First Attempt at Drawing, Suggestions?

[Twiliscael 3,960]

Well, this is my first attempt at drawing ponies. I did these from the top of my head after testing in class today. What do you guys think? Suggestions, comments, feedback, anything? Thanks!(sorry if the pic is sideways)

[SXCJ40 125]

you got good potential

[Vicke 3,189]

Keep it up

Looks good.

The body and the wings needs some upgrades tho!

But still good job!

[Jokuc 8,174]

I like the drawing of Fluttershy the most. The Rainbow Dash one is also good, but it had a few more inaccurate things in it.

[Eavath 278]

You'll get there More practice and it won't be long

 

One suggestion is don't forget that pegasuseseses have 4 feathers on each wing ^^

Edited March 28, 2012 by Eavath

[Dragonshy 2,305]

Awesome for a first try!

[Marcato 2,143]

for a first attempt???? INCREDIBLE. YOU HAVE TALENT MAN! Great job!

[Robojot 152]

Visit us over on reddit http://www.reddit.com/r/MLPDrawingSchool there is lots of tutorials, guides and other tips there ^^ but this is pretty good to be a first try.

[StayPuft 24]

Hmm... some pointers on how to improve these, perhaps:

 

Bodies seem a bit too... consistent(?), I'd make the bodies slightly thinner when they come to the back legs.

Dashie's tail seems a bit too big while Fluttershys' seems a bit too small.

Dashie's wings are too close to her neck in my opinion, I'd suggest moving them back a little.

Fluttershy's wings seem a bit too big.

 

Overall, they're pretty good for a first attempt. Just need some polishing and then they'd be good to go!

[Dj Manjaro 393]

FIRST TIME!?

Fluttershy's head looks fantastic! As well as her mane and tail.

 

A few things for next time however, ponies' bodies aren't ovals, they're 2 circles connected at the top and bottom. The legs are a bit scrawny and should be a bit longer as well.

 

But seriously, keep practicing, you show some real potential. I recommend watching a livestream or something of the sort of someone drawing. (it doesn't even have to be ponies) Watching others' techniques really helps to develop yours.

 

(I've used this image 3 times before, but it still proves helpful. So here, hope this helps.)

Edited March 29, 2012 by Dj Manjaro

[PeachPalette 1,000]

You did some nice work for your first time there. My advice...PRACTICE LIKE CRAZY! Keep up the good work on those ponies!

[Twiliscael 3,960]

FIRST TIME!?

Fluttershy's head looks fantastic! As well as her mane and tail.

 

A few things for next time however, ponies' bodies aren't ovals, they're 2 circles connected at the top and bottom. The legs are a bit scrawny and should be a bit longer as well.

 

But seriously, keep practicing, you show some real potential. I recommend watching a livestream or something of the sort of someone drawing. (it doesn't even have to be ponies) Watching others' techniques really helps to develop yours.

 

(I've used this image 3 times before, but it still proves helpful. So here, hope this helps.)

 

wow, i never knew i had at least some form of talent in drawing. Thanks for the pic, i'll definitely use it. In my school for 8th grade we design a ceiling tile for the hallway and my friend and i are making an MLP one. This was a random drawing for that idea.