writing Maybe it's just a dream

[Astral Blitzen 469]

When I'm tired or relaxed I like to write these random phrases and parts of dreams that are in my head...

 

We can look beyond every outer night and see what the trees hiss. We wish we could leave the container open, but no one cares about the heart. But if someone does then let the turtle be whipped and the gate be locked because I know people who itch every scratch on their murderous hands. Shout for the wanting of many carpet dressers, but remember that one is enough to this hooliage of smodge. 

Bearing teeth at a train conductor, I swam across the abyss and fell into a nebulous light. I caught the hoops in my hand as I fell through and tossed them at the shadow that repeated my words. Out of the abyss, I saw that a mirror had been travelling toward me. It came closer and closer and then the shadow came out of it and slapped me in the face. 

Edited June 13, 2014 by Astral Blitzen

[Espurr 449]

That's a great...dream. It sounds more like a poem to me. Anyways, it's still good.

[Astral Blitzen 469]

That's a great...dream. It sounds more like a poem to me. Anyways, it's still good.

Oh, it wasn't a dream per se.

[M'aiq the Liar 5,804]

What if I told you your world was a dream? That everything around you is fake, a illusion made by machines to turn the human race into batteries?

[Pinkamena-Pills 6,839]

When I'm tired or relaxed I like to write these random phrases and parts of dreams that are in my head...

 

We can look beyond every outer night and see what the trees hiss. We wish we could leave the container open, but no one cares about the heart. But if someone does then let the turtle be whipped and the gate be locked because I know people who itch every scratch on their murderous hands. Shout for the wanting of many carpet dressers, but remember that one is enough to this hooliage of smodge. 

 

Bearing teeth at a train conductor, I swam across the abyss and fell into a nebulous light. I caught the hoops in my hand as I fell through and tossed them at the shadow that repeated my words. Out of the abyss, I saw that a mirror had been travelling toward me. It came closer and closer and then the shadow came out of it and slapped me in the face. 

 

 

My mind after reading this.  

 

 

 

Love it.

 

10/10 would read twice -IGN-

[Astral Blitzen 469]

I do have another piece like this, but it is NSFW, so if you wanna read it I will PM it to you.

[Kings&Hooves14 616]

Cool poem! Sounds like a mixture of Lewis Carroll and Edgar Allan Poe.

Edited June 13, 2014 by Kings&Hooves14

[Astral Blitzen 469]

I'm surprised people enjoy it 

[Pinkamena-Pills 6,839]

What if I told you your world was a dream? That everything around you is fake, a illusion made by machines to turn the human race into batteries?

We must be the crappiest batteries ever 

 

I do have another piece like this, but it is NSFW, so if you wanna read it I will PM it to you.

 

Please do. My mind awaits.

[Astral Blitzen 469]

anyone else want to read it?

[Astral Blitzen 469]

Please corner the fear and accept the hate of the volley ball. We can negotiate with it when my pet comes back from the mental hospital. He spat on 43 coffee cups and lost the 23 dollars I gave him for his birthday and they diagnosed him with amnesio-spittism. He spends his day beating the wall of a dead man in the back room of the cafeteria. Then he sleeps on top of the hospital provided clothing that belonged to now desceased patients. I think my dog is normal.

[Espurr 449]

What if I told you your world was a dream? That everything around you is fake, a illusion made by machines to turn the human race into batteries?

It better not be. That means everything I went through meant nothing!

 

anyone else want to read it?

Sure. Why not?

[mars 4,862]

You should put these on blog so you can update with these cool dream-poems when you come up with them!

[Astral Blitzen 469]

You should put these on blog so you can update with these cool dream-poems when you come up with them!

no one bothers to read my blogs

[Jammo 986]

Life is but a dream?

Don't make me quote Star Trek V. I'll do it!

[SCS 7,537]

Hi there, @Astral Blitzen. I merged your second topic that dealt with the same subject matter this one does into it. If you want to add more to a topic, please update your original post or add more in a reply to it as opposed to creating a new topic. This will help keep the forum more organized, and it will make it easier for people to read what you have to say in regard to this, as they will be able to read it all in one place.
 
Additionally, since the purpose of this topic is more to share your creative writing inspired by dreams as opposed to generate a discussion, I have moved it from General Discussion to Non-Pony Artwork, and I affixed it with a writing prefix.
 

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Anyways, this is pretty cool. I hope you keep writing more