From Dawn to Dusk

[Dj Manjaro 393]

Hiya!

Fluttershy loves the forest. It is filled with cute little creatures and is a place where she can be herself, no mask put on by the gaze of other ponies, no crippling shyness, not a care in the world. She could spend all of her time there, from dawn to dusk.

 

As always, criticism is not only welcome, but wanted.

[Leafeon 2,702]

That looks awesome. However the highlights on the mane look a bit too light. And the wing seems a bit too pointed, in my opinion. But nothing really major.

 

There is really nothing specific I can say is bad...

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

First let me say tha it looks gorgeous.

-Her right frontleg should sit a bit more to our right right (right no it aligns rather unfortunate with the left)

-Five trees don't quite make a forest yet, maybe copypaste some more as outlines

-Equestria not very flat, think about adding some hills and/or mountains in the background