One Sunny Evening...

[OrionSketch 1]

I did it. I wrote a TwiDash. And I am proud of it.

 

Be sure to check it out!

 

Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/108349/one-sunny-evening

 

I was inspired  by a cute little FlutterDash comic that I found on one of the pony Facebook pages. I read it, and it was adorable. I decided to do something similar, so I wrote a TwiDash. Don't worry, it's not a blatant rip-off, It was just inspired. Enjoy!

 

No, the image was not by me, it was by a Deviant Artist whose username escapes me. He/she did a fantastic job though!
 

 

[repsol rave 2,963]

a twidash you say?

you sir,have my interest.

i'll be leaving feedback once i actually read it tough. maybe i should have done that before commenting :/

 

EDIT TIME!!11!11!!

 

yeah so, it was good.

better then good even, but i must say i kinda broke the whole atmosphere you where building in the story because i listened to this while reading it.

 

 

overall, very good work. you captured twi and dash very good, unlike other twidash fics where they appear completely out of character.

(some very,very small grammatical errors, but hey, who gives a buck?)

Edited June 5, 2013 by repsol rave