@@Doc. Volt,
I should have seen that coming...
OT : Eyes burning color, OPness and too cannon-wrecking backstory... On the other hand, I don't think that alicorn OCs should be demonized, but it's hard to make a such OC cannon-friendly, which is why (IMO) this type of creation is usually hated around here. Ah, and also, I personally consider grimdarkness in backstory not necessarily bad, sure it can easily turn bad and horribly cliche, but I like to see that even place like Equestria aren't perfect.
(Hint : I like fanfics like Fallout: Equestria and The Rainbow Factory)