New look for my OC

[Sherem 4,807]

 

Feeling that Sherem's/Sheoreth needs a new look...and yet I wanna keep the base of some of the colors, any artist there that would make a criticism even if it means destroying the few self-steem I have left XD need comments, shitting me posts for my mediocre work and constructive critisism as well. Need the help of artists that would look at my shitty work to know what to change and what to keep, perhaps we can discuss it.

here are my crappy works

[Sazama Ichida 2,367]

Looks very good. Can't think of anything to add. Would love to RP with you sometime.

[Sherem 4,807]

don't you maybe feel Sherem is a bit monotonous on his color scheme? just asking

[Sazama Ichida 2,367]

Some might think so. I recommend a different color for his mane.

[Sherem 4,807]

7 hours ago, Asbel Lhant said:

Some might think so. I recommend a different color for his mane.

what would you recommend?

[Handsome Changeling 1,851]

Surprisingly you created a rather good looking Alicorn. The monochromatic theme of whites and greys is actually appealing in my opinion and it makes all those uhh... Vibrant and flashy Alicorns look bad. This could be my personal bias for greys though however yours is a breath of fresh air.

If I personally was to recommend any changes its the tail design, the way the mane flows down loosely is a good look for elegance however the tail seems very tight and uniform, it clashes with the overall look. Again though this could just be me. 

[Splashee 28,564]

Looking good @Sherem.

Reminds me I have to do my Equestria Girls version someday.

[Sazama Ichida 2,367]

3 hours ago, Sherem said:

what would you recommend?

Keep in mind the show usually tends to use pastel colors.

[ExplosionMare 18,064]

On 6/6/2020 at 8:47 AM, Sherem said:

don't you maybe feel Sherem is a bit monotonous on his color scheme? just asking

He is a little, but I think if you darken the lines on his coat, he would look a little better.

[Sherem 4,807]

On 6/7/2020 at 3:24 PM, ExplosionMare said:

He is a little, but I think if you darken the lines on his coat, he would look a little better.

Darker eh?

[ExplosionMare 18,064]

3 hours ago, Sherem said:

Darker eh?

Yeah