Casual Stroll - An Introductionary RP mainly around Equestria OOC [Open Entry For All]

[Blitz Boom 4,620]

Minor thing: I can't write more tonight, and I have a long bus ride after work tomorrow, so it might be late tomorrow before I can make replies to everypony here. Just FYI

 

Also, Last might have shown the scroll towards Caliber, but likely others can hear her saying that i's not looking like one tree. Like Crescent. So could be others reacting since Caliber did not from the looks of things.

[Seamore Sandwich 471]

@@cwhip9

 

I agree with the idea that Crescent would be the one most likely to notice due to the fact that bat ponies have better hearing, aside from Briar but Blitz won't be on until tomorrow. Upon closer inspection the permit is revealed to allow for three Everwood trees to be sold. Seamore can't be the one to notice because of his ADD and the fact that she says it quietly. I don't want to do the "did you say something?" thing again.

[cwhip9 1,078]

@Seamore Sandwich
 Cresent will notice, how he'll react I'm still debating on honestly.

 

@ Denim&Venom with cresent blood hearing is it possible for him to hear priestess with her charms? im thinking of him cutting seamore off and addressing her wheather in the group or when ever they set off. I'm asking so to be more on the safe side instead of an wild surprise thrown at you plus you know where OC better then us  

[Seamore Sandwich 471]

@@cwhip9

@@Denim&Venom

 

Also important, would Crescent be able to tell that her pony form is just an illusion?

I was using the full version of the site on my phone and "an error occurred with the webpage so it was reloaded" and I lost everything I had just typed. I think I got it all though, I had to retype it all by memory.

@ everyone

 

I've started drawing the Diamond Spider, but I still have a lot of work to do. At least you can get an idea of the concept. I'll be adding more patches of crystal all over it (and the rest of the legs). I will probably do a color version when I'm done. I'm not working tomorrow so I might have time to get this done. So far this has taken over an hour just getting the structure how I want it. For some reason my images get turned sideways when I post them from my phone.

Edited August 29, 2015 by Seamore Sandwich

[Melke 160]

@@Seamore Sandwich,

 

Syo does not know about the currency in MLP so she is completely blanked out on it, so at the end when you pass a share over to her. You might want to tell her what is it. She probably will then use it to buy a souvenir. 

[Blitz Boom 4,620]

Big spider? I'm gonna need a huuuuge shoe for this. :3

 

Also, at a PC again now, so I'll start working on catching up to things now. Been away for far too long.

[cwhip9 1,078]

 

 

(no idea with quote bo but anyways) busy day ahead ill be abel to post Late again tonight/tomroow morning pending on how job go's just a heads up everypony

[Blitz Boom 4,620]

I think I hit everypony and responded to it. Sorta tired so I apologise in advance if I missed anything.

 

And yes, I tossed in a Jaws reference. And no, I regret nothing.

[Denim&Venöm 18,726]

@cwhip9 @Seamore Sandwich

 

Crescent should be able to detect her. Her ability only covers sound she makes, but it won't disguise the motions or vibrations of her heart beating or the blood flowing through her veins.  

 

Her disguise won't be as easy. She'll still appear as a pony to him in all regards, but the way her blood flows will look off in comparison to other ponies. He'll be able to pinpoint where the talisman she's using is, as that is written in her blood, even though the talisman itself is blended in with her guise. 

[Seamore Sandwich 471]

@everyone

 

I didn't give a very good description of the cart initially. It's a very large four wheeled cart which I forgot to mention had several logs in it. The Everwood trees are going to be a lot wider than the pine so they will probably just barely fit in the cart. The cart is going to be empty, so the others may be able to ride in it on the way there.

[cwhip9 1,078]

ok im back heads up to Denim&Venom Cresent will react to Pristess it'll be your call on how she reacts, but my plan is he basicly gets more info from her based off the idea he wants to know who he's fighting with. If that's a curve ball tell me now so I wont mess up her story bit. and ill re edit what I put down   

[Seamore Sandwich 471]

@everyone

 

Diamond Spider update. I added the rest of the legs in and slimmed the body a little. The spider needs to be able to move quickly, so the body to leg proportions had to be altered. This is why I draw in pencil then retrace it onto tracing paper.

Edited August 29, 2015 by Seamore Sandwich

[cwhip9 1,078]

looks good so far cant wait to see how the battle go down with everypony

[Seamore Sandwich 471]

@@Denim&Venom

 

I did look up Anansi to see what you were talking about, I appreciate the tie in to mythology. The spider itself is just a wild creature acting on instinct. If you have an idea of where it could have come from though, go ahead with that story. I do like the idea that it may be protecting something for them, it could even be the Everwood trees themselves that it's protecting.

@everyone

 

Another slight redesign, adding the extra body section in the back to make it more anatomically correct. Adding the final details before I trace it over in colored pencil on tracing paper.

One question, should I get rid of some of the crystals in the patch on the back or should I add more?

Edited August 29, 2015 by Seamore Sandwich

[Blitz Boom 4,620]

Looks fine to me, though still evil since it's a spider.

 

Also, sorry for no replies today. Having some PC troubles and what feels like a half million updates stuck at once (been a while since I used the laptop) so haven't had the tools at hand to write right yet.

 

Things looks like they're getting in line now though, so hopefully it'll be done when I wake up and I can get back to writing. I miss having fun gere with everypony.

[Seamore Sandwich 471]

@ everyone

 

Finally. It's done. Just need to trace it over in color. I'm not adding patches of crystal to the first and last segments of legs, or to the center segment of the body the legs are connected to.

I will do the color version Tuesday, probably.

Edited August 30, 2015 by Seamore Sandwich

[Fire Lily 86]

So I do kind of have a plan to bring Lily in, if we skip to the next day I could have Angel explain it all to her and go from there with whatever happens. Of course if it all happens the same day that's fine too, I can work with it either way.

 

edit: also sorry if that was less "Angel" than usual, I kind of lose the ability to type like a kid when my sleep schedule is so far off. Also She's kind of weird to write for in general but that's another story. 

Edited August 30, 2015 by Fire Lily

[Blitz Boom 4,620]

@@Fire Lily,

 

Far as I know, everything currently happens on the same day, but as for Angel and Dax, if they go to have some rest they can come back the next day, I can have Blitz up as having a stack of the leaves now and then just be vague about explaining how whilst we wait for it to come up with the others. Not gonna have you wait the night out after all, wouldn't be fair. ^^

[Seamore Sandwich 471]

@@Blitz Boom

 

Keep in mind the trees will be covered in webbing, it may be more convenient for the rainbow colored leaves to be carried in a bag made from that webbing.

 

As far as the offspring thing goes with the spider, if it has offspring it's not likely they'll be able to eliminate the threat. I think making the spider male can solve this problem.

 

When Seamore does sell the logs, he will need a member of the Royal Guard present to oversee the sale and sign the document as a witness. The Everwood trees are highly controlled due to their magical potential.

[Blitz Boom 4,620]

@@Seamore Sandwich,

 

Most spider races have the females being far larger, so I think that would be logisitical issue. Unless it's magical-infused of course, then it's a totally new game where everything goes.

[Seamore Sandwich 471]

@@Blitz Boom

 

The spider does have chaos magic, and is quite large. That doesn't have to mean that a female wouldn't be larger. If someone wants to make a comment along the lines of "and the females are supposed to be larger?" go right ahead.

Also, the comment about needing bifocals is quite funny because actually, in real life I do wear glasses.

@myself

I'm posting this as a reminder to myself because I check here before every post. I have an idea for Seamore's response to Briar, he will talk about how that's protocol as well as collecting and planting the seeds.

 

@@Denim&Venom

 

The double quotation marks kind of confused me as well. Italics without quotation marks should help distinguish thoughts from quotes. Also, OOC issues should be discussed here, the site staff takes notice of it apparently. I would recommend deleting the OOC post and reposting it here.

 

@@cwhip9

 

I'm sure you will probably be fixing your post to correct this issue, so I will hold off posting a response until you have had time to fix it.

 

@everyone else

 

Please don't respond to what Crescent said about the shadow, due to communication errors it may end up being edited.

Edited August 31, 2015 by Seamore Sandwich

[Blitz Boom 4,620]

Axtually Seanore, that's not the only issue post, tours is as well. You can't post OOC messages in the actual thread as it is against forum rules.

 

And another part Crescent got wrong cwhip9: Briar clearly asked to leave the tree with the roots still staying in the ground, just fyi.

[cwhip9 1,078]

@everyone

 

yes I did a major fail on my side thanks for bringing it to my attention on the fails you saw. Its now safe (I think tell me now if im wrong ether pm or this) to respond to cresent and no he cant read minds only hear the bloodflow of others to base his resoning, if not being hot headed, if he did read minds id think that would make him OP honestly  

 

Edited August 31, 2015 by cwhip9

[Seamore Sandwich 471]

I thought I'd show you all an picture of what I retraced so far, I like the way the diamonds show the shape of the spider without it having been drawn in yet.

Outline:

Done:

I like the way it came out.

Edited August 31, 2015 by Seamore Sandwich

[P-Jay 1,987]

sorry for not replying. ;-; ill make a post, today, but i might have to drop out of this RP for a bit...