Wonder/Shadow Bolts Wallpaper (1920 x 1080) Critique requested

[Derpydeponson 21]

Feed back is much appreciated so don't be shy.

Also theres a Tif file avaliable here http://derpydeponson.deviantart.com/#/d5tfo6j

 

This one took me a lot of time but I think it was worth it.
It features the wonder bolts and shadow bolts from the animated children's show My Little Pony FiM G4.
I would appreciate a favorite if you had the time and as always- Commissions are free so feel free to ask.
Also if you have photoshop there is a disabled layer containing some text I decided not to use so you can re-activate that if you fell like it.

Feel free to use in anyway you want just give some credit please.

Vectors: Durpy, 90sigma, KNA, Pik a robo and capt_nemo. I can't guarantee the accuracy of these credits as a got them off google images some of which were from forums but this is the most accurate list I can find, let me know if I made a mistake please.

 

 

 

[PonyEcho 1,610]

Looks pretty damn good, but I think it would look better  they mirrored one another so both were mare,stallion,mare. but other then that it's all good.

 

good job 

[Leafeon 2,702]

Also theres a Tif file avaliable here http://derpydeponson.deviantart.com/#/d5tfo6j

I've never seen anyone use a tif file ever before. o.O

 

Anyways, that looks quite good. There are two problem with it though... the first is that it's too small, seeing what it is. The next is that they look like they are in a pocket, which looks quite odd to me. Good work though!

[Derpydeponson 21]

Looks pretty damn good, but I think it would look better  they mirrored one another so both were mare,stallion,mare. but other then that it's all good.

 

good job 

I put the captains at the front and then the 2nd then last. Well I think I did but if you can tell me the order you would prefer them in then I can 

[Scootalove 10,689]

By far, an awesome wallpaper with Luna's clones of the Wonder Bolts. I think having a wallpaper with both Wonder Bolts and Shadow Bolts is simply amazing!

[Derpydeponson 21]

Alright I took the criticism and remade it so check it out on deviantart at: http://derpydeponson.deviantart.com/art/Wonder-Shadow-Bolts-Wallpaper-1920-x-1080-351770923?ga_submit_new=10%253A1359769690&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1&ga_recent=1  should be uploaded by now. Enjoy.

 

 

-Derpydeponson