can't sleep

[Fanglore 140]

 

this is Lighting Blitz 

he is my brothers oc and i have been meaning to draw him for a long time but just now got around to it.

 

the little cloud he is holding is something he likes to do. he can overcharge thunderclouds and use them as mines. which comes in handy for his job as a demolition pony 

[Doctor-Whooves 288]

I seem to be judging a lot of art for me keeping these claims that I'm not an art critic.

 

Pros:

 

-Dat shading....

-Dem eyes.....

-Dat hair.....

 

Cons:

 

-The wings are a bit too small and look a bit shrunken.

[Fanglore 140]

 

 

-The wings are a bit too small and look a bit shrunken.

 

wow that's all you see wrong with it  maybe i'm doing better then i thought. btw im glad you like the eyes its the first time i did that kind of eye

[SoundRaptured 139]

The moon is probably not the right size or some scientific impossibility with the mine clouds but it's pretty good! XD The only slight thing I could tell is that your signature isn't in it. unless you hid it very well. because unless you're just drawing for no reason and you don't want to get into it, you should put signatures on things so people can't copy them and say they did it. 

well plus the wing thing but that was already said.

 

Great job though!! keep drawing

[Zygen 6,066]

Oh my gosh, this looks really awesome, I love the shading you did, plus your brothers oc is really pretty cool.

 

You did a fabulous job drawing him though, I just love how its drawn overall, his expression is great the shading is very moody and awesome and yeah I just really like it .

 

The background is all drawn pretty well I think to.

 

I'm not an amazing artist, so i can't critique very well on this stuff, so yeah sorry .

 

Regardless you did a great job! 

[Fanglore 140]

 

 

your signature isn't in it.

 never thought my stuff was somthing someone would try to steal but ill start puting it in from now on  thanks for the advice 

 

 

 

I'm not an amazing artist, so i can't critique very well on this stuff, so yeah sorry

 

hey you dont have to to b a Picasso to understand art i know im not one btw i dont know about most other artists but for me just saying you like it is all i need. critiques are just helpful hints so i can continue to inprove 

[TheCraftyWhiteFox 371]

blitz done .png

 

this is Lighting Blitz 

he is my brothers oc and i have been meaning to draw him for a long time but just now got around to it.

 

the little cloud he  is holding is something he likes to do. he can overcharge thunderclouds and use them as mines. which comes in handy for his job as a demolition pony 

im still gonna say it looks like he's holding a cupcake/muffin- just don't let derpy know or she might blow up... lol- its really nice and this isone ofn my favorites of yours. you did a an amazing job!

[Fanglore 140]

thanks it one of my favorites  too btw dose the mine cloud really look like i muffin (ooo muffin...BOOOM)  oh i hope not  for derpy's sake  at least 

[Away 2,077]

I like it. It's pretty good except for one thing. It's missing Princess Luna. All drawings should have Princess Luna. Why? Because she is best pony.

[TheCraftyWhiteFox 371]

thanks it one of my favorites  too btw dose the mine cloud really look like i muffin (ooo muffin...BOOOM)  oh i hope not  for derpy's sake  at least 

hahaha poor derpy- idk i think so but when you look longer at the picture u realize what it really is- but for those quick glancers its easily possibly mistaken for a yummy muffin/cupcake -

[Fanglore 140]

I like it. It's pretty good except for one thing. It's missing Princess Luna. All drawings should have Princess Luna. Why? Because she is best pony.

i totally agree with you but there is one small problem. this is a picture for my brother and he says rainbow is best pony . so i couldn't  add luna   please forgive me