Do the Duel

[ideaguy1998 15]

I have an idea for an episode of MLP:FIM called "Do the Duel".

Here's the plot:

All the ponies in Ponyville throw Trixie an apology party.  But Trixie gets hung and beat up like a pinata and hit in her groin several times.  Next, Trixie gets used as the donkey in pin the tail on the donkey.  Half of Trixie's cutie mark gets ripped off and everypony gives this to Trixie:

"Boo-hoo!  Looks like Twit-sie lost what made her special!"

"But what's so special about her!  She was a dumb fraud anyway!"

"That's because she's really a donkey, not a pony!"

Then Trixie gets twirled around on the dance floor with a bunch of ribbons and kicked to a table.  Finally, Trixie gets force-fed the cake.  To wash it down, Trixie is given some punch, but it turns out to be drugged.  She passes out and everypony send her floating off to dragon territory.  Somepony tells Trixie this while making a rape face:

"Have fun with the dragons, the gross and powerless Twit-sie!"

Snips and Snails then dash off to save Trixie.  But Snips and Snails keep on messing up, slowing them down.  At dragon territory, Trixie wakes up and asks if anypony's there.  All the teenage dragons from "Dragon Quest" tell her to shut up because no one wants anything to do with her.  Trixie tells them to get her back to Equestria if they don't want her around.  But the teenage dragons' response?  They charge at her.  But we finally get an awesome fight in which Trixie manages to win through pure skill even if her horn gets broken in the process.  Snips and Snails finally find Trixie and guide her back to Equestria.  They tell everypony of the fight.  But Trixie is a laughingstock once again, and this time, for losing her horn.  Enraged, Trixie calls everypony out for treating her like crap.  But even the princesses, the Mane Six, and the CMC view her as an asshole for doing so.  Twilight tells Trixie that she was judging everypony and that it's something only Princess Celestia can do.  So Trixie gets sent to Magic Kindergarten and gets laughed at by the idiot foals.

Tell me what you thought of that by answering the polls. 

[Shift 4,272]

What the hell did I just read?

 

There are no words.

Edited June 12, 2014 by Shift

[ideaguy1998 15]

what the hell did I just read

 What's wrong with it?

[Banul 3,831]

No offense dude, but that sounds like somebody's bad fanfiction. 

 

 What's wrong with it?

Public humiliation. implied rape, mutilation and beatings aren't exactly in the theme of the show.

 

You also made every character a douche bag, which would never go over well.

[ideaguy1998 15]

No offense dude, but that sounds like somebody's bad fanfiction. 

 

Public humiliation. implied rape, mutilation and beatings aren't exactly in the theme of the show.

 

You also made every character a douche bag, which would never go over well.

How does what Trixie did in Magic Duel compare to the fake apology party?

[ideaguy1998 15]

Let me confess:

I was trolling.

[Sunbro 4 Lyfe 939]

 

 

I was trolling.

 

[ideaguy1998 15]

You won't believe it, but I found somepony who would call "Do the Duel" the best episode ever if it were made.  I told the user Rainflow Cash, formally Rainblow Hash, the same plot and she replied with this:

"Hooves down, best episode of the series thus far."

And I replied "You just called what would make one of the most mean spirited episodes the best one ever."

And Rainflow Cash responded, "Of course it would be the best episode ever. It's so unbelievable and out of left-field that anything less than calling it the best episode ever would be a sin. Yes, it sounds mean-spirited, but how does that detract from it being the best episode? Does an episode of a show have to heart-warming to be the best? No, it can be mean-spirited yet funny to be the best."

And I asked if the fake apology party would be a good punishment for Trixie or if it was worse than what she's done in Magic Duel and Evil Dragon Master and Deathstroke brohoofed my post.

[ideaguy1998 15]

How would you react if this was Diamond Tiara's dream?