critique wanted My OC (I need some tips,critique,etc-etc)

[Padlock-Keys 57]

Are you planning on doing some sort of major project with your OC? I mean, if you are i can see why you'd need to add a backstory. If you just want to make a nonsensical ponysona or an OC that's there to be a website icon  - something thats pretty, shiny and cool, you dont have to worry about adding a backstory. Also, heads up, its also your OC, stories are really whatever you want them to be. 

 

I dont see why people have to worry to impress others about their characters or worry they might offend someone if they arent even going to use them in some sort of major thing. I dont write with mine, yet, and no - they're not my ponysonas. But let me see if i can help improve yours some way? I guess. But remember - its also your OC so you shouldnt really care what people think about it. As long as your respectful to others and respect their dislikes/likes (aka being nice) then really, whats the point? 

 

But still, I'll be happy to help if you need/want it. 

A little comment though about what you've said so far. 

 

A programmar/musician. Probably makes music like dubstep, which I dont care if he does. Probably wouldnt get along with my Ponysona, Vocal Range for a number of reasons. Vocal runs a multi-billion bit cooperation throughout Equestria and would probably worry about him hacking into her servers. She's not really a programmer, but she's all about having the best toys for herself possible. She makes things from household applicances to things that can assist ponies in battle (imagine Ironman suits but for ponies - she's getting around to that. She's even making a JARVIS for the pony world. Woot.) 

 

The musician side interets me because Vocal Range came from a family of artists, writers, musicians, etc. Henceforth her name. She doesnt like it though, she's a builder/inventor which is why she left to start a company in the first place. She may be friendly with HackTune and sing with him in a bar or something (who knows? Maybe you can make it where HackTune sounds terrible while drunk cause mostly he autotunes his voice cause dubstep. nothing wrong with that, but still. that could be something.) Thats how they'll meet, and then that might give him an idea to hack into her company for WHATEVER REASON AND SHE'LL BE PISSED OFF. 

 

But see? Not that I'm using your OC. I'm just giving you ideas. Also, if you want to know what Vocal Range looks like - here 

 

 

I also have a musician/singer pony whose name is Ivory Excellence. She's currently not got anyone whose she's interested in romantiacally. But she's actually good family friends with Vocal Range. Imagine, Vocal Range and HackTune (or a pony like Hack) meeting in a bar, maybe getting into a fist fight outside (hoof fight should I say NEIGH) then eventually she meets up with Ivory and finds out they're dating. She'd be pissed. Also finds out Hack is literally hacking into her company. "Your name really does stand for something. Wow. Didnt see that coming. Maybe it was because I WAS DRUNK WHEN YOU SWIPED MY COMPANY'S PASSWORD FROM ME COME HERE YOU LITTLE PIECE OF -" 

 

Oh mai. 

 

Yeah. So. I'm probably never going to use anything like this ever. Because I know who Ivory Excellence is going to end up with actually, but I'm just giving you ideas. You can take the idea that HackTune is actually a programmar/dubstep musician or whatever. That there is actually a busisness pony somewhere in your uinverse/AU that he's trying to hack into and then he somehow befriends? Who knows. Writing is limitless. Do what you want. 

 

BTW here's Ivory (techincally she's already taken. I know who i want her to end up with. I'm just working out the tight spots still.) 

 

 

[HackTune 177]

Update

 

What'd all u guys think?

 

 

Joke : What do you get when you autotune a fart

a dubstep

wub dum tss

Edited November 18, 2015 by HackTune

[Roy 15]

Ooo wow, huge improvement from the first one, awesome job!

[HackTune 177]

updated the photo 
edited actually 
so?

[HackTune 177]

Updated...Again (seems like i can't stay still with one ponysona and kept changin the looks XD)

a lot has changed (since the first)
so any more suggestion?

i need like small detail mistakes e.g (if the head too small/big) something like that

Edited November 24, 2015 by HackTune

[HackTune 177]

why am i keep updating >.<

 

 

 

 

so what d'ya guys think?

[Hazy Skies 1,010]

It's looking awesome

All the changing looks is cool, you don't have to be stuck wearing the same thing all the time

Change it up whenever you feel like it

 

Unless of course something is important to you.. When I make my proper pony OC (unlike my current profile pic)

I plan to add a special necklace which has to do with my lore and stuff..

 

EDIT: Btw, I loved the shading you had going on in the one you showed a few posts up..

This one:

 

EDIT: It'd also be cool to see him in different poses

Edited November 30, 2015 by AURAequine

[HackTune 177]

Thanks @AURAequine
I still have some problems trying to readd the shadings lol
and not enough time.

and also i had a lot of trouble trying to draw him in different pose
got any tips?

[Hazy Skies 1,010]

I had a lot of trouble trying to draw him in different pose

got any tips?

 

Hehe, Not really.. I'm still having trouble making ponies in poses myself

I've gotten good at the sideways pose though.. Here's my "rainbow guide" which i made:

 

 

Hope this helped somehow

I do know that it's easier (at least for me and some others) to draw a good looking using pencil and paper, and then scanning it, using then scan  as a guide to make it digital..

 

EDIT: But technically, the height of this pony in my guide is actually at the size of a mare.. Stallions are bit bigger.. at roughly 3 heads tall..

Edited November 30, 2015 by AURAequine

[HackTune 177]

So i updated (the last one look odd *kinda emotionless)

and i fixed his height (thanks for reminding )

 

 

*how my face look like when i just did something really hard and succeded*

Edited November 30, 2015 by HackTune

[HackTune 177]

Random Random Random Random

Go Below For Updated Drawing With Shading

Random Random Random Random

So here ya go

 

Updated Pic with Shadings 

 

So... I Tried to draw my ponysona playing a guitar
here ya go

 

 

what d'ya guys think

Edited December 4, 2015 by HackTune

[Hazy Skies 1,010]

Random Random Random Random

 

Go Below For Updated Drawing With Shading

 

Random Random Random Random

So here ya go

 

Updated Pic with Shadings 

 

Hacktune PR.png

So... I Tried to draw my ponysona playing a guitar

here ya go

 

Hacktune Guitar.png

 

what d'ya guys think

 

Awesome Love the guitar one

Though his left hoof seems a little flat like

paper with the line coming down a bit too far..

But other than that it looks cool and is shaded well

[HackTune 177]

Fixing mistake one by one
so did i fixed the hoof?

idk

Edited December 5, 2015 by HackTune

[HackTune 177]

what do you think of the new way of shading?

[HackTune 177]

*EVIL LAUGH*

 

 

got any great short quote for caption for this image?

 

it's theme is splited personality, think of it like Jekyll and Hyde