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[Jadefire 2,798]

You gonna break her mind control before or after the interrogation?

 

(to break, you need a unicorn to do the spell)

 

I'm thinking the current interrogation goes nowhere real quick. Then the mind control gets broken and she's questioned a second time.

[AnonyPoni 564]

I'm thinking the current interrogation goes nowhere real quick. Then the mind control gets broken and she's questioned a second time.

 

I just realized... SHE'S IN A CAGE IN INDIGO'S TENT!?

 

I was going to do a post where Sule went to indigo's tent like he asked him to, but I think two should get some "bonding time" first...

[Jadefire 2,798]

I was going to later have Shiri comment on exactly that. x3

 

I was going to do a post where Sule went to indigo's tent like he asked him to, but I think two should get some "bonding time" first...

 

Have him and Midnight show up anyway. The bonding time can come after her mind-control is broken.

[AnonyPoni 564]

I was going to later have Shiri comment on exactly that. x3

 

 

 

Have him and Midnight show up anyway. The bonding time can come after her mind-control is broken.

 

I was going to later have Shiri comment on exactly that. x3

 

 

 

Have him and Midnight show up anyway. The bonding time can come after her mind-control is broken.

 

Sule doesn't know ANYTHING about Shiri, so this should be interesting...

 

 

this is my reaction EVERY time there is a new post on this RP

[Jadefire 2,798]

Something tells me Indigo is bitter about something.

 

 

Anyway, for the sake of making what I had in my head work, I'm going to assume it was about an hour after Sule dismissed Indigo from the war room that Sule showed up at the tent.

 

Edit: I tweaked the dialogue at the end of the post a bit.

[AnonyPoni 564]

Something tells me Indigo is bitter about something.

 

 

Anyway, for the sake of making what I had in my head work, I'm going to assume it was about an hour after Sule dismissed Indigo from the war room that Sule showed up at the tent.

 

Ok then.

 

This question is obvious, What do you think he's bitter over? (His sister's death?)

 

YOU KILLED PUDDING HEAD!? (nice work with mixing in hearts warming eve!)

 

I was going to later have Shiri comment on exactly that. x3

 

 

I saw no such comment

[Jadefire 2,798]

This question is obvious, What do you think he's bitter over? (His sister's death?)

 

More like he's bitter over the plight of his people, though his sister's death did deeply affect him. Expect a flashback later.

 

YOU KILLED PUDDING HEAD!? (nice work with mixing in hearts warming eve!)

 

I'm evil.

 

I saw no such comment

 

She'll make the comment when they start flirting, which won't start until some time after her mind-control is broken.

[AnonyPoni 564]

She'll make the comment when they start flirting, which won't start until some time after her mind-control is broken.

 

Well, that was a fun post to write.

 

Anyway, she should now be mind control free and her "normal self" (you decide what that is)

 

 

 

I FINALLY GOT A BROHOOF FROM JADEFIZOID!

Edited June 18, 2012 by Anony-Brony

[Jadefire 2,798]

I have to say, you wrote that bit with Shiri fairly well.

[AnonyPoni 564]

I have to say, you wrote that bit with Shiri fairly well.

 

Thank you. It was surprisingly easy, actually. Easier than Sule... Interesting

 

 

Anyway, the actual Interrogation/them flirting can start now

 

EGADS!!!

 

You wrote "and the equestrian army" when you were talking to Tyrannus. That was kinda a secret and Instead of writing as if Midnight just slipped classified info, just edit the post.

 

Attention

 

I recommend you start your "Interrogation/them flirting" post. Sule is kinda in shock and I have nothing to post for him now (maybe I will do another one of his nightmares later...). A couple of hours have gone by and Shiri is awake and her normal self.

 

Attention

 

*sniff sniff* I felt sadness with that last post!

 

How are the Malumai going to pull off the whole going to equestria

Edited June 18, 2012 by Anony-Brony

[Jadefire 2,798]

I won't be able to write up a convincing relationship in the short time we have before the final battle, so that might be problematic.

 

I have two ideas. Perhaps change it so the battle won't occur for two or three days, and we'll have some more filler between now and then (perhaps scouts report that the weather is changing and dry spell is coming or something, which would destroy the clouds above the city. This would interfere with the evil malumai defending the city from the air, and relieve pressure on the heroes' ground forces.)

 

My second idea you guys probably won't like very much, as it'll prolong this RP for a while longer. Nova doesn't have a heck of a lot of characterization, so it seems somewhat anticlimatic to have him die during this final battle. So my idea is as such: the battle occurs like we have planned, but at the very end when Tyrannus is just about to be defeated by the heroes, Nova betrays and murders him, before escaping. The heroes celebrate the end Tyrannus's (short) reign, but later that day they notice something disturbing: the city is almost completely abandoned, except for the ponies who were freed from his mind-control (which is the entirety of the Malumai military, plus a few dozen thousand civilians).

Shiri (who's a good guy by this point) realizes to her horror what's going on: Nova took over control of the Malumai civilians who haven't been freed from the mind-control magic and are now marching them straight to Equestria! *dramatic thunder.* A quick headcount reveals that Nova has at least nine-hundred-thousand (or some other really large number) civilians under his control. And considering that the Malumai are a warrior culture (which means that even their civilians are competent fighters) and a significant portion of the Equestrian armies are in Malumai-land, Nova has more than enough manpower to completely conquer Equestria. (when they ask Shiri why she didn't mention that sooner, she says she didn't think Nova was insane enough to lead a military campaign against his own people)

So, the last chapter of this RP will then be Sule commanding the Equestrian military and the newly-freed Malumai military to intercept Nova's army and end this madness once and for all (perhaps his inspiring speech is something akin to "The equestrians saved our lives, now it's time to return the favor").

 

The main reason I'm suggesting this is that Nova seems competent enough to have a Plan B in case his alliance with the psychopath Tyrannus doesn't pan out. So what do you guys think?

 

How are the Malumai going to pull off the whole going to equestria

 

I didn't read this when I made my post, but I think my idea helps with this as well. The Malumai military swooping in to save the day by destroying Nova (who's a known criminal to the Unicorns) and his army before they can conquer Equestria would go a long way to improving Equestrian-Malumai relations. (And Sule makes sure that the fact that Nova's army was made up of mostly Malumai is never mentioned to the Equestrian leaders. x3)

[AnonyPoni 564]

Attention

 

So, what is Midnights plan now? I thought he was going to bust Storm and Clover out during the invasion?

 

Also, before Midnight and Storm get serious (they've never met before right now) with their relationship, I recommend you get in contact with Isobel and see if she is ok with going that route with Storm. She is hard to get a hold of, so good luck!

 

We are becoming the masters of subtly talking about NSFW stuff in this so appropriate RP.

Edited June 18, 2012 by Anony-Brony

[Jadefire 2,798]

Anyway, I'm heading off for the night, and I'm afraid I'm going to be gone most of the day tomorrow. Let me know what you guys think about my idea.

[AnonyPoni 564]

cut for brevity

 

the first way would be the BS easy way out...

 

...But, Dangit, You sold the second one really well, plus it fixes how malumai get into equestria. It would be an awesome scene (in the movie, if we ever get to that!) I say we go for it!

 

However, I have this paranoia that if we dont get started on the FimFic soon, somepony else will take the high profile chance of making a fimfic about equestrian history and/or Malumai, and then we will look like rip offs. I recommend We get started on Writing the FimFic As soon as we can (tomorrow, soon after?). We don't need to actually write it yet, we just need to fix some of the characterization, lines, and plot stuff.

 

We can do a google docs and skype or somthing and we can all work on it together, even before the RP is done. If we use skype or some sort of other IM/video/phone chat, it would be easier than discussing it over the forums. Also, the last parts of the RP will go smoother because we discussed everything more

 

For the record, I thought Sule would become Archon for equestria in the end (I have a full explaniation why, how, and what whould become of it and still have it be in line with the history from the show) Who knows? A sequel, A prequel (we are going to need to do that for the fanfic)?

 

Who knows, this may become really famous for this!

 

Attention, dont sleep just yet, we must post ponies!

 

If you can, post about what he seen in the Clover and Storm's prison. I imagine they don't look look so good...

 

Also what do you think of Jade's/My plans?

 

but at the very end when Tyrannus is just about to be defeated by the heroes, Nova betrays and murders him, before escaping.

 

I imagined Nova using a gun from the future for that

[Prince Midnight 817]

meh, trains

[Jadefire 2,798]

I imagined Nova using a gun from the future for that

 

 

I envisioned some sort of magic blast or something.

 

meh, trains

 

Sounds like it's time for us to go to sleep. <..<

[AnonyPoni 564]

meh, trains

 

I don't get your train obsession...

[Prince Midnight 817]

I don't get your train obsession...

 

trains are not childish >.> trains are awsome

 

Sounds like it's time for us to go to sleep. <..<

 

[AnonyPoni 564]

trains are not childish >.> trains are awsome

 

 

 

 

Trains are cool. Our town has them, but it doesn't have anything else

 

trains are not childish >.> trains are awsome

 

 

 

 

you can be the last post for tonight. I hear birds outside. it is sunrise, Got to sleep

Edited June 18, 2012 by Anony-Brony

[Prince Midnight 817]

it took me the last few hours to post that so yeah

[AnonyPoni 564]

So, what is the best time window for RPing and us working on the Fanfic together?

[The Awesome One 1,315]

I dunno about that but, I think I might have to kill Night Flash off from this RP if my computer doesn't get fixed. Until I post, can you all go along with the gag 'Night Flash is too busy being drunk to care about the problem at hand'?

 

I think I can make one post right now though.

[AnonyPoni 564]

I dunno about that but, I think I might have to kill Night Flash off from this RP if my computer doesn't get fixed. Until I post, can you all go along with the gag 'Night Flash is too busy being drunk to care about the problem at hand'?

 

I think I can make one post right now though.

 

Oh... It burns! Sorry to hear that... If you want help, I kinda know my way around computers (but I use linux, so...)

 

Anyway, I guess the drunk will work, but you still need to explain the intel or something at some point. Most likely, we they will need to know the info on the Super Soldiers.

 

in case you havent notice, a lot has gone down in your absence

[The Awesome One 1,315]

I got a better idea,

 

Night Flash has gone back to Equestria to get more troops. He'll return just as the Malumai Loyalists are losing the final battle against Tyrannus.Just when they've lost all hope, Night Flash comes with a bucket load of an army, filling the sky with Pegasi and the ground with Earth Ponies and Unicorns. Ofcourse, he'll die in battle because I have to kill him off, no more time to RP. Maybe three or four long and quality posts once my computer get's fixed and that's about it.

 

(You'll have to make up whatever Night Flash says for now though)

[AnonyPoni 564]

I got a better idea,

 

Night Flash has gone back to Equestria to get more troops. He'll return just as the Malumai Loyalists are losing the final battle against Tyrannus.Just when they've lost all hope, Night Flash comes with a bucket load of an army, filling the sky with Pegasi and the ground with Earth Ponies and Unicorns. Ofcourse, he'll die in battle because I have to kill him off, no more time to RP. Maybe three or four long and quality posts once my computer get's fixed and that's about it.

 

(You'll have to make up whatever Night Flash says for now though)

 

Sadness...