I redid an old one, i'll put both in comparison

[Cursed-Fate 234]

First one is the new one, the second is the old, please tell me if it's any better, if you want that is

The old one bellow

They are not really alike but it's the same spirit so erm, yeah, sorta counts as a redo i think

Also I have no idea if this post will properly work But at least it's the right Channel

Edited October 20, 2020 by Cursed-Fate

[Cursed-Fate 234]

16 minutes ago, You said:

I really prefer the first one.

Aside from showing 3 different ponies or personalities - There is some flair of mystical in that one!

Thanks I tried to correct the old ones flaws, which were mostly that it felt empty

[Props Valroa 26,043]

Oh its definitely better, has more depth, shading, and details. 

[ExplosionMare 18,007]

The new shading and line art is really nice 

[Cursed-Fate 234]

3 hours ago, Scar said:

Oh its definitely better, has more depth, shading, and details. 

Thanks I'll be trying to make single drawing for each alternative fates

3 hours ago, ExplosionMare said:

The new shading and line art is really nice 

Mighty thanks I'm still trying to get in the art style as I don't work it as much as I'd like out of fear of someone seeing me but seeing the comments, it pays off

[ExplosionMare 18,007]

5 hours ago, Cursed-Fate said:

Thanks I'll be trying to make single drawing for each alternative fates

Mighty thanks I'm still trying to get in the art style as I don't work it as much as I'd like out of fear of someone seeing me but seeing the comments, it pays off

You’re welcome  

[Splashee 28,537]

@Cursed-Fate I saw (noticed) your old one in your profile some time ago, and I did spot some things that you have fixed in the new one, mainly changing the angle of some poses to get more expression. I think you have improved in every area! You have also captured more of the emotion you were going for (hopefully planned).

 

Nice improvement!

[Cursed-Fate 234]

4 hours ago, Splashee® said:

@Cursed-Fate I saw (noticed) your old one in your profile some time ago, and I did spot some things that you have fixed in the new one, mainly changing the angle of some poses to get more expression. I think you have improved in every area! You have also captured more of the emotion you were going for (hopefully planned).

 

Nice improvement!

Thanks