request shop POETRY REQUEST SHOP [OPEN]

[Silver Stream. 708]

Silver Stream's Poetry Shop

[insert clever slogan here]

Welcome to my first shop where you request literary art instead of visual art. Due to the kind suggestion of a friend, I have decided to offer my poetic services to you guys in exchange for a small price: pure satisfaction. I will be creating poetry in relation to your OC's where you'll specify desired tone, theme, and type of poem. If you don't really care HOW I write your poem, more than likely I'll make it a free verse with whatever structure I see fit. Not every poem is required to rhyme, so if it's not specified, each outcome will be different. Along with your request, be sure to link me to your OC's Background or provide a description of what they are like or other details you want me to know so I can integrate them throughout your poem. I will be taking on 7 requests at a time and like many shops, I do have simple rules:

1. Do not nag. Writing poetry isn't a very easy task especially during a stressful era. Depending on how busy my schedule is or my mood, some poems will take longer than others.

2. When the shop is closed, it's CLOSED If you wish to still post your request for in the future, you may but please put them in spoilers to avoid confusion. Simply quote them once it's announced the shop is open again

3. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE let me know if there is something about your poem you don't like. I will do my best to revise them and since I am not good with it, I welcome constructive criticism.

​4. Once your poem is done, you're free to do whatever you want with it as long as you credit the work to me.

5. No extreme NSFW stuff people. I don't mind creating poetry consisting of strong language and mildly gore scenes, but anything beyond that isn't allowed

Examples:

For Lunar Echo

 

I am what I am: The spawn of the Universe loyal to a high horse
A secret solider grounded on earth to serve as an unstoppable force.
A force of nature, skill, and raw power one can only dream to possess
And yet I stand here, my reputation and I, with a secret I must confess

You see: Not every solider who fight looks forward to bloodshed
We don't all like to kill for our ruler and make many rivers run red
Warriors are not barbaric brutes who despise the chance of luxury
I am a prime example: because there is indeed another side to me

A side who enjoys the comfort of pretty silk to hug my frame
Various pins and accessories to hold and complement my mane
I am a connoisseur of a mare's fashion; no rags can compare
I cannot ignore satisfaction of dressing in such elegant wear

This is a guilty pleasure I must bear alone; it's a shame for the reason why:
The moment they discover this truth, many would gasp mortified:
"FOR SHAME?! HOW WEIRD. ARE YOU NOT A PONY OF WAR!?"
Well of course I am! I live to serve! But I still have the right to want more!

Just because I wear something different, doesn't mean I'm unworthy of my place
I stand before you a special being gifted to you from the deepest part of space
I rise with a fury of stars and all things that are unknown beyond your universe!
Did you not swipe me away into your ranks the moment I crashed upon your earth?

So what I am different? I am what I am and everything I live to fight for!
Sworn the this sword of light while wearing clothes I'm now proud to adore
So laugh if you will! Whisper your lies...I'll proceed to live MY life and conquer
I will no longer live a secret...because from this point on I can only grow stronger

For Prophet

Stepping into the room welcomed with a scene I could only guess was my heaven

A small round table for two decorated with fine china, prestige utensils, and assorted treats
Tea, my golden nectar and one true master placed at the center; who could deny it's presence?
Warmth not even my sweater could create would fill my body; only tea could gift me this heat

 

Tea Tea Tea...my savior, my obsession, my beginning

 

My lifeline! Fill my desires to forever serve you! All I ask is one cup of you
Your flavor doesn't matter; chamomile, green, oolong , white, or dark
"One cup is all I need" And with these thoughts I sit at the table for two
It matters not who will accompany me. I have no other being this close to my heart

 

Tea Tea Tea...my savior, my obsession, my beginning

 

My guide! Shall we begin? Step forth whoever you are, I'm ready to drink!
With a joyous smile I witness a dark figure appear before me; gold eyes like mine
With a swift nod, I reach for my cup...and so did the host as if we were in sync
Breathing a spell, I levitate the teapot and proceed to pour my world like wine

 

Tea Tea Tea...my savior, my obsession, my beginning

 

With both our cups full, I tip my mine waiting to taste what my god had to offer
But I taste nothing but a burning fire full of rot and bitter betrayal
Why? My host seems to be enjoying himself...seemingly happy as I suffer
He matches my movements radiating joy while I bleed a painful battle
I realize I sit in front a mirror staring at a reflection I will forever envy
Just me and my tea party. Forced to choke with distaste while my reflection does well
Did I displease you my lord? Is this a punishment? To drink this rot of plenty?
Ah..I understand and accept that what I thought was my heaven will forever be my hell

 

Tea Tea Tea...my judge, my addiction, my end

(More examples of my poetry are in the link within my signature and under the completed list.Take a look!)

SLOTS:

Wave 2:

1. Flutterfly761

2. Hibiscus Boom

3. Inspector VinylWubs

4. Stormlight

5.

6.

7.

(completed requests)

1. Shadow Strike

The warm rays of the Sun beaming on your sleek fur;
Compiled sound of crashing waves and singing seagulls
The peaceful scenery makes good thoughts within you stir
And the confident knowledge that the world is free from evil
Fine granulated white sand beneath hooves soaked by the sea
Your significant other pressed close as you bask in the moment
Happiness fills you as you internally scream "I'm free!"
This alone is your communication; no words needed to be spoken

Your paradise is a fantasy

The night sky decorated with speckled white lights and a full moon
Shadows hugging my frame as I breath in the cold crisp air
Life sworn to ensure those I love are safe from uncertain doom
Shoulders heavy with a responsibility no stallion or mare should bear
Basking in dark chilly nights with a sword of eternal ice and heart of fire
Unknown enemies, dark memories, and one brother left to remember me
His happiness and serving my princess of the night are my only desires
And I bear these desires alone; carrying them with extreme expectancy

My paradise is my reality

2. EnzoAquila

COME IN! COME IN!
And welcome to the Inn of dreams and satisfaction!
Where heartache isn't allowed but more so your joyous reactions!
I bring exceptional service to make your stay worth your while
Because nothing is better than a wondrous uplifting lifestyle

Just trot right in here and forget that huge load that you carry
I'll take good care of your things, there's no need to be weary
OH! My pleasure to meet your every demand. good pony
All I ask from you is to enjoy yourself and get cozy!

CHECK IN! CHECK IN!
And take this key to the room I know you'll adore
I am certain this is a paradise you've yet to explore!
Here! Drink a hot cup of cider to put your mind right at ease
I'm just a jolly old pony with a purpose to please!

And though your stay here is more temporary
You'll leave with a mindset my Inn is legendary
We have hoof-stomping dances to get those hips shaking!
And beautiful scenery that's simply breathtaking
With drinks of plenty that I shamelessly will indulge in
And a toilet that backs up every now and then (hehe)

BUT so what, I pride my Inn with all it's imperfections
And it's here where many ponies learn powerful lessons:
Life is too short to waste it with war, stress and hate
I was victim to that once, but broke free from that fate
Plus Ironbreak and I will ensure you a safe vacation
He's my trusty old buddy who never abandons his station!

ENJOY! ENJOY!
Go mingle with the others who seek peace as well
Let my Inn be your heaven to escape other hells
Ah how joy feels my heart when I see smiles on your faces
Oh no worries for payment, just accept my good graces
I see how you bounce like a filly so eager!

I welcome you wholeheartedly as your fellow Innkeeper!

3. Flearia

"Knowledge is power"

A common phrase used by the typical idealist with flawed logic

How ironic,

that I as an intellectual being oppose this theory

Is it not the knowledge I obtain that strengthens the magic with me?

And what of this magic within me that "credits" the Knowledge I gain?

HA! As if I'd measure my power based off of the size of my brain

How insane!

Tell me my fellow colleagues as studious as I,

In what way does knowledge make me more powerful than the next guy

Of course, we would not see eye to eye, but why?

My vast knowledge of a spell would surely surpass his skills would it not?

No, it would not. For this simple minded fellow trained in ways quite silly

Inspired by folk tales and myths, driven by faith and "what ifs"

And the journeys he took! This stallion gained knowledge we could not give!

How impressive

Is this thought that larger minds are on par with essential simpletons

You see, I know of the benefits every page has to offer

That some words hold secrets one might never uncover otherwise

Indeed, knowledge is quite the tool to have over a common fool

But the common fool has gained what some scholars will never find:

And that's the journey and experience gained to stimulate the mind

How powerful

is that mind as well as mine! And with this in mind, I'll study abroad

Books as my inspiration, but my heart as my compass

For you see, Knowledge is not the source of power to an extent

It's the journey to obtain and use it.

And though I'm the last pony you'd imagine to have a head in the clouds

Where focus is a struggle, and physique "weak"

My ability to appreciate the lesser intellectual surpasses your inability to

I not only gain knowledge, but I engage in it to create spell brand new

And it's because of this, that makes me more powerful than you

4. Artemis Whooves

See, I'm what you would call a perfectionist; I strive to create the perfect toy
The fresh smiles of fillies and colts is the source of this toy maker's joy

Each toy I create is created with excellence; my hooves are careful and swift
Since the age of six, I knew I was made for this! Born to create the perfect gift

Here and now, I work on this doll that a sweet little filly could not afford to buy
She stood at my window gazing at my creations with a sad longing in her eyes

A good pony informed me her name was Kate; she was only the age of eight
Never got what she wanted due to her family's poor living state.

I work with precision to ensure young Kate receives a gift from the best
Silk ruffles the color of her ice blue eyes would do nicely on the doll's dress

Got to stitch with finesse! This snowflake pattern shall be a wonderful addition
Jade buttons, some stuffing, and white hair for the mane the must be in perfect condition

Her gift shall be beautiful! Each color must complement one another
I'll even ask a good unicorn to cast a spell to ensure her gift will last forever

Oh, I must not take forever! Maybe a final tweak with the stitching
Tail full, mane styled, dress worn, doll stuffed. What more needs some fixing?

THERE! It's perfect! But not because of it's appearance as the perfect "plaything"

It's perfect because it's for a special filly and the smile my creation will bring

5. PyroShark

The Mandarian orange alicorn raced through the sky with a heart set to one destination

strong winds carry him faster; no cloud blinding his way

His presence a blur as he soars with a speed that exceeds any pony's flying expectation

would you believe it's all because of the games he would play?

Yes all for the game. This stallion lives for flight and the thrill of the cyber sport

No pony can best him in either, his skills are unbeatable

His game level too astounding to reach as he conquer the skies claimed as his resort

what better place to visit frequently to feel invincible?

"I'm unstoppable!" he cries; boisterous voice piercing the chilly air

Fly faster good prince of the skies! No time to lose

This Wiz of a kid flaps harder for home in order to start his gaming affair

almost there! He's ready to engage with his wonderful muse

Don't underestimate him; there's a reason he was sworn to this thrill he must fulfill

One would think such talents were a waste of time

To fly with a fury is as important as the next talent! And gaming requires unfathomable skill

This alicorn is a natural. Nopony can compare when he's in his prime

6. Summer Breeze

Freedom isn't free; At one point it was barely available for me
Grounded by the chains of caution and driven by a wondrous dream:
A life bright with sunlight and an adrenaline rush as I take flight
Instead, I'm here protected by a father's love and a life he must oversee

Freedom isn't free; My mother had to give up a family to buy hers
Leaving us alone and bewildered as she pursued whatever life she preferred
How could she depart for a fresh start but leave us both with shattered hearts?
I learned fast to accept the truth and move on from the departure that occurred

Freedom isn't free; Truth is, the price will only increase higher and higher
Through time the bond with my father dwindled because of our different desires
We didn't see eye to eye; I yearned for the skies while he feared future goodbyes
Such an intelligent guy incapable of accepting the risks my freedom would acquire

Freedom isn't free; But the time has come to pay the ultimate price
To escape this sheltered love and go live! My grandma's place should suffice
And the price for this mission is being in a position where I'll never be forgiven
Because my departure will lead to his shock and a heart that will break twice

BUT I AM TIRED OF THIS FIGHT! With this loss, I will gain
There's a life full of "what ifs" out there that's calling my name!
Must pay this price if I am to live my own life and take it with strife
It's time to take flight and look forward with the wind in my mane

Freedom isn't free; But that doesn't stop me from possessing it by spirit
I will take advantage of this new life with it's consequences and benefits
Once I'm at this sweet cottage surrounded by beauty, I shall gain irreplaceable knowledge

And experience this paid freedom my father never had a chance to get

7. Drago Ryder

You stand with a commanding presence and eyes hard with a purpose

Head held with pride and a stance mightier than those lined beside you

Such an impressive first impression but is there more beneath that surface?

What's hidden inside that powerful physique; what makes you a special recruit?

There's more to standing still and giving salutes. This sanction require leaders

Real soldiers with hearts of fire and armored with both brain and brawn

You protect without payment; there's no room for princely praise seekers

Be a storm! A raging force that our Princess of the night can depend on

Face danger with a fury and serve as if you have everything to lose!

Attack the threat and bring forth all your power to keep this kingdom safe

Bravery, diligence, loyalty, strength, and intellectual skill are your tools to use

Train hard great stallion; For I sense becoming her highness royal guard is your fate

Edited January 21, 2016 by Silver Stream.

[Night Shadow/Daw 170]

Hmm, this seems interesting....

 

I would like you to make one of my OC, Night if possible.

 

I have no requirements, thanks in advance, friend.

 

OC: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/night-shadow-r8979

Edited January 10, 2016 by Shadow Strike

[Silver Stream. 708]

Hmm, this seems interesting....

 

I would like you to make one of my OC, Night if possible.

 

I have no requirements, thanks in advance, friend.

 

OC: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/night-shadow-r8979

 

 

Adding to the list! The shop is now officially open. Feel free to look at examples. After a few more requests, I'll get started on them c:

[Guest]

@@Silver Stream., 

 

I'll make a request with a poem about Inn Keep ( in my sig ). 

 

He's an inn keeper with a big heart.

 

Make a poem about another night at the inn, where ponies from all walks of life gather to enjoy themselves, please. I don't really mind if you don't follow this, though. Go hog wild!

Edited January 11, 2016 by Guest

[Flearia Dragondanser 918]

Could you maybe make one of my OC Flearia Dragondanser?

 

She is a bookworm that loves learning and magic while making her own uses of spells. She is also kind of light headed about her surrounding when she is focused.

Edited January 11, 2016 by Flearia

[Artimis Whooves 1,576]

Could you write on about my OC making a toy?

(link in my sig)

Edited January 11, 2016 by Artimis Whooves

[pyroshark 19]

Could you do mine?

 

Male Alicorn

Cutie-Mark W-A-S-D

Name: Wasd-Wiz

what he looks like:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B_6lJqwD51q7cG9ncURhQ3dJbTg

What he enjoys: flying and computer games.

[Silver Stream. 708]

Alrighty!!! Added you guys up <3 

 

After two more, or if I don't get anymore within the next hour or so.....I'll start these today!

[Summer Breeze 2,528]

I'd love to have a poem about summer and how she loves to fly and make soft breezes and flowers, here is a link to her page

https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/summer-breeze-r8974

[Silver Stream. 708]

@Summer Breeze

 

Added! I'll start working on these now

[Drago Ryder 641]

Hmmm, it would be interesting to see a poem on Tempest. The link to his character is in my signature.

[NullAccount 287]

I see there is one slot left so I'll just hope no one takes it first.

 

https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jonagold-r8702

 

That is my OC. I don't mind what structure or rythm it is though. Thanks!

[Hibiscus Bloom 91]

 

It seems someone beat me to the last spot, but I would love a poem based on my OC Elixir when you open again! There is a link to his page in my signature. I don't have any preferences when it comes to structure etc

 

Edited January 11, 2016 by Hibiscus Bloom

[Silver Stream. 708]

Hmm, this seems interesting....

 

I would like you to make one of my OC, Night if possible.

 

I have no requirements, thanks in advance, friend.

 

OC: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/night-shadow-r8979

 

Alright first one done. Please let me know if you want another one. Apologies it's a bit short compared to others, but your OC doesn't seem like the chatty type anyway. Basically I created something where he describes his own paradise compared to the fantasy of others. Hope you like it:

 

The warm rays of the Sun beaming on your sleek fur;

Compiled sound of crashing waves and singing seagulls

The peaceful scenery makes good thoughts within you stir 

And the confident knowledge that the world is free from evil

Fine granulated white sand beneath hooves soaked by the sea

Your significant other pressed close as you bask in the moment

Happiness fills you as you internally scream "I'm free!"

This alone is your communication; no words needed to be spoken

 

Your paradise is a fantasy

 

The night sky decorated with speckled white lights and a full moon

Shadows hugging my frame as I breath in the cold crisp air 

Life sworn to ensure those I love are safe from uncertain doom

Shoulders heavy with a responsibility no stallion or mare should bear 

Basking in dark chilly nights with a sword of eternal ice and heart of fire

Unknown enemies, dark memories, and one brother left to remember me

His happiness and serving my princess of the night are my only desires

And I bear these desires alone; carrying them with extreme expectancy

 

My paradise is my reality

Drago is added!

 

@FlutterFly761 sorry it's closed until I finish the orders. But I'll add you for the next wave

 

@Hibiscus Bloom  Thanks you so much for abiding by the rules c: I'll definitely add you to the next wave once I'm done with the others 

 

@@Silver Stream., 

 

I'll make a request with a poem about Inn Keep ( in my sig ). 

 

He's an inn keeper with a big heart.

 

Make a poem about another night at the inn, where ponies from all walks of life gather to enjoy themselves, please. I don't really mind if you don't follow this, though. Go hog wild!

 

I hope you like this. It was a bit difficult since I don't make a lot of "happy go lucky" poetry. But it got easier the more I wrote. Inn Keep is s adorable and I imagine him in this Broadway play as some jolly optimistic Innkeeper who breaks out in song xDD. And that was pretty much my inspiration to write this: 

 

COME IN! COME IN! 

And welcome to the Inn of dreams and satisfaction!

Where heartache isn't allowed but more so your joyous reactions!

I bring exceptional service to make your stay worth your while

Because nothing is better than a wondrous uplifting lifestyle

 

Just trot right in here and forget that huge load that you carry

I'll take good care of your things, there's no need to be weary

OH! My pleasure to meet your every demand. good pony

All I ask from you is to enjoy yourself and get cozy!

 

CHECK IN! CHECK IN!

And take this key to the room I know you'll adore

I am certain this is a paradise you've yet to explore!

Here! Drink a hot cup of cider to put your mind right at ease

I'm just a jolly old pony with a purpose to please! 

 

And though your stay here is more temporary

You'll leave with a mindset my Inn is legendary 

We have hoof-stomping dances to get those hips shaking!

And beautiful scenery that's simply breathtaking

With drinks of plenty that I shamelessly will indulge in 

And a toilet that backs up every now and then (hehe)

 

BUT so what, I pride my Inn with all it's imperfections

And it's here where many ponies learn powerful lessons:

Life is too short to waste it with war, stress and hate

I was victim to that once, but broke free from that fate

Plus Ironbreak and I will ensure you a safe vacation 

He's my trusty old buddy who never abandons his station!

 

ENJOY! ENJOY!

Go mingle with the others who seek peace as well

Let my Inn be your heaven to escape other hells

Ah how joy feels my heart when I see smiles on your faces

Oh no worries for payment, just accept my good graces

I see how you bounce like a filly so eager!

I welcome you wholeheartedly as your fellow Innkeeper!

 

 

 

please let me know what you want changed or you simply want a brand new one. 

Edited January 11, 2016 by Silver Stream.

[Guest]

Thanks a bunch, silver stream XD

 

I understand what you mean by this being a Broadway play, this reminds me of a scene from a Disney musical

[Silver Stream. 708]

Thanks a bunch, silver stream XD

 

I understand what you mean by this being a Broadway play, this reminds me of a scene from a Disney musical

 

No problem. But if need it revised, let me know. I went a into a musical holly direction with him on impulse but if it's something you don't like, I can do it another way

[NullAccount 287]

@FlutterFly761 sorry it's closed until I finish the orders. But I'll add you for the next wave

 

Sorry about that. When I posted it said open and there was a slot available, but I didn't realize that someone else had posted before you could update it. I also don't know how to put something as a spoiler. Sorry!

[Silver Stream. 708]

Sorry about that. When I posted it said open and there was a slot available, but I didn't realize that someone else had posted before you could update it. I also don't know how to put something as a spoiler. Sorry!

 

 

You're fine hun! c: You'll still have a spot for the next round no worries.

 

 

And a tip on how to do spoilers. Simply use the code  "(spoiler) TEXT HERE (/spoiler)"

 

instead of using parentheses, you use brackets  

 

 

 

and in place of "TEXT HERE" you can put anything and once submitted, it'll be in a spoiler

Edited January 11, 2016 by Silver Stream.

[Guest]

No no, it'sgreat the way it is, Silver is it ok if I move the poem toa googled of so that I can link the poem to Inn Keep's character page?

[Silver Stream. 708]

No no, it'sgreat the way it is, Silver is it ok if I move the poem toa googled of so that I can link the poem to Inn Keep's character page?

 

Sure thing. The poem is yours, so you're free to do whatever with it as long as t's properly credited c:

[Night Shadow/Daw 170]

Silver! Goodness, Its beautiful! I love it!

 

How do you do this?! 

 

Anyway, its good as it is, thanks you, it broke what ever expectations that were there before. Its simply awesome! 

[Silver Stream. 708]

Could you maybe make one of my OC Flearia Dragondanser?

 

She is a bookworm that loves learning and magic while making her own uses of spells. She is also kind of light headed about her surrounding when she is focused.

 

 

Sorry this took long. Actually.....this really didn't take long at all. I just had to take a break after the last two and took a long nap. After waking up, I got started on yours with a well rested mind. Basically, your OC is speaking with a colleague. This poem is meant to be like a "spoken word"....where she recites this with confidence. The flow is well paced when recited right. I imagine your OC saying this in a way that I can truly appreciate her. Hope you like it.

 

BUT!! If it's something you don't think will fit her, please tell me. From how she is described, she is a super intelligent klutz, but has hidden potential. If she was ever offended by someone or was ever pushed to come out of her shell, this is how I'd imagine it'll go. If you want it changed in a more passive direction, I will be happy to do it!

 

"Knowledge is power" 

A common phrase used by the typical idealist with flawed logic

How ironic,

that I as an intellectual being oppose this theory 

Is it not the knowledge I obtain that strengthens the magic with me?

And what of this magic within me that "credits" the Knowledge I gain?

HA! As if I'd measure my power based off of the size of my brain

How insane!

Tell me my fellow colleagues as studious as I,

In what way does knowledge make me more powerful than the next guy

Of course, we would not see eye to eye, but why?

My vast knowledge of a spell would surely surpass his skills would it not?

No, it would not. For this simple minded fellow trained in ways quite silly

Inspired by folk tales and myths, driven by faith and "what ifs"

And the journeys he took! This stallion gained knowledge we could not give!

How impressive

Is this thought that larger minds are on par with essential simpletons

You see, I know of the benefits every page has to offer

That some words hold secrets one might never uncover otherwise

Indeed, knowledge is quite the tool to have over a common fool

But the common fool has gained what some scholars will never find:

And that's the journey and experience gained to stimulate the mind

How powerful

is that mind as well as mine! And with this in mind, I'll study abroad 

Books as my inspiration, but my heart as my compass

For you see, Knowledge is not the source of power to an extent

It's the journey to obtain and use it.

And though I'm the last pony you'd imagine to have a head in the clouds

Where focus is a struggle, and physique "weak"

My ability to appreciate the lesser intellectual surpasses your inability to 

I not only gain knowledge, but I engage in it to create spell brand new

And it's because of this, that makes me more powerful than you

 

Could you write on about my OC making a toy?

(link in my sig)

 

There you go! This was a bit difficult. I wanted to integrate your OC's purpose for making a toy and give it a heartwarming meaning. Toy making is an art, but it's not the toy that makes it perfect, it's the joy it gives others right? Plus, after reading up on your OC, that seems to be the goal anyway c: But please let me know if you don't like it and want it longer/shorter/revised completely. To be honest, there was another direction I could have went with this. Where it was focused on the detail of how a toy was made. I could still revise this to where it focuses more on a detailed description of making a toy rather than the story and reason about making the toy. Here ya go:

 

 

See, I'm what you would call a perfectionist; I strive to create the perfect toy

The fresh smiles of fillies and colts is the source of this toy maker's joy

 

Each toy I create is created with excellence; my hooves are careful and swift

Since the age of six, I knew I was made for this! Born to create the perfect gift

 

Here and now, I work on this doll that a sweet little filly could not afford to buy

She stood at my window gazing at my creations with a sad longing in her eyes

 

A good pony informed me her name was Kate; she was only the age of eight

Never got what she wanted due to her family's poor living state. 

 

I work with precision to ensure young Kate receives a gift from the best

Silk ruffles the color of her ice blue eyes would do nicely on the doll's dress 

 

Got to stitch with finesse! This snowflake pattern shall be a wonderful addition

Jade buttons, some stuffing, and white hair for the mane the must be in perfect condition 

 

Her gift shall be beautiful! Each color must complement one another 

I'll even ask a good unicorn to cast a spell to ensure her gift will last forever

 

Oh, I must not take forever! Maybe a final tweak with the stitching 

Tail full, mane styled, dress worn, doll stuffed. What more needs some fixing?

 

THERE! It's perfect! But not because of it's appearance as the perfect "plaything"

It's perfect because it's for a special filly and the smile my creation will bring

Edited January 14, 2016 by Silver Stream.

[Artimis Whooves 1,576]

 

 

There you go! This was a bit difficult. I wanted to integrate your OC's purpose for making a toy and give it a heartwarming meaning. Toy making is an art, but it's not the toy that makes it perfect, it's the joy it gives others right? Plus, after reading up on your OC, that seems to be the goal anyway c: But please let me know if you don't like it and want it longer/shorter/revised completely. To be honest, there was another direction I could have went with this. Where it was focused on the detail of how a toy was made. I could still revise this to where it focuses more on a detailed description of making a toy rather than the story and reason about making the toy. Here ya go:

I love it!   You had my OC perfect!

[Silver Stream. 708]

Could you do mine?

 

Male Alicorn

Cutie-Mark W-A-S-D

Name: Wasd-Wiz

what he looks like:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B_6lJqwD51q7cG9ncURhQ3dJbTg

What he enjoys: flying and computer games.

 

Okay so this was REALLY REALLY short. And I truly apologize if it's not what you expected or hoped for. But honestly? I was given very little to work with     Most of what I know is what you gave me which was his appearance and the brief fact of him enjoying flying and computer games. I had no backstory or personality to use when creating this.  So basically it's a short thrill of a poem about your OC racing through the skies so he can play his games. I tried to incorporate that what he enjoys requires good values? I could have went wild with my imagination and shape your OC myself that way I'd have more to work with, but I feel as though I would have been overstepping my bounds.  Now if you don't like this poem, I'll be more than happy to work harder on it and extend it to your liking. I completely understand that this poem seems to a have a forced flow and you was hoping for something...more xD  But for the moment, this is what I have: 

 

 

The Mandarian orange alicorn raced through the sky with a heart set to one destination

strong winds carry him faster; no cloud blinding his way

 

His presence a blur as he soars with a speed that exceeds any pony's flying expectation

would you believe it's all because of the games he would play?

 

Yes all for the game. This stallion lives for flight and the thrill of the cyber sport

No pony can best him in either, his skills are unbeatable

 

His game level too astounding to reach as he conquer the skies claimed as his resort

what better place to visit frequently to feel invincible?

 

"I'm unstoppable!" he cries; boisterous voice piercing the chilly air

Fly faster good prince of the skies! No time to lose

 

This Wiz of a kid flaps harder for home in order to start his gaming affair

almost there! He's ready to engage with his wonderful muse

 

Don't underestimate him; there's a reason he was sworn to this thrill he must fulfill

One would think such talents were a waste of time

 

To fly with a fury is as important as the next talent! And gaming requires unfathomable skill

This alicorn is a natural. Nopony can compare when he's in his prime

Edited January 12, 2016 by Silver Stream.

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Okay so this was REALLY REALLY short. And I truly apologize if it's not what you expected or hoped for. But honestly? I was given very little to work with     Most of what I know is what you gave me which was his appearance and the brief fact of him enjoying flying and computer games. I had no backstory or personality to use when creating this.  So basically it's a short thrill of a poem about your OC racing through the skies so he can play his games. I tried to incorporate that what he enjoys requires good values? I could have went wild with my imagination and shape your OC myself that way I'd have more to work with, but I feel as though I would have been overstepping my bounds.  Now if you don't like this poem, I'll be more than happy to work harder on it and extend it to your liking. I completely understand that this poem seems to a have a forced flow and you was hoping for something...more xD  But for the moment, this is what I have: 

 

 

The Mandarian orange alicorn raced through the sky with a heart set to one destination

strong winds carry him faster; no cloud blinding his way

 

His presence a blur as he soars with a speed that exceeds any pony's flying expectation

would you believe it's all because of the games he would play?

 

Yes all for the game. This stallion lives for flight and the thrill of the cyber sport

No pony can best him in either, his skills are unbeatable

 

His game level too astounding to reach as he conquer the skies claimed as his resort

what better place to visit frequently to feel invincible?

 

"I'm unstoppable!" he cries; boisterous voice piercing the chilly air

Fly faster good prince of the skies! No time to lose

 

This Wiz of a kid flaps harder for home in order to start his gaming affair

almost there! He's ready to engage with his wonderful muse

 

Don't underestimate him; there's a reason he was sworn to this thrill he must fulfill

One would think such talents were a waste of time

 

To fly with a fury is as important as the next talent! And gaming requires unfathomable skill

This alicorn is a natural. Nopony can compare when he's in his prime

Its Amazing! thank you! can i put it in my sig?