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Can someone compose this song or/and offer a background music for this? I'll be really thankful. 

This song is supposed to be sing by a female with a dark background to her love of life, if that helps with composing song. 

Thanks a lot. 

 

Before you, my life was hard.

And my heart, was but a shard.

Then you came, and helped me along.

So it’s for you, I sing this song.

 

You are the star, in my heart!

And your love, sets me apart!

So with you, I’ll make my stand!

‘Cause you are the star, in my heart!

 

With you, I’ve found my place.

And you, gave me grace.

For you, judged me not.

On the past, I have got.

 

You are the star, in my heart!

And your love, sets me apart!

So with you, I’ll make my stand!

‘Cause you are the star, in my heart!

 

So with you, I’ll make my stand.

‘Cause you are the star, in my heart. 

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26 minutes ago, OptimisticNeighsayer said:

Do you have a particular style in mind?

Well, not sure. Can you please elaborate on that. I'm fine either way, as long as that sounds hurt/comfort romantic style.

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3 hours ago, Luna's Admirer said:

Well, not sure. Can you please elaborate on that. I'm fine either way, as long as that sounds hurt/comfort romantic style.

I was wondering if you wanted it to sound like a 20s/30s jazz standard, a Schubertesque Romantic-era Lieder, a Simon and Garfunkel 60s folk song, a hybrid dupstep-electronica-hip hop novelty, or something of that nature.

I'm more comfortable in the first two styles.


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6 minutes ago, OptimisticNeighsayer said:

I was wondering if you wanted it to sound like a 20s/30s jazz standard, a Schubertesque Romantic-era Lieder, a Simon and Garfunkel 60s folk song, a hybrid dupstep-electronica-hip hop novelty, or something of that nature.

I'm more comfortable in the first two styles.

I'm okay with that.

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1 hour ago, OptimisticNeighsayer said:

Alright, I'll do it. When do you need it by?

I'm in no rush, so you can even take as long as a week or more if you need. Thanks a lot. 

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1 hour ago, Luna's Admirer said:

@OptimisticNeighsayer

Is it almost ready. I'm a curious and really excited to see the results. No rushing, only asking. 

No, I’ve only composed the voice line of the verse so far. I have a number of IRL things on my plate, and the lyrics don’t exactly fit my usual style, so that’s why.

I might not be able to finish it until the end of February, but I’ll manage. 

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7 minutes ago, OptimisticNeighsayer said:

No, I’ve only composed the voice line of the verse so far. I have a number of IRL things on my plate, and the lyrics don’t exactly fit my usual style, so that’s why.

I might not be able to finish it until the end of February, but I’ll manage. 

Oh, take your time then. Thanks again. 

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I'm very sorry, it's just not coming to me. You'll have to find someone else to compose it.

The lyrics still haven't inspired any good melody from me, and I really don't have any good experience fitting words to music--especially where the meter of the poem is a bit sparse for the emotion you seem to want to convey.


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