My OC's Rough Draft

[slimmyjimjim 35]

These are my ocs if you want a background on any of them just ask they are still in the making so bare with me. They are all my original names and designs. 

 

Please post feedback and things that I could do better with.

Edited May 27, 2013 by slimmyjimjim

[Princess Periwinkle 3,777]

Heyy, not bad. That last unicorn has a horn very similar to Sombra's, is that intentional?

 

That blue pony's wings look detached from his body, though. Is he one of those bat-ponies?

[Sunny Blue 39]

These are so cute! I could just cuddle them all together ^.^ I really love your super curvy style. And the ones with their back legs bend up, that's just the cutest \^.^/ well done

[Rascal~ 657]

I loved your artwork so I thought I would digitalise it alittle bit and it was relly easy... easist yet actually and I thought you would like to have a look at what I did

[slimmyjimjim 35]

Sombras horn is intentional and the blue pony is actually a changeling. Thank you for the digitalization and all the compliment and constructive criticism. I will have new rough drafts soon.

[Vermillion 613]

hey nice job i like them some of them look awfully familiar like the horn of that unicorn is just like king sombra horn. hmmm

Edited May 27, 2013 by Vermillion

[Wingnut 7,019]

I really like them all, but my personal favorite is the second from the bottom.  She has an uncanny resemblance to Rarity and I enjoy her style.  Hope to see more like these from you. 

[slimmyjimjim 35]

Omg I know about the head thing im so mad at myself for that but I guess the only thing I can do is improve and practice. And also yes his horn is supposed to be sombras because he's sombras reincarnation so of couse he has his horn.

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,354]

(I'll be referring to the ponies as 1-6, satarting from the top and left to right)

1: The yellow in the mane clashes with the other colours somewhat fierce, maybe make it another shape of brown

2: Hmm, at the moment he looks just like an earthpony with a shard of glass on its back, maybe make him a bit more changeling-ish (segmented belly, pointer ears ect)

3:Absolutely adore the design. The lower part of the tail looks a bit bulged out, apart from that pure win

4: Cool design interesting take on the eye. cutiemark needs adjusting to leg anatomy

5: Again, very nice design and colourscheme. The way the horn petrudes from the mane needs looking at

6.n The black on the horn doesn't really work for me. The shape of the head and the hooves would work better on a more adult proportioned body.

 

All in all these are superb designs, would love to hear their names /backstories.

[Moonpie 55]

Really great work! I like your changeling and "Sombra" esque stallion the most of the bunch there all quite cute, your line quality is quite fluid and seems very comphy at drawing ponies

[.Rainbowdash. 0]

Very Nice, I really like it, really cute and well drawn. You really have a good artistic skill. Keep up the good work. (RainbowDash)

[slimmyjimjim 35]

Omg looks like I'm going to have to do background on one of my ponies so you guys understand Parcel Shift (the blue changeling pony) decided to leave the changeling empire to pursue a life among ponies and princess celestia appoved of this coexisting state as long as he keeps his changeling wings visible that way everyone can see who he truly is that's why the rest of him looks like a pony because he's trying to seem as normal as possible so he can fit in with the other ponies. There now if there's anypony else you want backgrounds on just ask and ill be happy to tell you.