Help Me with my Spanish Presentation

[Nit Pick 247]

I'm working on a Spanish presentation for my Intro to Spanish 1 class in college. I'm in need of some help.
 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PfOomtiFvZAfzjvr55QX_NCVke5eTssSTlQum4c8fZU/edit?usp=sharing

 

English is the first draft, Spanish was the revised version.

Edited April 13, 2016 by Nit Pick

[Bojo 1,172]

Made some comments, hope they help you

[Troblems 5,617]

@@Nit Pick, Because this topic is centered around a personal homework project, it would be better relegated to a blog of the homework help topic. That said, with Bojo's help, I think you're pretty well covered.