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[GreyScale 7]

Here is the first of the mane characters in this story

 

 

Name: Checkmate

 

Gender: Male

 

Race: Unicorn

 

Body Color: Black

 

Mane Color: White

 

Cutie Mark: A White Knight from Chess

 

Talent: Strategy and Tactics

 

Occupation: Tactician For The Royal Guards, Technical Rank Being Lieutenant

 

Personality: Very curt and can come off as standoffish to those whom he is not familiar with. To any friends he makes, he is more light, but still tends take things seriously. Not one for pranks or jokes Checkmate prefers intelligent conversation any day. To those who don't know him, he may come off as emotionless.

 

Backstory: Born and raised in Manehatten, Checkmate is certainly no stranger to strife. His parents, although certainly not abusive, were negligent, and Checkmate quickly learned to only trust himself. Although intelligent from a young age, he didn't get his cutie mark until he was about half-way through schooling, defeating his teacher flawlessly in a game of chess. After his schooling, Checkmate moved out on his own, and, without any options, found himself joining the Royal Guards. Although physically weak, he managed to continually show his talent for strategy to his superiors, such as managing to contain a rampaging dragon with minimal damage to the area, and capturing a famed bandit leader, and as such found himself rising through the ranks fairly quickly. Unfortunately, during the changeling invasion of Canterlot, he was framed by a changeling for horrible orders, which led to his superiors transferring him to Ponyville, in a move that angered the once proud pony. According to them, he was transferred so that "He might make a friend or two to help him through his problems."

 

Likes: Quiet time, chess, victory.

 

Dislikes: Loss, those he considers "annoying" (Loud, obnoxious, pranksters, etc.), emotional people.

[child of the night 271]

@@GreyScale, 

 

Hey I think you made this in the wrong section of the forum, if it is your character I would suggest putting it into the database located on the home page.

[GreyScale 7]

Its not my character, its one of the ones for this story

One of my friends asked that I make a story, so I am doing that

[Pinkamena Dianne Pie 465]

@@GreyScale,

 

What Child meant, is that this type of thing, who your OC is, all his characteristics, and the backstory, actually belong in a different section of the site. The place you're looking for for this is the "Character Database" Sub-section in the "Roleplay World" Sub-forum. There you will find a place to archive your OC and list down all the information about him.  

[GreyScale 7]

Ohh, okies, should I remove this then?

[Pinkamena Dianne Pie 465]

@@GreyScale, 

 

Are you writing a fan fiction, or making a roleplay? Otherwise, you can't delete topics. You could ask a mod to hide it, but if you're writing a fan fiction, leave this up and just edit your post to remove the OC information, which you would put in the character database, and put the fan fiction here with links to the characters that would be in it if you so desired to include them in the post.

[GreyScale 7]

I am writing a fanfic about a roleplay...so I think I'll just edit this...

Shoot, I can't edit it....Shame....

[child of the night 271]

 

 

Shoot, I can't edit it....Shame....

 

How can you not edit it, there should be an edit button on the bottom right of the post, is it not working for you?