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Kira stood there in shock of what Rainbow just pulled off but then saw Charlie Cooke out as soon as Rainbow kicked the colt in the mouth.

 

Mrs. Cheerlie: RAINBOW DASH! Come Here This instant!

*She slowly walks over to Mrs. Cheerlie*

Mrs. Cheerlie: Now Rainbow Dash!

Yes Mrs. Cheerlie?

Mrs. Cheerlie: Now Why would you do that?!

I, but he was, it-

Mrs. Cheerlie: I will be talking with your Father about this!

But I was just-!

Mrs. Cheerlie: I don't want to hear it!

But what about Kira!? I was defending him!

*Kira Knew he had to help*

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Don't count this as part of the story but I'm commenting to read the rest of this story.

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Kira smiles back and his eyes go multi colored again, he then turns back to Octavia, "Thank you, Octavia! I hope we meet again soon!"

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"Oh no way, we're moving there, I dunno when, but it's happening!" Kira yells in excitement from the sky.

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Mrs. Cheerlie: RAINBOW DASH! Come Here This instant!

*She slowly walks over to Mrs. Cheerlie*

Mrs. Cheerlie: Now Rainbow Dash!

Yes Mrs. Cheerlie?

Mrs. Cheerlie: Now Why would you do that?!

I, but he was, it-

Mrs. Cheerlie: I will be talking with your Father about this!

But I was just-!

Mrs. Cheerlie: I don't want to hear it!

But what about Kira!? I was defending him! 

*Kira Knew he had to help*

Kira flew down after hearing this, "Yeah, she was only defending me, if anything, I should be punished in her place." Kira says with a determine look on his face.

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Kira flew down after hearing this, "Yeah, she was only defending me, if anything, I should be punished in her place." Kira says with a determine look on his face.

 

No Kira, I did it. You didn't do anything, I cant let you take the fall for this!

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No Kira, I did it. You didn't do anything, I cant let you take the fall for this!

"Yeah, but maybe if I wasn't different then you wouldn't have to be defending me and then you wouldn't be in trouble"  Kira explains

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"Yeah, but maybe if I wasn't different then you wouldn't have to be defending me and then you wouldn't be in trouble"  Kira explains

 

But you didn't do anything. I don't want you to get in trouble for something I did.

Mrs. Cheerlie: Enough, Come inside now, everypony else have recess.

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But you didn't do anything. I don't want you to get in trouble for something I did.

Mrs. Cheerlie: Enough, Come inside now, everypony else have recess.

Kira hangs his head in shame and follows the two of them into the class.

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Kira hangs his head in shame and follows the two of them into the class.

 

*Rainbow walked along side them as the other kids behind them laughed at them. As they walked inside, Mrs. Cheerlie closed the door*

Mrs. Cheerlie: What You to did was definitely wrong, but you stuck up for each other so, I think i'll let it slide.

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*Rainbow walked along side them as the other kids behind them laughed at them. As they walked inside, Mrs. Cheerlie closed the door*

Mrs. Cheerlie: What You to did was definitely wrong, but you stuck up for each other so, I think i'll let it slide.

Kira's eyes start glowing to the split rainbow then it glowing and spinning.

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REALLY!?

Mrs. Cheerlie: yes, sticking up for your friends will always pay off.

Kira had a big smile on his face, his eyes changed to an electric glowing blue. "Awesome!" He exclaims, then hugs Rainbow Dash, "Thanks for being there for me." Kira says in a hushed tone, then he looks over to Cheerilee, "Ummm... about the sunglasses?"

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Kira had a big smile on his face, his eyes changed to an electric glowing blue. "Awesome!" He exclaims, then hugs Rainbow Dash, "Thanks for being there for me." Kira says in a hushed tone, then he looks over to Cheerilee, "Ummm... about the sunglasses?"

 *Rainbow dash returns the hug* Your my best friend! I'll always be loyal to my friends.

Mrs. Cheerlie: What about them?

 

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 *Rainbow dash returns the hug* Your my best friend! I'll always be loyal to my friends.

Mrs. Cheerlie: What about them?

 

"Thanks!" Kira replies then responds to Cheerilee, "can they... you know, be in my face"

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"Okay" Kira says as he and Rainbow Dash walk out the door to a bully with a bloody mouth and the others.

 

Random bully: Please don't hurt me!

Im sorry for earlier. please forgive me.

Random bully: Yeah well, I don't believe you and you retarded alien boyfriend!

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Random bully: Please don't hurt me!

Im sorry for earlier. please forgive me.

Random bully: Yeah well, I don't believe you and you retarded alien boyfriend!

"Come on don't be like that, she just apologized!" Kira exclaims at the bully.

(@@TheScrewUpCrew  your oc is in the background watching)

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Brandon: I don't care you all are weird and Nopony likes you. You have no future.

When Kira heard those words and his left eye turned blue when he remembers that night, and his right eye turned red with the anger he held toward that stallion, the heat from his right eye is enough to shatter the sunglasses.  "Wh- what did you... say?" Kira asks in an eerie voice.

 

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When Kira heard those words and his left eye turned blue when he remembers that night, and his right eye turned red with the anger he held toward that stallion, the heat from his right eye is enough to shatter the sunglasses.  "Wh- what did you... say?" Kira asks in an eerie voice.

 

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Brandon: You don't have a future, no one will ever love you! Your to weird!

THATS IT! Stop it!

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Brandon: You don't have a future, no one will ever love you! Your to weird!

THATS IT! Stop it!

This time all Kira saw when he looks at Brandon was the killer, "You... killed my parents..." He says when he darts up to the skies and starts flying towards Brandon after flying up about two hundred feet, at this point his body acting on its own like he had... No control.

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