critique wanted Tips on the setup for my youtube videos?

[Umbryft Flight 2]

I recently made a video called Funniest Moments of MLP Season 1 Episode 1 because I wanted to be more of a part of the fandom. But while I was creating it I felt like my setup was a bit choppy. 
First I had to play through the episode to find a clip, watch the clip, rewind to the start, think of something to say, click record, say it, and play the clip. I felt like I had done a really bad job on the video. Anypony got any ideas? Here the link if you need it 

[Jest (Inactive) 875]

Way to choppy, the sequences of the clips don't make much sense and some are cut off too soon, the random voice overs you do is extremely loud and kinda out of place, try adding some transition effects in even if it is just like basic wipes or something x)