critique wanted MLP-EG Crossover

[g1a005 9]

Im doing a small series of the mane six with their human counterparts (or vice versa). Heres my other accounts:

https://www.deviantart.com/flutter20

https://core578.tumblr.com/

https://twitter.com/core578?lang=en

Starting off with a drawing of human and pony Fluttershy in a reading Nook:

https://www.deviantart.com/flutter20/art/Fluttershy-s-Nook-782532672?ga_submit_new=10%3A1548331291