I drew luna! (1hr)

[Defender of Tomorrow 323]

So I decided to draw luna in some armor, it took about an hour with distractions.

Unfortunately it is not original artwork and based it off larsurus's vector from deviantart.

Anywho, some sort of critique would be appreciated!

Edited July 1, 2014 by Defender of Tomorrow

[BBOMB98 0]

That is one great looking Luna. I love the armor you made on her, especially on the legs and horn. You should take the next step and add some color to it.

[Frith is Magick 1,471]

Not bad. It's good that the armour slightly exceeds the outline of the body, but it still looks a bit flat. You can use thicker lines to make certain parts stand out and indicate a difference in layers. The ear is too far forwards on the head. The far back leg is out of place for this view; you could either be drawn closer to the near one or positioned as if she is taking a step. The line of the belly should have been erased were the leg is, same with the line of the back for the wing.

 

Not bad, it's always rough at first. Keep on drawing, with practice and attention to proportions and detail, you can get a whole lot better.

[GammaDove 428]

That's a thousand times better than anything I could do to say the least