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Fail Safe chapter 2 ( where the gods brew their OC's future)


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Doodled some some put names on them... Not sure why i named them like that....

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1 hour ago, Emerald Heart said:

Everyone is dead and obviously, Emerald won't stand for that. Because she's a protective badass.

@Kujamih

Btw the one infront of you @Emerald Heart is Light with his chrysalis's throne activated. And at your back are vilis

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5 hours ago, Kujamih said:

@Windy Breeze and @CloudMistDragon i need your battle stat quick! Are you guys OC good at fighting? And at what level. I forgot to ask!

I cant finish page 2 without knowing this XD

Just sent you mine, my OC is a magic based character. To compensate for his bad strength and dexterity, he has good intelligence and magic, needed to communicate with spirits and conjure storms at the cost of magical energy. I already thought out how to balance him thanks to all my time playing RPGs. :kirin:

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https://www.deviantart.com/frank3dz/art/A-day-to-remember-1140892930 (seriously guys, read this comic, it's hilarious)

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5 hours ago, Kujamih said:

Should i change the action or movement style of my comics?  Is it too simple? Or easy to miss? . Example:

 

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It looks kind of obvious to me that the creature missed to grab cloud.

More than changing, I think you could improve it by emulating movement blur. Some artists resort to afterimages (pretty much drawing the parts that moved in different positions and faded or with less opacity in the same frame).

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The other technique is with smear frames. Pretty much, you exagerate the distortion the observer/reader can see from an action performed by a character. Is more easy to appreciate in animation, but can be used on comics too.

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5 minutes ago, Kujamih said:

Johnny bravo was just weird hahaha

It was awesome nevertheless.

Anyway, as demonstrated by the guy of that cartoon that seemed to be so popular with gringos back in the early fandom days (the "confound these ponies, they drive me to x" is a ponified quote from that guy), there are 3 basic parts of action for cartoon/comic movement. I guess you can skip a part if it would overload a panel/frame, though.

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Different modes to implement on your OCs

Samurai Equine: one winged angel.

Emerald heart: Aidos.

Windy breeze : Iris.

Cali: 9 keys of hekate.

Cloud shroud: jupiter.

Cado: lords of the night.

Light: Chrysalis's Throne.

Any changes?

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44 minutes ago, Kujamih said:

Different modes to implement on your OCs

Samurai Equine: one winged angel.

Emerald heart: Aidos.

Windy breeze : Iris.

Cali: 9 keys of hekate.

Cloud shroud: jupiter.

Cado: lords of the night.

Light: Chrysalis's Throne.

Any changes?

I'm confused on what this means.


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Big thanks to @The Wife of Hawks, @Trix or Treatand @Splasheefor these images!

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@Jesse Terrence

........ Tomato potato? :lie:

Im so sorry.... Coda hehe i just looked at anything that sounds cool.... And the i saw lords of the night in mayan gods... 

Oh and emerald request to change hers to hestia mode. 

So introducing hestia mode!!!. Still on the works

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40 minutes ago, Kujamih said:

@Jesse Terrence

........ Tomato potato? :lie:

Im so sorry.... Coda hehe i just looked at anything that sounds cool.... And the i saw lords of the night in mayan gods... 

Oh and emerald request to change hers to hestia mode. 

So introducing hestia mode!!!. Still on the works

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Don't get it.

Also, super cute pony!

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7 hours ago, Kujamih said:

Different modes to implement on your OCs

Samurai Equine: one winged angel.

Emerald heart: Aidos.

Windy breeze : Iris.

Cali: 9 keys of hekate.

Cloud shroud: jupiter.

Cado: lords of the night.

Light: Chrysalis's Throne.

Any changes?

What is an Iris?


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NEIGH NEIGH NEIGH

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