writing When the end is simply us

[TheBronyHeart 2,640]

The quickened pace of heart’s embrace

Found deep and still inside

Where all our feelings find their place

And loneliness subsides

 

It came to me in dream-like quality

From stories of you and I

Born from long desire

And the words we can’t deny

 

 

 

I got the urge to write at 1:30 in the morning. 12 minutes later this comes out. This happens to be the first poem I've written since elementary school that intentionally has rhymes in it. I think something may be wrong with me.

[TheChosenPony 279]

This could easily be turned into a wonderful song

 

Theres nothing wrong with you, you've found your talent!

Edited March 23, 2014 by TheChosenPony

[TheBronyHeart 2,640]

This could easily be turned into a wonderful song

 

Theres nothing wrong with you, you've found your talent!

I find rhymes distasteful in poetry, unless of course they are blend well with the work and actively have meaning along with the poem, and do not rhyme simply for the sole reason of rhyming. Such kinds of work are better suited for great poets such s T.S.Elliot. 

My poetry doesn't rhyme. Ever. 

[Candela 18]

At school I remember when we wrote all kinds of poetry and compiled them all in a scrapbook of sorts. Last year, to be exact.