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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lXznLPleVLc&feature=colike Ah yess... The days where Amber Alerts were as few as Cowboys in NY. The carefree days of playing with friends after school, playing tag (Who's played tag recently??), and running after the icecream man... And Music! There's a song I know of which speaks of much the same thing. This song here; Back In The Day' by YellingAtCats. He's got a point. At least in the aspect of music, Bronies (myself included) need to step up our musical game. Music aint as good, as back in the day...

Damn bro, damn.... The stuff on top is what my dad used... Eyes... Water... Ehaaahk! @_@ Stronger than moonshine! I just use Pace. Lazy me. I know right?

Habanero?? Hope it's just a little... That stuff is explosive. My dad used to get it and use a drop ot two in a whole pan of eggs. It would all end up spicy. And then he'd use a little on his own eggs... O_0 He was a grand master of eating hot stuff....

O know what grits are. =) I watched My Cousin Vinny. XD It explains not only what grits are, but how they're made. It's an adult movie though. Very funny nonetheless. Belgian anything is good. =) Belgian waffles, Belgian chocolate, Belgian cafe, Belgian pudding.... Belgian stuff. :3 In general. My mom lived in Belgium for about four years, and she says even the good stuff they send over here can't compare to what they eat over there. XD

So........ If you had these three choices for breakfast every morning, (Which some of us do. Not me, but some of us. XD) Which would you choose? 1. Eggs. They go with everything, and you can make them in twelve different ways. (Give or take. :3) You can make omelets with 'em, you can eat em with sausage or bacon, or even make an egg sandwich. All around fast, filling breakfast in little round balls. 2. Pancakes & Waffles. They taste delicious. You can sprinkle 'em with brown sugar and eat 'em like a taco. You can put anything from blueberry syrup, to chocolate syrup. (Not that I recommend that...) You can use butter and powered sugar, or add extra spices and just eat 'em straight off the stove. Not the greatest cook time, and not the healthiest, but delicious non the less. 3. Oatmeal. By far, the most overlooked breakfast food, Oatmeal is what it is. Oats. You can make it en-mass for multiple people, or pop a bowl in the microwave for you're self. You can use cinnamon and a host of other spices, brown or white sugar, butter, or fruit to give it you're favorite flavor. Great for the mornings when you miss you're alarm clock. Not the most glamorous breakfast food, but "A great part of a complete breakfast." Or another one... Which will YOU chose???

Cool. It's for 'The Suprising Adventures Of A Glaceon In Unova'. If you want to, find it, read it, and gimmy a holler if you're interested. =)

That last part should be: 'Today I had decided to go further that I ever had.' Replace that last coma with a period. Here, clarify that the doctor tried to kill hif after he saw that he was a pegacorn. (Also, is there a difference between a pegacorn and an alicorn in this story?) Next, just state that his father killed the doctor in defence of his family. That should make for smoother reading. This part should be one paragraph. This should also be another paragraph. One thing that dosent make much sense is the writing on the wall. Why would another pony write a mesage to the ones he just killed? Perhaps having the mane character finding the pony inside ranting at his parants dead bodies or something like that. Also you said that his parants were decapitated... Seeing as the earth pony had no weapons, he must have used his sheer strength, so you should specify exactly how they were decapitated. Maybe. It would be much simpler (and less gorrey) if you mentioned that the earth pony had a weapon that could cause that spacific injury. ... Or fatality in this case. Also, even with the assilant's aparant speed, there should still have been signs of struggle. There were two victims, even if there was verry little time between their deaths, one of his parants would have been able to either block or dodge a blow or two, which could have created some distruction aside from the ruined door. He's a pegacorn. He can fly. Logicly, this should specify that his wings were locked up, or that the assasin caught him before he could take off. From the end of the last paragraph spot I mentioned, up to this point should also be it's own paragraph. Eeh, kina lame if you ask me. If you can't think up something that gives it a bit more weight, it should still be capitalized. Now for my feedback. I liked the idea of the going back to the past thing. It gives it some depth. However, if you are planing to go through most of the fic using flashbacks, I discourage it. The reader will become frustrated that they don't get to see what happens with Chrysalis. You can do it, but make sure to start back on the 'now' in no less than three flashbacks. You can do more later, but the focus needs to be on the 'now' for most of the fic. If you want a reference for begining a story with blashbacks, look up 'The Suprising Adventures Of A Glaceon In Unova'. It was done verry verry well there. I like both points you wrote about. the 'now' and the past. The were both interesting and compelling. I find myself wanting to continue reading. XD One thing about being an author is that as you may get a lot of people that don't like you're story, there are going to be a groupe that LOVE it and want updates at least once a week. Such is the life of the linguistic writer. (Unless it's just a horable fic that NO one likes. XD ) Aaaand that's it. Hope I was helpfull.

Hey there! Welcome to te Forumz. 'S cool here. I actually may have a VAing job for you if you're interested... Unfortunatly, it's not for an MLP fic, but it is for a verry good story... At any rate, welcome aboard dude. /)

Oh hey Twi. ! Twilight?? *Pinkie Pie gasp* Hey.... You're gona be staying for a while right? I have sooooo many things to show you. (O__O)

How about a Glaceon named Boreas? ...... XD No, that's someone else's. Actually, a Glaceon named Truebolt would be cool. Or Jess if it's female.

XD You're probably right. Only thing is that nopony should stay on this thread for verry long. It gets bad for you're health quick. lol IF YOU"VE READ MORE THAN SIX POSTS, STOP NOW! LEAVE THIS THREAD! DO NOT PASS GO! DO NOT COLLECT TWO HUNDRED DOLLARS! But, everyone's got a twisted mind, including me. We're human. It's kind of a package deal. =/

Well you came off'ly close with the first and last ones. XD *Pinkie Pie voo doo hoof-wiggle* Buurn. Buuuurn you I say! (laughs out loud) Nah, oppinions are suposed to be different. no one hates you. =) Well, some one might, but most likely no one on the MLP Forums. ^^

Foxes. Ze are ze mose'e beautiful animals in ze world. I hope to have one as a pet eventually... There is a lab in Russia where they were breeding foxes to be more like dogs in behavior and atitude towards humans and they succeded! They have foxes that love human atention just as much as normal dogs. However, they need donations! In fact, to keep the facility financed, they had to sell some of the foxes to a fur farm! D=> My plan is to save enough to give a donation, and then adopt a fox. =)

Gaaah! The Acer Netbook.... Exactly Zero PC gamming oppertunities. I know how you feel man... *brohug*

I used to think Justin Bieber sucked untill I herd 'Boyfriend'. I don't nesesaritly like him, but I like the song. He's probably a cool guy in real life. Maybe. I could not agree more. Nothing about them is nesesarry or natural. The whole idea of gay/lesbian isn't natural. Only thing remotly okay about it is by brother can derp and I can teasingly say "Dude... That looked, SO gay." LOL If I ever join a/the military I will be sure to not inform you on fear of violent death. Or worse.... O_o And finally, MY oppinions that mean absolutly nothing. I believe Akon is a romantic at heart. The population of earth should be bronie, Christian, and use the oh-so-uncommon common sense. Hasbro should introduce more exotic races into FIM. Both 'Where the red fern grows', and 'Ender's Game' left me with an empty, simi-happy/melancolly feeling inside. We should go back to the 'One nation, under God, indivisible.' thing. It worked. Texas iz best state. =3 The US govornment should use our tax dolors to creat nation wide air conditioning during the summer. I often have the urge to take pictures of the sky, and it makes me sad that no one, including myself, is ever going to see the beauty that is the piece of sky I just viewed, because the sky is never going to be exactly the same as it was right then... People should paint there rooms and houses in amasingly crazy clashing colors. ^^ I could say more, but I doubt anyone would want to hear any more of my ranting. XD I might make a blog though...

I agree with you on the helping people deal. I origionally wanted to become a chiropractor so I'd be able to give people reliefe from back pain. (Which I have felt first hand. It's not fun.) However, I wasant going to be able to aford to put myself through coledge for it, so I now plan to be a public adjuster to help people colect a fair amount of insurance money. My dream job is totally unrealistic: be able to use liquids to change my shape and size to become a super hero. XD Unless something crazy happens, thats not going to happen. =3

Hey welcome! I have another bronie friend in colorado, so you guys might be able to colaborate on comic cons and stuff. Try searching for smaller cons that might be in you'r area for starters. And as for friends... Well one down, many more to go. XD If you have questions about anything concerning anything related to anything that fits in to anything... I cant say that I'll definatly be able to answer them, but it wont hurt to ask! XD

Haha! It's good! Well done. Personally I have a hard time drawing unicorn horns so it's nothing I could hold against you if I wanted to. lol