Black Mage Trixie (Critique appreciated)

[Sceethe 704]

Welp.

I did a thing.

and stuff.

I don´t really have the time to draw any bigger projects, so i have to stick to these smaller character designs for know.

(Still good practice, i guess)

Anyways, let me know what you think of it^^

 

 

[碇 シンジン 27,440]

Your art is beautiful to look at! Good work my friend !

[Castle_Cross 332]

Just awesome!!! Love it Keep on with your amazing art

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,354]

Pretty darn impressive.

 

-maybe add a hole in the brim for her horn to poke through

-not entirely sure on the perspective on the staff (is it going behind her or does it end where it meets her clothing)

-her grip on the staff looks a bit awkward

-she seems to be missing a nostril (though this could just be your style)

-maybe add some small things (a bag on her belt, patterns on her robe etc.)

[speedyblupi 76]

Well, the nose looks a little off - maybe a little upturned - and (as far as I can tell from the angle) I think there should be a shadow from the hat on the staff. Apart from that it's pretty much perfect

[Sceethe 704]

Your art is beautiful to look at! Good work my friend !

thank you

 

Just awesome!!! Love it Keep on with your amazing art

thanks

 

Pretty darn impressive.

 

-maybe add a hole in the brim for her horn to poke through

-not entirely sure on the perspective on the staff (is it going behind her or does it end where it meets her clothing)

-her grip on the staff looks a bit awkward

-she seems to be missing a nostril (though this could just be your style)

-maybe add some small things (a bag on her belt, patterns on her robe etc.)

-i thought about that for quite a while, actually. one of those things where it is really hard to decide how i should do it.(in the show, you don´t see her horn when she wears a hat, even though, should see it the way i drew it.

-perspective is wrong, i kind of realize that now. oh well, too lazy to fix that now :/

-mmh.. i realize that now.thanks for telling me !

-that´s one of the things that i always forget, since it doesnt bother me too much, personally. is it annoying?

-i guess i could do that to add details. thanks for suggesting

 

Well, the nose looks a little off - maybe a little upturned - and (as far as I can tell from the angle) I think there should be a shadow from the hat on the staff. Apart from that it's pretty much perfect

that was, more or less, an experiment from me. but i guess that´s not how ponies look like^^.

i think, due to messing up the perspective, you get to think that the staff is going behind her.

 

thank you for your feedback so far^^