ShobieShy - Retaliate ft. TacoDeBoss

[ShobieShy 3]

Just something I came up with while I was thinking about Anti-bronies.  This was more or less a song for general practice.

 

[Rainbow-Crash 101]

The beat is kool no doubt. But i think you need to work on your flow a bit. Plus maybe how you deliver. Listening to this it kinda sounds like you're bored and just talking at me. I doesn't feel like you 2 are really putting your all in and you can really notice. Put it this way, the energy you are putting into this rap is not enough to make me think you believe in what you a saying at all.

 

Sorry if im sounding harsh, but im just pointing these things out so that you get better. IMO next time just go harder with your delivery. I think you'll see a massive improvement once you start to hear more enthusiasm. 

Hope you keep this up man!     

[ShobieShy 3]

The beat is kool no doubt. But i think you need to work on your flow a bit. Plus maybe how you deliver. Listening to this it kinda sounds like you're bored and just talking at me. I doesn't feel like you 2 are really putting your all in and you can really notice. Put it this way, the energy you are putting into this rap is not enough to make me think you believe in what you a saying at all.

 

Sorry if im sounding harsh, but im just pointing these things out so that you get better. IMO next time just go harder with your delivery. I think you'll see a massive improvement once you start to hear more enthusiasm. 

Hope you keep this up man!     

Thanks for the critique!  You should hear my older stuff; It's even more boring and monotone. 

[Rainbow-Crash 101]

Thanks for the critique!  You should hear my older stuff; It's even more boring and monotone. 

Well if your older stuff is more monotone than this then at least that means you are improving dude  btw did you make that beat?

[ShobieShy 3]

Well if your older stuff is more monotone than this then at least that means you are improving dude  btw did you make that beat?

I did not.  I got the beat from Jace D.  I credited him in the video description.