open Ask any pony on a date!

[My little pwny 1,392]

(Here's the add, I couldn't add a background, but it would have brown, fancy bordering, with the curly lines. https://docs.google....Vym9M7GCw/edit# Gah, I touched something, brb. Okay, the background would be the same color as the highlighting on the text. The border would be the same color as the text.)

 

I can't access the doc. Can you open it to public view?

 

Or maybe you can take a screen shot of the document and post it on mlpforums?

Edited November 1, 2012 by My little pwny

[Octavia's Bow 2,035]

I'll see what I can do.

 

(My friend, who I gave my password to do this for me, it was quite the process. Anyways, my friend says it's open)

[My little pwny 1,392]

(OOC: this is part 2. Since I could not access your google document, I have to withhold the Epilogue where you see where the two of you end up. As soon as I can see the doc, I'll post the rest. EDIT: I see the doc. Give me a second)

 

 

"Dear Applejack

 

My name is Dawnpath,

The little white pegasus writer

Who seems to think the world of you

Even though he's not a fighter.

 

I can guarantee that you

Make more bits than me,

If money was most important

Would writing be for me?

 

No, what's most important

Is the way your hips sing,

The way your prid sings,

The way your heart rings.

 

What's important is that your eyes shine,

Because that means your heart's fine,

That's what you mean to me;

It's why my heart's fine.

 

You say you want me honest,

Your the first to want this want.

By the end of this poem,

My honest light, you'll have got.

 

I'm not (Change voice to sophisticated) a sophisticated gentleman,

Who's muscles match his tongue,

The idiocy of the highlight

Burns his brain into nubs.

 

I'm not (Fancy warmonger southern accent) a returnin' soldier,

Though I am a loyal colt

And have the honor to match him,

I walk a different road.

 

I know I'm not an athlete,

Round one of apples can say

It's my brain that is my pride,

It's with words that I must play.

 

I do not fit my little mold,

I have no 'pegasus edge.'

I won't ever have the strength with which

I'll buck to meet your ledge. (He means level of which you apple buck. Someponies get confused with my terminology)

 

But let me tell the difference

Between me and other colts;

I'll try, and try, and try, (Here he puts emphasis, and the text is darker)

And hope that maybe someday

I can work right at your side.

 

Because I need the sunshine

That plaits your main with gold.

And I need that smile,

I swear it won't get old.

 

Because I need the green-eyed-mare,

Who sparkles with her pride,

Because I need the apples that

Reside along your thighs...

 

Can you start to see it?

Can you truly see?

I gave my heart to you.

Will you give your heart to me?"

 

He looked at the ground as he finished, blushing. You could've pulled that off better. Maybe you should've stuck with something less strong... But she asked for the truth! Anything less strong was not true to myself, and not fair to her. Besides, that other one was bad and you know it. That silly island poetry is way too short to encompass my emotions, and to broad to be clear. This was the best option. I only hope... Well, at least she knows how I feel about her. At least I know, I couldn't have tried harder.

 

“You better listen here fast, ‘cause I’m only gunna say this once!”

 

I knew it. I went overboard and now she never wants to see me again.

 

AJ continued, “I never get sentimental with other ponies that aren’t in my family, hay, not very often with them neither! But that there poem you wrote for me made things very clear as polish on an apple. It’s time for me to stop being closed off to others. I may be honest with everypony, but that’s because I hardly share my feelings in the first place. What I’m tryin’ to say is, I think I finally understand what the hubbub is about with this thing called ‘Love’. I feel it coming for you, your poem, and… from… me.”

 

“I…. I-I don’t know what to say Applejack. My mind is still trying to process what you just said! Are you saying what I think you’re saying?”

 

“I don’t know what I’m saying, quite frankly. This is something totally new to me! I think I remember Twilight telling me something about it. Have you heard of the Magic of Friendship? Well, Twi was saying how there also exists the Magic of Love, and it can help you see things more clearly.”

 

“You see things more clearly? How so?”

 

“Dawnpath, I think…” Applejack paused for a few moments. She started to cry very softly to herself before she could continue. “I-I… I think I love you. Your poem is flooded with pure truth and honesty that I can’t describe it, other than it touched my heart like magic.”

 

“I… love you too Applejack. The more I think about this, the more it makes sense to me. There was no chance in heaven that my poem could have floated to you on accident. Also, all those restaurants we passed by, what are the chances that we were going to pick Sugarcube corner over all of them? If we hadn’t gone to Sugarcube Corner, I doubt you would have told me your apple orchard problem, and I wouldn’t have been able to help. It was the Magic of Love that made all that happen! Fate has literally brought us together.”

 

Applejack was crying more freely now. She knew they were supposed to be together and that a greater magic was watching over them. She then said, “So what do we do now?”

 

“First, I make and post that ad for you, and then we can find out together,” said Dawn in a very loving tone, "and when we do discover what we do next, I promise to make every commitment I made in that poem, for better or for worse."

 

 

Epilogue

“Come on, you can do it!” said Applebloom. “Buck it harder than you’ve ever bucked before!” Dawnpath had been working out his hind legs all summer in order to buck trees in one hit just like AJ does.

 

“Okay, here I go!... *WAM!*” As soon as he bucked the tree, every apple came falling down into the buckets surrounding the tree.

 

“Woo hoo!” cheered Applebloom, “You finally did it Dawn!”

 

“Don’t celebrate too soon Applebloom!” said AJ. “It looks like you missed one!” Applejack pointed at the very top of the tree where an apple was still hanging on its stem.

 

 

“Ow, OW!” yelled Dawnpath in pain. “I think I hurt my wings bucking really hard! OW!” Dawn was flat on his stomach in pain. “Can you get the apple for me Applejack?”

 

“Huh? But you’re hurt! You need help!”

 

“No, please AJ, get the Apple, trust me!”

 

“Applebloom, get the first aid kit from the barn, I guess I have to get this apple.” AJ gave an effortless kick to the tree to get the apple to fall down. “So why did I have to get this apple?... Wait a minute…”

 

Applejack knew something was odd about this piece of fruit. It had something inside it, something like a small object.

 

“Crack it open!” said Dawnpath, who clearly wasn’t in pain anymore.

 

She did what he asked her by biting into the Apple, exposing a small box. She opened it to reveal a Apple shaped ruby on top of a gold ring.

 

“What’s this thing? Wha…. No way! Are you…?”

 

Dawnpath was no longer flat on his stomach. Instead, he was on one knee and said, “Applejack, even though we’ve only known each other for 5 months, I have never been so sure about something in my life. During that time, I haven’t worked this hard in my life either. All the business we’ve received, and also all the book signings I’ve had to go to from my novel, is minuscule in comparison to the importance of the question I’m about to ask you. And because I love you so much, I am just going to ask you right here, right now in the middle of the orchard. Will you marry me?”

 

Applejack gave a simple smile, tilted her head and said, “If I said no, I wouldn’t be honest, would I?”

Edited November 1, 2012 by My little pwny

[Octavia's Bow 2,035]

(I know, I know, It's a bad ad >.< Google Docs wasn't my best idea. But my computer doesn't have word, which is my favorite program for this situation)

 

HORAY!) I was going to sleep. I don't know if I can now. Like, ever. I want to feel like I do, right now, forever. Thank you)

[Glaceon 793]

Applejack gave a simple smile, tilted her head and said, “If I said no, I wouldn’t be honest, would I?”

That alone, was maybe the best yes answer ever. Now I REALLY can't wait for you to do mine.

[Alex Night 870]

(OOC: reading all this almost makes me wish I was a Pegasus pony in Equestria right now. omg... Dat plot. XD )

[Count Paradox 3,548]

(OOC: that was an awesome story...)

[My little pwny 1,392]

Thanks for your praise guys... it really helps me keep going. You guys deserve a great story, I just hope I have time to give you guys equal quality fan fics

[Octavia's Bow 2,035]

We haz faith in you. And in the words of my soon-to-be brother in law, "Eyup.")

[Glaceon 793]

You can do it Pwny!

[Count Paradox 3,548]

GO PWNY GO!

 

also... who is going to take over for you, @My little pwny?

[StaticArc 15]

That really was an awesome story, the bit at the end really tied it together!

 

You are an amazing writer and can't wait for the other stories!

[My little pwny 1,392]

GO PWNY GO!

 

also... who is going to take over for you, @My little pwny?

 

Pageturner. Ironically, I didn't see him request a fan fic from me. However, he did PM me about the job

[Count Paradox 3,548]

Pageturner. Ironically, I didn't see him request a fan fic from me. However, he did PM me about the job

 

huh, cool. hope he is as every bit as awesome as you at this.

[My little pwny 1,392]

That really was an awesome story, the bit at the end really tied it together!

 

You are an amazing writer and can't wait for the other stories!

 

I just hope my stories can be just as good for you too. BTW, I'm half way done with part 1 of your fan fic

[Winona the Dog 1,984]

Im guessing theres no more room for another pair huh?

[My little pwny 1,392]

Im guessing theres no more room for another pair huh?

 

I really wish I could accommodate everypony, but unfortunately I'm crunched on time. Once Pageturner takes over, ask him.

[Count Paradox 3,548]

I really wish I could accommodate everypony, but unfortunately I'm crunched on time. Once Pageturner takes over, ask him.

 

hey, pwny, could i, like, post the fanfic of me and tavi on my fimfiction page?

[My little pwny 1,392]

hey, pwny, could i, like, post the fanfic of me and tavi on my fimfiction page?

 

Do whatever you want with it. Consider it public domain

[Count Paradox 3,548]

Do whatever you want with it. Consider it public domain

 

ok, cool, i'll give ya full cred, though!

[Winona the Dog 1,984]

I really wish I could accommodate everypony, but unfortunately I'm crunched on time. Once Pageturner takes over, ask him.

Thats too bad.

 

Are you leaving or something?

[StaticArc 15]

Whatever you make for me, I'll be happy with it!

 

And I'm really curious for what my story's going to be like, can't wait for it to be finished!

[LordCooler101 9]

(Pwny,another amazing piece of work from you.Also that ending was great.)

Edited November 1, 2012 by LordCooler101

[Alex Night 870]

Thanks for your praise guys... it really helps me keep going. You guys deserve a great story, I just hope I have time to give you guys equal quality fan fics

 

(OOC: Until November 8th? Yeah, you got time to get us all! As much as I am looking forward to my Pegasus Alex's story, I can't wait to Morningstar's Love Fic with Princess Celestia. I have a feeling that one is going to blow everyone's minds here. Pwny, you have succeeded in leaving me in immense anticipation. :3 )

[Octavia's Bow 2,035]

I copy and pasted mine to my Google Drive, so that: A) I wouldn't lose my works, I think I'll post them on the forums some day, and B )I can remember last night for ever and ever.

Edited November 2, 2012 by Dawnpath