First attempt at drawing Flutters~

[Snuggle Fiend 135]

The first drawing of a pone that I (kinda) finished and put love and attention into ^ ^
It's supposed to look like she's lying in bed...oh well. I tried :3
Critique is welcome, I need it to improve. (I'm pretty new to this pony drawing stuff)

[Deae Rising Shine~ 54,920]

Oh my bucking, you gave me heart attack because it's so ho-cuuuuuteee! Great drawing! :3

[Moony the Cat 3,702]

Wow, it looks very cute, i almost want to have that as an avatar because it looks so cute 

I specially like the hair, because the line of the hair, isnt just a line as in many other drawings, it actually looks like hair by you.

And the eyes are also looking good 

 

Just the yellow outlines of fluttershy and the white background combined, hurt my eyes a little.

You should have used a different background color.

But other than that, very cute 

[Countess Coloratura 204]

Awwwww, very cute! I really like this drawing. ^^ 
Looks very good!

[Snuggle Fiend 135]

 

 

Oh my bucking, you gave me heart attack because it's so ho-cuuuuuteee! Great drawing! :3

 

Awwwww, very cute! I really like this drawing. ^^  Looks very good!

Thanks! ^ ^ That means a lot, I might start producing art more frequently, if I can think of any ideas... :S

 

Wow, it looks very cute, i almost want to have that as an avatar because it looks so cute 

I specially like the hair, because the line of the hair, isnt just a line as in many other drawings, it actually looks like hair by you.

And the eyes are also looking good 

 

Just the yellow outlines of fluttershy and the white background combined, hurt my eyes a little.

You should have used a different background color.

But other than that, very cute 

Yus, I do appreciate that it looks a little unfinished...I'm sorry if this hurts your eyes...I should get around to finishing it soon, it's just the outline is so scruffy. It's a little hard to fill :\

 

I appreciate the advice! ^ ^

[Kenshiro 13,493]

She looks so cute i like your style and i think you need to focus on drawing more beautiful manes and proportion techniques '''

[AdventurousEddie 18]

That is very good, i wish i could draw ponies but i'm not gr8 at it. Keep up the good work.

[Ze Ubermage 226]

Looks good for your first try man. It looks really cute!

[Kyoshi Frost Wolf 41,298]

I will admit right away that I am not good at critique, but I want to say that this is adorable and incredibly well done for a first attempt for sure. ^__^ Something about this style just screams cuteness to me. 

[Tesla 167]

i love thid drawing i cant say much in the way of critique but i think the front but of hair(the left) need to be a little longer (unless its meant to be a young fluttershy) other than that its prefect well done you !!