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  1. Satsuki Kiryuin
    The vocal sampling seems to overshadow the instrumental at times. The ARP isn't bad, but the synth that accompanies it is very simple and makes the song sound less professional than it could be. The drop has had no transition. Transitioning is important to keep the flow of the song. The beat is very basic and keeps the song boring. I recommend listening to other dubstep tracks and listening to the beat rhythms between the kick, snare, and drop. I'm sorry but, as Haven said, I'm not feeling it. Also, I am not going to blame Equestria Daily for liking it, since I don't. I'm going to blame you, because you made the track, and I'm addressing my critique to you, not Equestria Daily.
  2. Satsuki Kiryuin
    I'm sorry but, what kind of preview is this? You just posted a picture of a drum beat made on the step sequencer, and now its tags are "Dubstep", "Celestia", and "Luna"? This isn't really a preview, it's more so just a snapshot of a beat anyone could replicate.
  3. Satsuki Kiryuin
    Sounds good, I'll give it a try~ Thanks for checking out my track. I really appreciate the praise that I've received. Thank you!
  4. Satsuki Kiryuin
    Hello MLPForums! I come to your humble domain once again to share a new remix of WoodenToaster's, "Rainbow Factory", that I am quite proud of. I call my remix the, "Electro Factory", remix, because it is my attempt at making an Electro House remix of the song.^^ Hope you enjoy~ - Otty
  5. Satsuki Kiryuin
    Too bad one of the only people defending OP is just sad~ Really. you decided to linger on to this? What's the point? You're wrong, I'm right~
  6. Satsuki Kiryuin
    Not to be rude, but she did say she was willing to vector it. She then found out what kind of a pony it was and doesn't want to do it anymore. I see no attitude in this at all. Can't an artist change his/her mind?
  7. Satsuki Kiryuin
    It sounds pretty rad, dude! The mastering could be a bit better, because it does sound kinda messy. But other than that, it is a great track, well done!
  8. Satsuki Kiryuin
    Wow LeGen! I must admit, I do enjoy this a lot! I love what you did with this French House track. Well done, there's nothing else I have to say.^^
  9. Satsuki Kiryuin
    Thanks for the feedback, I very much appreciate it. You have in no way killed any "fun". You've just ensured that I will improve.^^ Thank you very much, i will keep this stuff in mind~
  10. Satsuki Kiryuin
    Enjoy! A remix I made of WoodenToaster's awesome MLP Fansong, "Beyond Her Garden". The download is in the description. Genre: Progressie House Time: 8 Minutes & 15 Seconds BPM: 130 Original Artist: Wooden Toaster Remix Artist: Otarine(Me)
  11. Satsuki Kiryuin
    I'd like to start off by saying, I listened to your first song, and I do enjoy the structure very much. The synths are very pleasing to my ears and I do think it's a well made track. I do however recommend that you work on volume control, because certain sounds overshadow others and make it sound messy. I also think the kick should be louder than all the instruments, but that's just my Dance-senses tingling. Well done~ I wish you luck in your career~
  12. Satsuki Kiryuin
    I apologize, I seemed to have derped while posting my critique. But thank you for being ever so respectful.^^ I'm very happy to see people that appreciate honest criticism.
  13. Satsuki Kiryuin
    I think that your cover/remix is nice. The synths are pleasing, and the beat is pretty nice sounding. I can't help much with vocals, but can I just say, I think your instrumental could do with more vocals, and sidechaining the synths to the kick. I usually sidechain the synths to the kick at 10%. I also think the clap could be quieter, so it sounds a little less cleaner.
  14. Satsuki Kiryuin
    I recommend you sidechain your synths to the kick so that the kick will be louder, I'm glad you appreciate the critique, I enjoy helping. ^^
  15. Satsuki Kiryuin
    I think it's pretty good, it could do with some added layers on the melody, and piano(?) parts, to make it sound less empty. I also think that you should work a little on your volume control, since the synth largely overpowers the piano(?). The beat could be a bit better, maybe add a kick? Other than that, it's a nice track, good job.^^
  16. Satsuki Kiryuin
    I think you should attempt sampling with FL, it's a breeze. I always have samples, from transitions to drum loops, and even synths. Give sampling on FL a try, it'll help you learn the DAW for sure.^^
  17. Satsuki Kiryuin
    It sounds okay. You should work more on the relationship between the synths and the beat. You should also work on the melody somewhat, it's not too catchy. I do believe you should add more layers, because it sounds empty. You also need a lot more than just a bass to make it sound good. You're lacking transitions, but it's nothing vengeance samples can't fix. I do think you could improve by a lot more, and I think you should check out tutorials on Youtube for whatever DAW you're using. - Otty~
  18. Satsuki Kiryuin
    You have potential, that's for sure. You have all the main requirements for an Electronic song. I recommend you search tutorials on Youtube on volume control, EQ, and mastering although. I also think you could add more layers to your track, and sidechain the synths to the kick. It sounds somewhat empty so far, so I do think you'd need more layers. You should also try finding some good sample packs for transition effects, for they make your track sound better. Vengeance Samples are good. I really think you could improve by so much, so I give you my best regards. Good luck~ - Otty~
  19. Satsuki Kiryuin
    If you're still learning to use FL Studio, I recommend searching tutorials on Youtube, that's how I learned almost 90% of how I produce now. The track is good, but you could perhaps practice volume control for a start, samples are good for practicing song structure as well. Go ahead and play around, you learn the most by experimenting.~
  20. Satsuki Kiryuin
    First off, there's such a thing as listening to different genres, but not producing them. I've listened to quite a few French House, specifically Daft Punk and Silva Hound. I may not be familiar with the genre, but I understand how it works. I myself have produced one French House track. It's no where near the best, but it does the job. Another mistake, in my opinion. When you produce a track, you're under constant bias. You care too much about your original work that you ignore many big things that require tweaks.
  21. Satsuki Kiryuin
    I realize that you're aiming for a more club-ish track, but somewhere in the mix, certain samples/melodies don't fit with the key-signature. You should be careful about that, because it can make any song sound like crap, or even creepy. I do believe they're sample based? Perhaps you were aiming for French House? I've read your latest post, and that makes you sound absolutely unprofessional. Deleting a song just because you received honest critique? That's overreacting, in my opinion. You need to accept any critique you can get, no matter negative or positive.
  22. Satsuki Kiryuin
    The reason for my sampling of Queen Chrysalis during the beginning and end is because I wanted to make it clear, that this was aimed at Chrysalis, and to make it as a sort of, "story", going on in her head as she sings and watches Canterlot fall to shreds.
  23. Satsuki Kiryuin
    I always liked the Opera pony the most. I guess it's because the colour scheme is very appealing to me, and her hairstyle is pretty pretty. :3
  24. Satsuki Kiryuin
    Wow dude, that actually looks really cool! I like the flame concept, but I think "Dashing" should be more visible, in my opinion it's too covert and hard to read without proper attention. Nonetheless, it's a great wallpaper.^^
  25. Satsuki Kiryuin
    Hello MLPForums, i'm that one dude that barely goes on. I just released an album called Friendly Diverse Nomming, which is based off a lot of my good friends.^^ This is one of the tracks from the album. It's called "Queen of Disguise" and is a fansong based off of Chrysalis. I hope you enjoy n' stuff.
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