the bag of bits over his shoulder. "I'm offering you... and your friends a deal: We take him off the streets, you all get the money that is left over in the streets, eventually becoming as rich as I once was. Imagine it all... houses, food, money, all you can imagine. And what do I get? The satisfaction that the scum is gone for good. Think about it. By the way, the 50 bits you were supposed to deliver will be transfered to someone else if you're up for the task." He walked to the door and opened it, turning back to say: "If you havae made up your mind, I'll be waiting just outside this door. Oh, and miss guard, I think you are smart enough to not call the others, yes?" Then he left, leaving the three alone again. "Well... that was weird." Red said out loud, looking at Trench and the guard pony.

@, Hmm... Well could he be the boss of the ONE pony, who had been forced to work for him. Is that better? Well you could always come down to the hospital!

@, So is Steel good to go?

Could you draw Redstorm for me? He's in my signature

Oh god no. Disney. No. Get out. Nao. Just. No, dude. No. No. No no no. Bad Disney. No. No. Spoiler alert: It sucks

Ill use another character if that's okay. http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/steelhooves-r3557 Could he be the leader of the corrupt guard ponies who secretly work for him? I have a bunch of ideas planned if that's okay.

"I'm Redstorm. Nice to meet you." His heart jumped as Trench places the money on his lap and he was about to reach out and take it, but changed his mind. "Nah, you take it. For saving my life. Either way,i f I take it, I will get guards after me. If I don't take it, I will still get guards after me. Here, just take it, do whatever you want with it, but I don't want to see this ever again. I'm not a thief. I was really forced to do this. The city and the ponies aren't the only thing that's corrupted, the ROYAL guards are as well. I was about to buy myself some food from the marketplace, but before I could step inside, a gate guard stopped me. Said that I was infected and he could turn a "blind eye" if i brought him fifty bits and the deadline was in two days..." After reminding himself of all that, he looked down on his hooves. "Two days, huh..."

Red's wing twitched for a second as Trench mentioned it's state. Seeing him sad made Red confused and a bit angry at the same time. "Hey, what are you talking about? If I hadn't bumped into you, I would've been probably executed."He frowns at the guard. "Seriously, you were a godsend at that point. And I understand you feel bad for me getting hurt, but I'll take a damaged wing and a headwound anytime over death."A smile grew on his face. "By the way, I believe I never got your name!" He realized.

@@Gloomfury, @@Dovashy, The bed that the doctors carried Red on was soft and warm, Red was happy to get a bed like that. It felt like soft grass, or perhaps more like a cloud, that was perfect for naps. He could nearly see himself there... just like the old days. The wind gently brushed his hair, while the cloud moved onward. Unfortunately for Red, that dream didn't last long either and he had been waken up by someone talking. Red's eyes shot open, but quickly closed again, blinded by the light that hanged above him. He blinked his eyes quickly, trying to get the blurryness out. After he could actually see, he felt the pain in his head be a lot weaker than he remembered and his wing was bandaged. *What the-? Where am I? I don't remember the hospital still being somewhere after the plague...* After enjoying the extremely comfortable bed, Red sat up and saw the pony who saved him and the guard. Have the guards finally pinned them down? Red looked outside the window. It was dark. Very dark. No one sensible would go out into this kind of darkness. Looking back at the guard, he noticed that she was dizzy, so he decided to leave. But where? Lost in thought, Red made a loud squeak. The kind of squeak a scared filly would make after they saw a dragon. The best thing Red came up with now was to just hold still. Maybe they didn't hear it?

"Yes! Out of that horrible place!" Red quietly cheered after he was out of the alley. Finally, he could go away from this dark death hole... away from this street... away from this city! "But not in a shape like th- Hey, what the!?" Making future plans, Red got picked up by... something."No, no! It was the guards who did it!" He yelled in his confusion, thinking that the guards got him. The metal armor beneath him only added to that feeling. Finally taking the sensible option and looking under himself, he noticed the pony who saved him before carry him and a... guard? Red was too tired and in too much pain to ask him what the hell was exactly going on, so he just focused on looking back, to see if any one followed them. The heart inside Red's body jumped as suddenly shadows covered them inside the hospital and the next thing he knew, he was lying under a bright light. He felt his nose tickle for a second as one of the doctors cast a spell on him, making him sleep.

Luftrausers. Seriously, that game is harder than Dark Souls lol.

Honestly, I don't really mind either ones. But I guess I need to vote so modern it is.

Yes! I always wanted to join one of these! I will be using Redstorm, who will be found in my signature.

Wow, thanks mate! Again, I love the style! Now, would you mind if I posted this onto my OC page? Just as a reference picture. Of course, giving you the credit for it!

Yeah! I mean like, who doesn't? TPAM is allergic to grass.

Everytime I look at stuff like this, I'm amazed what people can do. (Maybe it's because I suck at drawing.) Anyways... I would like my OC Redstorm drawn. You're the first one to draw him on request, so yay to you!

The three loud bangs against the ground woke Red up. Slowly opening his eyes, he saw a guard take down the fellow with the club, but the picture was too blurry to clearly tell who the guard was. Trying to move, Red immediately felt massive pain in his wing and his head wasn't in that great of a shape as well. He shook off the blurryness, which helped a bit. Red knew that it was only a matter of time till the guards get to him. *I can't help anyone in this situation... a single kick would bring me down again.* He thought to himself while trying to crawl away. *Why didn't I just tell the guards about that one guy? Why did I ran away with the pony I don't even know or trust? Why did I steal those bits in the first place?* Red had nearly made it out of the alley. The dark light that covered the streets never seemed so light... *Come on, hooves, just a little more....*

OH MY GOD THE WORLD HAS EXPANDED TO INFINITY! I COULD START MY OWN KINGDOM! I COULD SELL ALL THE MINERALS IN THE WORLD! I WOULD BE RICH! I CAN LITERALLY DO WHATEVER I WANT!!! On the other hand.... *Resumes doing absolutely nothing in his computer*

Onision. Everytime I mention that name, I just want to put a gun to my mouth. He's simply put just a horrible person. "What should I do when my gf's having a mental breakdown? Oh, I know, I should film her and put the video up on YouTube!" In one of his "help" videos, he made it sound like the victim was the criminal. Seriously, how is a child guilty when his or her mother abuses him or her???? Also, he makes fun of rape. And I don't mean just a bad joke or anything, no, that guy takes it to full scale. (Go check out his video "Pupppy Love" I think for that) Also, his arch nemesis MrRepsion or whatever, who does a great job on explaining what he does wrong btw, made a video called "The Last Fall of Onision" Or something. Basically, Onision, on the 4th. of July (For those outside of America it's their independence day.) instead of going out and celebrating, decided to stay inside, be a little bitch and debate a SOCK. Wow. Instead of going out and celebrating your country's independence, you decide to stay inside your house and insult a RepSock. A parody. Wow. I just don't have any more words for this guy. In case I'm going to get hate messages below, I've built a wall under this message. Good luck getting through that! Now excuse me while I go hang myself for reminding myself all of that bs __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________

((How do you just roll your eyes and dodge all the punches of a berserk pony, who would literally go through a stone wall if he had to just to kill you? Just asking.)) Red felt hooves slammed against his forehead. He found himself lying down next to a wall after the impact, his broken wing covering most of his body. In addition to his already bleeding wing, Red was also bleeding from his head now. Blood ran down his face, and he closed his eyes. His leg stopped moving and he was breathing quietly. He seemed dead at first sight, but his ribcage rising and lowering gave it away. Everything became gloomy and all the sounds echoed in Red's ear. One more second.... and he passed out.

((Sorry, on a phone, can't quote)) "OH REALLY NOW!? WELL I GOT SOMETHING HERE THAT WILL FIX THAT UGLY FACE OF YOURS!" Red yelled. First the guy throws knives into him then acts as it was nothing? That was outrageous! Starting to feel the pain in his wing again, he realized there was no time to waste. If he cooled down too much, the strenght would be gone and the pain would come. Still mad, Red started throwing punches at Steel. Some of the daggers fell out of his wing, which made Red smirk a bit. Who knows? These daggers could be infected by the virus somehow! That was it! Obviously these new ponies wanted to infect them first, then take them to a secret lab or something to perform tests! How didn't Red's brilliant brain think of that earlier? Well even he knew that it would be silly, but he forced himself to think that way. Which made him more angry, which allowed him to put more strenght and speed into his attacks...

@@dashian500, @@Gloomfury, "How in the word did I get myself into this?" Red asked himself, second later screaming from pain. All 4 knives penetrated his wing, dangling painfully as Red tried to pull them out. Looking over at Steel, he yell: "WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO!? WHAT DID I EVER DO TO YOU!? I CAN'T FLY ANYMORE!" The pain was unbearable and Red was on the verge of crying. What made it worse, was that the wing had just healed from the flight a few hours ago. The crimson pegasus went absolutely berserk after that. Not caring about his wing or the pain, he pulled out a loose brick and rushed towars Steel. His light blue eyes turned blood red from the anger. Surely, something broke behind them. Red was a handshake away from Steel... it had to be done. Noone does this to Redstorm. He closed his eyes and brought the brick down onto Steel with all his might...

:D :D :D @@Gloomfury, @, @@Dovashy, "Hey hey hey! I swear I didn't do anything!" Red yelled as he was pushed towards the courthouse. As he quickly planned his next move, somepony called out "WHO WANTS FREE BITS!?" Great. Not only is he going to rot in the dungeon, his hard earned bits are being given away to some peasants. The very next moment, they were surrounded by ponies, desperately gathering those precious bits. Red even saw someone nearly bash another one's eye in. As he just accepted his faith, someone grabbed his leg and pulled it, signaling him to follow. Even more guards had run down there, trying to contain the ponies. Now was his chance, he quickly crawled under the fighting ponies and ran after a figure, probably the one who was pulling his leg. The stallion suddenly turned towards an alley, and Red did the same...