offering critique Silky's Beauty Spa (OC creation and re-designing)

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,800]

2 minutes ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon You can stick it on your metaphorical fridge!  

*Giggles loudly* 

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Shiny Silvermoon *Also starts giggling*

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,800]

1 minute ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon *Also starts giggling*

You're so crazy! We could even say that you are "lunatic"! Get it? 

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Shiny Silvermoon I love it!!! Coincedentally Luna's one of my favorite princesses!  

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,894]

@Shiny Silvermoonmakes a new friend at the spa and accepts the donut from @Stellar Cresentmoonwhile getting booped with stickers.

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Princess Silky That's amazing! Can I put that in my about me and credit you? 

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,894]

1 minute ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Princess Silky That's amazing! Can I put that in my about me and credit you? 

Absolutely. I love seeing friendships blossom from sharing experiences. I'll be working on the coloring now. If you two find that you like RP, maybe you can consider developing your characters together in the Everfree Roleplay. 

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Princess Silky Sure! This is the best time I've had all day, school's stressed me out lately 

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,800]

5 minutes ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon I love it!!! Coincedentally Luna's one of my favorite princesses!  

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,800]

6 minutes ago, Princess Silky said:

@Shiny Silvermoonmakes a new friend at the spa and accepts the donut from @Stellar Cresentmoonwhile getting booped with stickers.

You did this? Wow! You're so fast! You're like rainbow dash but if she was drawing! 

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,800]

8 minutes ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Princess Silky That's amazing! Can I put that in my about me and credit you? 

I didn't even think about it! It's such a wonderful idea! 

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,800]

8 minutes ago, Princess Silky said:

Absolutely. I love seeing friendships blossom from sharing experiences. I'll be working on the coloring now. If you two find that you like RP, maybe you can consider developing your characters together in the Everfree Roleplay. 

Oh? What is that? 

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Shiny Silvermoon You can do it too if ya want!  

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,894]

@Gaines--- perfect you should be here, I believe I needed to fix the mistake I made on your hair, huh? 

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

1 minute ago, Shiny Silvermoon said:

Oh? What is that? 

@Shiny Silvermoon Everfree Forest is a roleplaying section on the forum where you can basically write stories with a friend using OCs!

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,800]

Moments ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon Everfree Forest is a roleplaying section on the forum where you can basically write stories with a friend using OCs!

That seems pretty cool! Maybe I could give it a try! But only if you want to. 

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Shiny Silvermoon Of course I would want to! Gives me an excuse to dig out the older characters, I haven't really written anything MLP since my last post in the roleplays, maybe we could a do a one on one RP?

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,800]

1 minute ago, Stellar Cresentmoon said:

@Shiny Silvermoon Of course I would want to! Gives me an excuse to dig out the older characters, I haven't really written anything MLP since my last post in the roleplays, maybe we could a do a one on one RP?

Sure! 

[ZiggWheelsManning 10,295]

2 hours ago, Princess Silky said:

@ZiggWheelsManning What do you think? What would you recommend or change? 

The only thing I'm not seeing are the Scootaloo type line drawn designs in his hair. 

Unless there is a technical difficulty, I'm not seeing the 4 vertical strips on his helmet, I'm only seeing 1 or 2 of them.  

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,894]

3 minutes ago, ZiggWheelsManning said:

The only thing I'm not seeing are the Scootaloo type line drawn designs in his hair. 

Unless there is a technical difficulty, I'm not seeing the 4 vertical strips on his helmet, I'm only seeing 1 or 2 of them.  

You're right, I'll fix it right up! I've never sketched anything like that before <3 

[ZiggWheelsManning 10,295]

Take as much time as you need to  

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,894]

The lovely @GeneralDirectiongetting a re-design on his horn as well as a temporary hair straightening external potion. 

[GeneralDirection 1,050]

Awwww he's so adorable! ;-; Love the work you're doing with him so far!

[Whirlwind 1,057]

*waves* Hi there Silky!
I've been thinking of a trying a new mane style to go with Whirlwind.
As a pegasus who was born and raised in Cloudsdale, my passion has been to fly...fast! and competitive. The Streamlined mane was fitting pegasus archetype has been my staple for 8 years.

However in more recent years, I've been taking Whirlwind's character arc into a more simple, down to earth (literally ) direction.
I had this interest in giving Whirlwind a new (or alternative) mane style to suit his look. Something simple, not too flashy, but still a hint of the old mane style.

 

Edited April 1, 2023 by Whirlwind

[Ice Princess Silky <3 13,894]

1 minute ago, Whirlwind said:

*waves* Hi there Silky!
I've been thinking of a trying a new mane style to go with Whirlwind.
As a pegasus who was born and raised in Cloudsdale, my passion has been to fly...fast! and competitive. The Streamlined mane was fitting pegasus archetype has been my staple for 8 years.

However in more recent years, I've been taking Whirlwind's character arc into a more simple, down to earth (literally ) direction.

Silky would beam brightly as the lovely pony would step into her Parlor, she was currently working on other customers but she was THRILLED to tend to some curious ideas for him as well. "Lovely! Step right in." She'd offer him a potion that could stimulate excessive mane growth, that way they could cut it to his preference. "Indeed! The state of your hair is important for aerodynamics. But if you find your life has calmed down quite a bit. Let's see which styles would you prefer." She offered him a simple magazine with some lovely options. "Now, don't restrict yourself. Choose what you feel describes your personality the best!"

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"What do you think, lovely?"