Stop me, I'm drawing ponies again

[Blue Lightning 275]

Wuz bored so I made many pone OC stuff.
1st: I drew one of me and this girl I had a crush on 4-5 years ago.
I don't have wings and we both don't have cutie marks, I might add it when I finalize that later on.

2nd: is the one i made last night to represent Aerosmith's song Sweet Emotion. Her body needs more work but I like how she came out

 

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

This is the greatest art I have ever seen in my entire life (although I am a tiny bit biased in your favor, Blue). Nice work, although the stomach should stick out rather than suck in. I really like the Sweet Emotion pony.

Edited May 10, 2013 by Melancholy

[dedacct6 2,591]

sweet emotion should have more of a curved body instead of flat if shes supposed to be slim, and a few outlines aren't even, but other than that these are pretty good 7.5/10  

[Mixolydian Grey 15]

Sweet Emotion's tail reminds me of Steven Tyler's ribbons he always has on his microphone stands. Bonus points for the Aerosmith reference. ^-^

[RetroDash 42]

I like them, Blue.

 

Sweet Emotion has some potential...

 

Keep practicing...you have 1000 more "bad" drawing before your masterpiece...

[Red Diamond 549]

Sweet Emotion's neck looks kind of... small.

 

Over all, I like your drawings, and keep up the great work!

 

The first one needs some improvement.

[NekromantiaFox 270]

You have potential, and I have plenty of critique that might help. You can message me and I'll give you some tips is you like, I'm sure I can help you out.

[Feather Gem 967]

I think I'll critique Sweet Emotion Cx

 

• I would have drawn her body a bit shorter.
• Her body shouldn't connect to her right legs.  I think it should only connect to the left legs.
• Her neck should be thicker.
• Her hind legs need a bit of work.
• I absolutely adore her mane and tail. Cx

 

Also, I'd like to give you a tip!  I tried drawing ponies with eyes like from the show, but I found that making my own eyes for them works much better for me and they end up looking nicer!