sad Unthinkable

[DarkInnocence 2]

 

This is a Trixie fic I worked on for a long time (over a year of planning and five months of writing). It's about a third of the way done, and I'm continuing it after season four is over, but there's still plenty of reading material within for the meantime. It's my attempt at writing the life story of a Trixie who is bitter instead of arrogant... The first act (all 12 chapters up so far) comprise the time between her fillyhood and shortly after the events of Boast Busters. The rest, once I get around to it, will cover her time throughout season 1 and 2, as well as the circumstances surrounding Magic Duel and her fate afterwards.

 

I'd really appreciate it if anyone would give this a read, because I worked very hard on it and it means a lot to me. I understand the length is a bit intimidating, but, well, I can't help but feel frustrated that I've worked so hard for so long on it only for it to pretty much be practically invisible. True, I have gotten good feedback so far, and I do appreciate it, but... Still.

 

It's rated teen and has tags, but it doesn't exceed, say, a PG-13 rating in a movie.

 

Either way, if you do decide to try it, I hope you enjoy it.

 

Unthinkable

[Delernil 952]

Wow.

 

I'm not usually one to read these stories, but just wow.

I finished chapter 1. It's REALLY good. I can't even begin to explain how good

 

You have my read.

[DarkInnocence 2]

Thank you very much!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[Untitled Goose Q 5,137]

Just read the first chapter and it is very... moving.

[John V Smith 2]

MOAR! seriously, this is epic. i don't cry much (ever, really), but this.... this is for me such a relatable peice of art! i found myself wishing i could reach out and help her! i wanted so badly do do something; it felt REAL to me, sheerly because of how well writen it was, and how much like my life it felt.... MOAR!

[yeet 2,027]

I'll read it tomorrow when no one is around (if i cry my whole family will think something is wrong) so if i do cry no one can see me.